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WEEK 4: Sharp 2-1 VS Adverse 2-1 ADVERSE WINS VIA NS / OPEN FOR FEED
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 29, 2020 (Thursday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________ |
Hey bud
what are you thinking? 10-12? |
12s fine with me bro
@Zuch I’m 2-1 aren’t I? |
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swear to god if you have a verse about me losing a 1-2 battle 8 years ago its HANDS
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Guess that’s the music teacher in dude, always finding a way to work accordion And your occupation ironic, but don’t worry I’ll take it right off ya hands Waving that stick, then the drum bang like I’M the one conductin’ a band Come on dog...I’ll make Shar Pei with this ammo tear this faggot apart How you gon’ take the bite of a real beast When u barely handlin’ BARC? Oh joy had to step into the gauntlet with the fucking Hobbit, I’m shaking Hella short so this 9 ain’t gotta climb to get to that 5 feat till I take your spot in the rankings This dude ain’t getting pussy. Sex game is truthfully trash Last girl you seen have sharpener pulled one out n used it in class Is it lofi insult your beats? Can’t help it I just hate your music They all saying Sharp finally hit his stride..and it only took over a decade to do it |
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Drop some feed for my boy Adverse
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Didn’t like the opener, closer seemed like a throwaway.
Rest of verse I fuck with though. Nicely done man. This would have been close. |
Sharp in her was clever
But this wasn’t ur best work bro |
Sharpener was a heater. Good verse ad.
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accordion was kind of a reach but i thought it was clever. conductor was cool. sharpener was cool too. overall I thought it was a decent drop
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Conductor and Sharpener were nice. I think Sharp folds under the pressure put on him by Zuch.
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Sorry again bro. I had a good excuse for Thursday itself but not for putting it off.
You’re on Corleone’s dick bruh, u “busy” but got time to reply to every post from him Guess that’s the music teacher in dude, always finding a way to work accordion I don't get it. I admire what you're going for... I think. Accord he on? Accord in doesn't work because of the extra syllable And your occupation ironic, but don’t worry I’ll take it right off ya hands Waving that stick, then the drum bang like I’M the one conductin’ a band clever. Cool take on it. The Mac will spit. Not in love with the wording on the punchline but it's a relevant personal. Come on dog...I’ll make Shar Pei with this ammo tear this faggot apart How you gon’ take the bite of a real beast When u barely handlin’ BARC? speaking for barc, barc/bark has been done a lot. Especially considering his history, bark/bite has been explored heavily. I see the tie ins in the setup bit with a predictable flip it's a little overkill, but that's just my opinion since I've seen too many bark flips. It's a good personal though and that saves it from being a miss. 'When' being capitalized is odd Oh joy had to step into the gauntlet with the fucking Hobbit, I’m shaking Hella short so this 9 ain’t gotta climb to get to that 5 feat till I take your spot in the rankings I don't think I've seen 'short' as an angle against me tbh. Not that I'm particularly tall, js. I'm not particularly feeling the wording here. Feels like you're doing more technically than throwing the punch. 'oh joy' at the beginning feels clunky since this is middle of thr verse This dude ain’t getting pussy. Sex game is truthfully trash Last girl you seen have sharpener pulled one out n used it in class ha. Cool. 'have sharpener' doesn't work grammatically both ways but you worded this one well. Def better to make it slightly grammatically incorrect. Probably your best bar Is it lofi insult your beats? Can’t help it I just hate your music They all saying Sharp finally hit his stride..and it only took over a decade to do it unless I'm missing something this is bland and a little confusing to me. It being bad is directly contradicted by me hitting my stride. Punch itself is a statement, which just leaves me disappointed after all the buildup. This should be meaner and it's a KO. I got thorough because it's the very least I can do. Def had solid punches in sharpener and conductor but there's some little things that hold this verse back. |
Work a Cor d in?
As in a Corleone dick? Omg no, bad concept Waving the stick/drum bang was fire tho. Sharpener was ok |
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