WEEK 4: iSpaz 1-1 VS Blue Bayou 3-0 BLUE BAYOU WINS
 

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10?

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

spaz:

Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.

Really was your strongest bar to me, showcased the creativity and you dissed him. Your opener, it was cool from a rhyming standpoint, but its very statement-ish. you didnt actually hit him with anything. Twister was cool, not maybe fully quote-worthy, because I've seen a variation of it, but it was a solid jab. Mermaid line was kinda the weakest of the bunch, the multi to the rhyme was off and the concept in general fell a bit flat. Closer was ok, a step slightly above the opener. You've got some good pieces here, conceptually, nothing here was flat out bad... just have to put everything together a bit better next time.


blue:

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

Opener was full of swag, faggot line was funny, closer was fire.

Well done gentlemen, this was a good read.

V - Blue

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Nice
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
Like this
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
Lmao this is fire
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
Not sure on this
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.
Like what you did but the concept is really old. Nice verse though



yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
Lol fuck u
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
Dope
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
Nice
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
Ok
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you
Lmao

Nice battle here ispaz impressed me and twister bar was hilarious to me. Unfortunately fell off slightly at the end. Blue was solid throughout and nicely worded.

Vote - blue

ISpaz was nice with it, I like his style and he’s dropping consistently well. Stand outs were the Easter egg and the Twister bar

Blue’s nonchalant swag-filled verse was very good. Pretty effortless. I liked everything except from the wallet keys etc line. Apple line was funny and so was the opener

I have Blue here

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.

this was a good opener

Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.

nah i wasnt feeling this one, the wording needs work

Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.

this is ight but ive seen nearly identical bars before

^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.

nah this was kinda corny

Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.

this is ok but not original



yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me

not feeling it

i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot

this was funny

you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life

ok, wording's slick

i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you

eh i like the idea more than the bar

parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

set-up could've been cleaner but this was cool



blue had more fresh concepts and his wording was far better. spaz started out decent with the opener but the rest didnt live up to the hype

v/ blue

This was close. Ispaz worded his verse well. Concepts were pretty good, but not excellent. Just a fairly solid, well executed verse.

Blue’s first four were really well done. Simple, but lots of swagger. Then, IMO, he fell off a little bit. I think his last six were essentially a tie with Ispaz’s... but, his first four were enough to give him the nod.

Cool little battle. Blue wins.

Ispaz

Twister was cool

Blue

Votes cool
Apple cool
Take from you and parent company were solid enough

Blue takes this comfortably for me but I can see iSpaz being dope with some more creativity. Wording’s pretty much already there

Vote blue

Blue first four were fire. Rest was solid at worst.

Ispaz was really consistent but just didn’t have anything on the same level as Blue’s standouts.


Vote blue

Easter egg was good

Apple was hilarious lotb
Blue won without trying much

V/bb

Vote - Blue

thought Spaz was decent, for what it's worth.

Blue - vote more was cute, ispaz was oddly funny, giving ya doll pokes was lotb.

Ispaz- Easter egg cool, twister almost but too predictable


Blue won this good battle

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
nah
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
nah bruh
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
lol aight
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
to simple, coul've been dope
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures
played fasho

vs

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
jokes
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
lol I fuck w/ it
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
nah
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
aight
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you
didn't like it

Decent lil battle here. I fuck with Blue's verse more here even tho I know he dropped lighttt. iSpaz jus came a bit to basic this time around for me.

V/ - Blue Bayou

Ispaz has a concept of what battling is but he’s either returning after a long time or just starting off because he’s using old concepts like twister and mermaid stuff like that, I don’t think any of these bars hit too hard. Keep battling and trying to get personal, stuff like Easter egg had a good reference but I don’t think they quite connected all the way.

Blue came in like Deku with like a 10% Detroit Smash. Bars were cool but not up to your usual standard you seen an opportunity to take it easy this week. First two bars were really all that hit but was all you needed

Blue did his usual thing, Spazz keep studying

V/BB

Spaz

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.

Decent verse man, i feel like more of your ideas could've hit with better wording


Blue

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

Fire verse, everything hit..and that iSpaz/Apple shit was likely line of the week
Very impressive

Voting Blue Bayou