10.16.20
 

Was that a misclick? Write sick shit. Always up to mischief.
Tote the biscuit. You’re a dipshit, with lipstick.
Smokin’ indo. You’re a bimbo. You’re in limbo. Slice like Kimbo.
I’m ancient. Explain my greatness. Explain how I shape-shift. Every rhyme is simply makeshift.
Tongue twistin’ like you ate shit. And ain’t shit.
Yo I don’t fake it. This loss you’re gonna HAVE to take it.
Back to basics, cut the track.
What the fuck was that? 1 take. Like I was up to bat.
Tote the gat. Squeeze the nina. Iceman. Store the body in a freezah.
Cleaning up the blood is for the housekeeper.
I CAN be meaner.
Kidnap your dope boy runners call me the street sweeper.
Sellin’ E & H, Sellin’ the trees & shake.
Oh what a day the lovely seasons make.
Let the bass make your body quake.
It’s a holiday, get to the bars & clubs with the molly mang.

I liked it. You seem to have a good structure. The first half flowed very smooth. Nice man.

Illest rhyme your ever spit
Slick lines

raw

Listen kid... im angry like seclusion patients
I read ya verse, my time was wasted, electricity 400 kilowats wasted
I'm going platnum off this text shit
Tell the mods I cil people, I need to be encarcerated
I live my life lonely, I don't like to play wit kids
so I spit these bars at the Pharoahs Army
you shouldn't of ualked through uen the waters split like Moses
I should be in Leviticus, Dimand da Sorcer

....listen kid I pay rent, utilities , im on SNAP food card.
I need my money.

tough in places - sophomoric in others.

the good outweighed the bad, though.

solid overall.

Thanks. Just a free focused on the rhyming. Subject matter of murder and drugs is sophomoric but I wasn't trying for anything deep. Glad to see you can judge each piece individually.

my bad, that was a typo on my Eng account

i meant to say this was garbage juice

didnt read past write sick shit

@Pharaohs Army
YOU WANNA EVER ... You wanna ever come back buddy yeah Polish Up ur ShitFEed wonderboy
This how you @effiency. ,, THIS guy only back if Staff keep in line? na PA u good just fix