WEEK 3: Mac 1-1 VS Adverse 1-1 ADVERSE WINS
 

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Verses due 11:59pm EST October 20, 2020 (Tuesday)

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Good luck, gentlemen
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yoo.. good luck my man.. 10 is plenty

Good luck to you too sir

Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those?
I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed
Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed
The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset
Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck
And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez

@Mac where you at?

extendo pls

do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention
so clearly that marriage has a conflict
his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped
have her stripped then ill fuck her with power
she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower
lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs
ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum
anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room

Adverse

Body and hard reset were the standouts. The rest was lack lustre to me

Mac

Nothing on par with ads standouts

I gotta say.. Mac, I’ve seen you come better but lately you’ve seemed off the pace or like you’re not putting much effort in.

Vote Ad

The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

vs

not feeling much

v/adverse. Seems like Mac was trying to change up his style a bit, some cool concepts up in there, could be fire w/ some wording fixes imo.

For Ad:
Opener was nice, smooth
Complimenting body cool, I just flipped Barcotic body last week tho
Hard reset line was nice, smooth again

For Mac:
Wisdom was a cool idea
Wired up/FB server cool idea too

Next time you’ve written a verse send it to me and I will help with the wording

I’ve got Ad

Adverse:

"The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week"

"They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset"


Mac:

"anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room"

Kind of a nonchalant battle here. Adverse had a couple nice lines but you could tell he was coasting. I can always tell by the length of his bars how hard he tries lol. Mac, you started to get momentum by the end but by then it was too late. Maybe should've went 16?

Vote: Adverse

I’m gonna go against the grain here and vote for my boy Mac
No question that ad’s verse is crafted better and looks more polished...on the surface
But I was really only feeling his THIS body bar
My man Mac had the opener which was funny, and also the ad skipped, which were both good concepts. I can see this going to ad, obviously. But I preferred mac’s offering so I’m voting for him
Ahh fuck I read it again. I missed the hard reset bar. That’s actually a dope bar. Goddammit
Mac. Work on your wording. The concepts are there.

V/adverse

Liked both efforts but Mac’s felt a bit rushed. Ad had some bangers actually too and did enough for the W. Good effort both.

Vote - ad

both struggled

mac seems burnt out or didnt try

adverse had good ideas he always does. but he shit the bed on every punch wording


v adverse

Body line was flames
Hard reset was cool

Vs

Porn ad maybe


Vote adverse

The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week"
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

vs.

Nothing quotable really

Seen much better "Ad" bars then the porno one so its tough to credit it , spirits couldve been funny for a really old flip but the rushed setup ruined it


Adverse, while far from his best, got it

Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those?

Decent

I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed
Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed

Wack


The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week

Blahnik

They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

Trash

Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck
And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez

Trash

This verse sucked ad


do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention
Blah

so clearly that marriage has a conflict
his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped

Smh



have her stripped then ill fuck her with power
she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower

Ok


lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs
ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum

Ok

anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room

Smh


This sucked to...

This battle is terrible

But I will say AD won