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WEEK 3 BOTW SPOTLIGHT: Orc 1-0 VS Ajax 1-0 ORC WINS
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They say you’re one of Netcees' best…
but, to me… You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that… The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback. This is a showdown between your BB gun and my wicked .44… I rock arenas; This goblin couldn’t ‘bring the house down’ selling pillows door-to-door. So, when I get done KO’ing this wack clone, The crowd’ll be ‘unable to keep a straight face’ like a sumo free-soloing Half Dome. For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill; For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill. You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon… I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun. You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line…. You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find. I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face. It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker… This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers. Good luck. |
ORC VERSE
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Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?” I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe Middle-aged UPN battlers ain’t got shit for me Yikes. Dreamt of being Attorney General & finally won one in ur mid 40s I get voters miss some bars but you should write less Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10” I’ll b 5 up in votes. That’s how easy this shit is I saw you were wack right away. No way you’re Leading the Witness |
Ajax:
"You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that… The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback." - loved the multi's here. "I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face." - Cool wordplay. "It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker… This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers" Ajax, your rhymes are technically impeccable. Really a pleasure to read. Flow is butter. But some of your concepts are a little... stretched out for my taste. Far fetched and slightly convoluted at times. But you def have a polished tongue-in-cheek style that I enjoy. Your verse last week was amazing to read as well. Consider me a new fan. Orc: "Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?”" "get voters miss some bars but you should write less Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left" - Yikes. "Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib" - ^^this is one of those rare bars where I'm like, "Fuck, I wish I thought of that..." I'm a huge Gaethje fan but now I'll never be able to hear Bruce Buffer announce his name without thinking of Gay Chi lol. Great battle, fellas. Ajax is something unique and I enjoy reading his stuff but Orc, for me, is the more focused battler and always delivers personals that really sting. The guy is a champ for a reason... Vote - Orc |
Very nice battle
Quarterback lmao Snowflake Tolkien Vs Cross exam Soundcloud Khabib Benny barely Very close battle. Great styles on display. I got orc with barely one more quotable. This could go either way. Vote Orc |
Ajax
Quarterback lol cool House down cool again Snowflake decent Those were stand outs but the whole verse was well worded and solid enough Orc Cross examination fire Sound cloud dope Khabib lol ok Another well written, all around solid verse I’ve got Orc on preference and the ones I didn’t quote being enjoyed better Vote orc |
Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal
Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?” I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib vs You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that… The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback. For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill; For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill. You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon… I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun. You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line…. You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find. cool battle here, i got more quotables w ajax, orc has one less but they were heavy. v/orc barely |
You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that…
The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback. cool i see what this is about but it was too wordy imo.. but hit This is a showdown between your BB gun and my wicked .44… I rock arenas; This goblin couldn’t ‘bring the house down’ selling pillows door-to-door. okk So, when I get done KO’ing this wack clone, The crowd’ll be ‘unable to keep a straight face’ like a sumo free-soloing Half Dome. lol For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill; For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill. decent.. seen this kind of style before.. also seen people that say they were inspired by you.. which is cool You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon… I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun. okk You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line…. You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find. kinda played but ok I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face. ok mild It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker… This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers. not feelign this vs. Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?” cool I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe lmao Middle-aged UPN battlers ain’t got shit for me Yikes. Dreamt of being Attorney General & finally won one in ur mid 40s not getting this personal I get voters miss some bars but you should write less Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left decent A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud lol mild Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib wow The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10” ok I’ll b 5 up in votes. That’s how easy this shit is I saw you were wack right away. No way you’re Leading the Witness sorry dont get this one..but wording is smooth dope battle here... not as tight as I expected as Orc came more consistent with some haymakers.. orc i really dig ur style, ajax also came great but maybe rust was a factor here. I got orc props to both |
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Ajax has some really creative shit but a dry delivery hurt him here. Orc landed 2 heavy haymakers which made this an easy call for me. vote Orc. |
Goddammit I did a bar for bar breakdown and then deleted Orc’s whole verse
Orc got this. It’s not a blowout but Orc came with more impact and went harder on Ajax than Ajax did. Both had a couple of googlers which cancelled out. Half dome and Vendee Globe. But Ajax had an ace Ventura pet detective punch in 2020? Also, wig weavers? Just simpler connects that hurt. Down/pillows. Too easy. Orc was more direct at his opponent and took this fairly easily. V/Orc |
You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that…
The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback. lol this concept is fire to me.. cool fresh idea, a tad longwinded with the punchline sure but the wording is great imo and great as is This is a showdown between your BB gun and my wicked .44… I rock arenas; This goblin couldn’t ‘bring the house down’ selling pillows door-to-door. i've seen Down concepts before but the bring the house flip was alright.. decent overall So, when I get done KO’ing this wack clone, The crowd’ll be ‘unable to keep a straight face’ like a sumo free-soloing Half Dome. pretty cool and interesting concept here imo, the punch as delivered is pretty light imo.. i'm assuming you're illustrating the crows "wincing" or something along those lines , cool enough but not super impactful For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill; For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill. i did a stalemate brit play a while back so it's not wowing from a freshness perspective, but lol i lvoe the way you delivered this.. cool bar You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon… I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun. very nice multi but the irish/leprechaun as delivered is a little to obvious and straightforward on this one You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line…. You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find. lol funny movie reference.. line for line is 3 syllables and hired to find is 4 the multi threw me a bit.. but i haven;t seen a Snowflake concept before so i enjoyed this I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face. dope.. like how you did this and it's fresh.. nice bar It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker… This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers. ehhh.. not a big fan of this flip vs. Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?” lol the quote set this up well... cool double personal in a sense and concept...nice open I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe lol love the setup, cool enough long winded concept...like this Middle-aged UPN battlers ain’t got shit for me Yikes. Dreamt of being Attorney General & finally won one in ur mid 40s attorney wp is pretty ancient but i think the flip here is dope with a double personal touch as well I get voters miss some bars but you should write less Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left haha pretty nice lawyer concept...hits A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud cool personal again, worded well...dig it Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib haha this made me chuckle.. cool original wp The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10” haha this is fire to me.. timing aligned on this one...another good lawyer bar I’ll b 5 up in votes. That’s how easy this shit is I saw you were wack right away. No way you’re Leading the Witness 'leading the witness' i really like the concept...good wit on a bar bragging about being wittier lol... nice closer Great read guys strong verses from both sides...Ajax that opener was bonkers to me, Tolkien a concept i really enjoyed as well But i've got orc here with the consistency... really didn;t miss much and had a good blend of comedy and creative personal hits Props to both this was fun Vote Orc |
Ajax -
You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that… The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback. You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon… I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun. I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace… SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face. Not the best I've seen you come honestly, bud. I maybe hyped this match up a bit too much in my head. Especially for 2020, I guess. Delta was awesome, Tolkein was dope, Leprechaun was a nice direct jab. The rest I either took issue with the wording or the concept itself, like Snowflake. Orc - I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10” Some of the lawyer bars were misses for me. I've seen Ajax get dissed with lawyer lines since like '05 or something, so they're kinda like fat lines against me at this point - they really have to be original and creative to hit their mark. That's just me. I loved the Vendee Globe bar after a quick google, possibly my favorite of the battle. All in all, I think Orc came slightly better, even with the minuses I gave him for the lackluster lawyer lines, Ajax just didn't come up to his usual par here and the lack of consistency hurt him. V - Orc |
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