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UPN Zuch 10-01-2020 11:05 PM

WEEK 1: TOP iLL DRAGSTER vs Allen Knight TOP iLL WINS VIA NS OPEN FOR FEED
 
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TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 10-01-2020 11:21 PM

Cake

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Allen Knight 10-02-2020 06:42 AM

Ok.

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 10-05-2020 11:01 PM

NBL is crowded, and I don’t mean to be brash
I saved you a seat, got it off your cousin at the scene of the crash
Nobody likes your style, I can’t stress it enough
Showed it to Ouch and he was like “Thsebar s are diprresing as fkk”
I’m a heat maker, you’re required to tag along
Because the last fire stick you put together got you fired from Amazon
Im a shooter, you play games at home on the couch
I roll with a NERF gun too, but mine will make you foam from the mouth
Not original, you’re a carbon copy front and center
Of all people you bit Barc’s style, difference is he does it better
I got a dozen cookin’, fresh lines that’ll crush this woman
Now let’s see how you handlebars off the dome, we know that your cousin couldn’t

Allen Knight 10-06-2020 09:51 PM

Will drop in the am.

UPN Zuch 10-07-2020 10:17 PM

Allen where you at? @Allen Knight

UPN Zuch 10-07-2020 11:19 PM

TOP iLL wins via NS

OPEN FOR FEED

Aero 10-08-2020 11:32 AM

Loooool at scene of the crash that's brutal... rest of verse decent.. foam line could've been dope

Orc 10-08-2020 01:13 PM

Whole verse was nice

Blue Bayou 10-08-2020 01:39 PM

Liked it all except the Amazon / firestick bar just because I've seen a lot of variations of the concept already

Ouch kinda corny but still chuckle worthy

Great start and nice verse

Mac 10-08-2020 01:48 PM

NBL is crowded, and I don’t mean to be brash
I saved you a seat, got it off your cousin at the scene of the crash
this is harsh

Nobody likes your style, I can’t stress it enough
Showed it to Ouch and he was like “Thsebar s are diprresing as fkk”
nahh weak

I’m a heat maker, you’re required to tag along
Because the last fire stick you put together got you fired from Amazon
cool but I think i've seen this before

Im a shooter, you play games at home on the couch
I roll with a NERF gun too, but mine will make you foam from the mouth
nice lol

Not original, you’re a carbon copy front and center
Of all people you bit Barc’s style, difference is he does it better
okk

I got a dozen cookin’, fresh lines that’ll crush this woman
Now let’s see how you handlebars off the dome, we know that your cousin couldn’t
lol ok....

cool verse, too bad allen didn't show up

Destroyer 10-08-2020 10:47 PM

Opener kills babies
Stupid mean
Top ill too cold for this league, really


Kill Corleone

Ouch 10-09-2020 02:44 AM

open was dope.. I love those hard brutal mean ass lines... what I used to be good at and like...

next line... not very good... thanks for mentioning me though and making those ouch is drunk lines being played before other people do it... much respect

amazon fire stick nahh... it just didn't connect and I know its hard to do with a short thing, but nah..


Nerf gun line was straight... i'd love to go back in the day and play nerf guns with people.. but still.. way it was worded and what not... good concept... not hard hitting though.. but still a good idea something i've never head of so, ok


next thing about Barcotic.. I don't know dude, but all you said is he copies his style and Barc does it better... not witty at all... just a random statement.. so thats a blah line



ok and the handle bars and cousin thing must be a personal thing I don't know about that the guy posted about... but obviously the handle bars/handlebars shit has been done a million times starting like 10 years ago... so no...

I'd say your verse certainly wasn't anything special at all.. but since you're facing a no show you win.

evaD 10-09-2020 03:26 AM

Crash personals and foam at the mouth were fire

Sharp 10-09-2020 12:13 PM

NBL is crowded, and I don’t mean to be brash
I saved you a seat, got it off your cousin at the scene of the crash
damn. That's mean and worded well
Nobody likes your style, I can’t stress it enough
Showed it to Ouch and he was like “Thsebar s are diprresing as fkk”
funny but light
I’m a heat maker, you’re required to tag along
Because the last fire stick you put together got you fired from Amazon
the fire stick double entendre feels more like a 1.5 entendre
Im a shooter, you play games at home on the couch
I roll with a NERF gun too, but mine will make you foam from the mouth
NERF/foam is a sick concept. Cool, but execution wasn't perfect
Not original, you’re a carbon copy front and center
Of all people you bit Barc’s style, difference is he does it better
haven't read an AK verse in a min but I don't remember his style being too much like barc. Also a lil statementy
I got a dozen cookin’, fresh lines that’ll crush this woman
Now let’s see how you handlebars off the dome, we know that your cousin couldn’t
oh shit
Handlebars/handle bars isn't anything crazy but the personal and how relevant off the dome is makes this work well


The cousin personals were highlights. Nerf was sick. No huge misses but the barc bar


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