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Etherwave 08-21-2020 10:32 AM

Empressive
 
Impress, Empress.
Empires have fallen for less than your
natural crown.
Hearts have broken for less than your casual frown.
You, with no shadow of doubt, are valuable NOW.
Rally the crowds.
Watch them throw malice in mounds.
Watch as they watch as you fall to the ground.
Then stand and wipe the dust from your brow.
Grasp at the sand, pull on the air it doesn't matter how, just stand.
On your own.
Empty handed and alone.
It is, after all, your throne.

sral 08-23-2020 01:18 PM

Welcome back @Certain.

Adverse 08-23-2020 02:19 PM

Really like what I have read from you thus far man, on point. I like the poetic structure, the kind of vague double meanings to everything and just the layers of it. It’s pretty impressive and makes for wonderful visuals. Good vocabulary as well

Look forward to reading more

Certain 09-05-2020 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL (Post 785091)
Welcome back @Certain.

Wait, why does this read like someone jacking my style?!

dead man 09-06-2020 02:10 AM

it doesn't matter how, just stand


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