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clap artillery at you frauds not feelin me yet
Rob ya neck, get ya chain mailed, all that chivalry shit
Im the white night, palest when that full moon hits
True goon shit, i shot the sheriff when that duece-duece spit
Ive always had a screw loose -bitch, Makin sure his tu-tu fit
Its voodoo shit, my bars'll hit ya like them 2 blues did
Knock ya dick in the dirt, dippin off the benzos dog
Wake up with shit that isnt mine, i swear to death those arnt
I dont remember shit, brand new shoes i swyped..
Wake up in prison like, what the fuck i do last night?
The Gift and the curse, such a fuckin miserable life
Sometimes i wanna turn around, and just give it to christ
But you hittin the pipe, thinkin i would ever retreat
Got the devil in me, big balls and medical weed
Thats a recipe for dissaster, if ever i seen
And if ever i did you wrong, we should settle the beef
This malt liquer, bringin out the person ive caged
Its my personal hate, locked away, versions of satan...

Unfinished.

Love your flow as always Geno, just seamlessly transitioned from rhyme to rhyme could see it being audio which makes sense with your experience

Fav part:
The Gift and the curse, such a fuckin miserable life
Sometimes i wanna turn around, and just give it to christ
But you hittin the pipe, thinkin i would ever retreat
Got the devil in me, big balls and medical weed

Thanks adverse

Fire. Better than any @UserName or amen verse I’ve ever read and that’s on Bron nem

dope

This was bloody awesome! Whole thing is quotable G...flow is fuckin' bonkers...

But you hittin the pipe, thinkin i would ever retreat
Got the devil in me, big balls and medical weed
^ lol nice

I dont remember shit, brand new shoes i swyped..
Wake up in prison like, what the fuck i do last night?
The Gift and the curse, such a fuckin miserable life
Sometimes i wanna turn around, and just give it to christ
But you hittin the pipe, thinkin i would ever retreat
Got the devil in me, big balls and medical weed
Thats a recipe for dissaster, if ever i seen
And if ever i did you wrong, we should settle the beef

^Straight gas and matches


Unpolished, but raw.

I FWI

Medical weed couplet was dope, a few lines not to your usual standard and rhymed shit with shit a lot in the start before it picked up again on that department, not a biggie tho. A bit lackluster piece coming from you but I'd lie if I said I didn't think it was a cool read nonetheless and looking forward to the finished product. Stay up!

Bruh no lie when I read the word artillery off the bat, I thought this shit was gonna be wack af but I didn't know it was you Geno aha. Seems like a key from you but I missed reading that thuggish flow, clever penmanship I know and love. Feel like it fell off a bit after the dripping off the benzos dog line. The flow and meaning didn't seem as inspired after that point, but nitpicking. Get at me dawg.

Word. Shit wuddup fig. Long time bruh. Glad to see you. And ya.. This was uninspired. Something i had sitting in my drafts that i said fuck it and posted just for the sake of posting something new lol. Appreciate the read from everyone. Pz

Dope work
you have a lot of potential
The flow is nice and smooth

I'm becoming a fan! I love your word play bruh. Get your chain mailed and all that chivalry shit. Nice.

Always been a fan of your schemes and ""((flow))"", such as it is in written text pieces.

Activate called it unpolished because he's a fucking retard. Hurr durr it has curse words and it's not about a dead person hurr you misspelled swiped. *bumps his own piece after every response*

In my opinion this was very polished. Rhyme-o's were nutso. Very braggy. Good piece Geno.

I usually like quoting mid-sections of pieces to show people I actually read everything but this was the best;

clap artillery at you frauds not feelin me yet
Rob ya neck

& the schemes just go from there. Very good.

Your a fat white nerd rockin' skinny jeans with reebok pumps that are flat son...stfu.