Week 10: Mac 1-3 vs. Artifice 0-0 - ART WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
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Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

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@Mac
@Artifice

check, 10 lines mate

check, 10 sounds good.

I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls
this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate
but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake
in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump
i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped
ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does
only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz
u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought
watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop

I'll have that ext @Artifice my bad

no worries @Mac ext granted

ARTIFICE

i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky
cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy
so u must not be that tasty snack
10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac
I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence
UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent
attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue
so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league
talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream
anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team

Art:
I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls
^ I've seen this angle before but the name tie in makes it alright
this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate
but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake
^ could have been worded a little better imo but is decent

in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump
i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped
^ cool i liked this

ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does
only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz
^ also seen the sinacog/no punch combo before but still lol

u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought
watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop
^ Thought this was a nice closer

Mac:
i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky
cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy
^ bland used concept

so u must not be that tasty snack
10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac
^ Thought this was an alright angle

I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence
UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent
^ think this is over my head? Or just doesn't hit

attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue
so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league
^ think you got your leagues confused as NBL is an Australian/New Zealand basketball league as opposed to the 3 man league you're referring to

talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream
anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team
^ i see what you tried to do but wording wasn't great

Though Art is more of the topical head here he showed a veterans presence nothing too flashy but a bunch of jabs that pushed him over the top, Mac you're a newer dude I'd advise you to work on creativity on your punches make them relevant and just fine tune your wording make your punches a little harsher and you'll be fine. Decent battle gents

V/Art

I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls
Ok opener but can anything is done to death
this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate
but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake
Beef wp is ok in the name flip I guess
in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump
i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped
Decent
ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does
only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz
Lol
u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought
watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop
Nice closer


i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky
cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy
statementish
so u must not be that tasty snack
10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac
Ehh
I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence
UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent
Don’t think this makes sense?
attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue
so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league
Ok
talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream
anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team
Don’t get it?


Vote - Artifice

He had some good name flips and better concepts

Upping for more votes

walls was ok
sinacog was funny

vs

nothing


yikes. i was once terrible, but Blue Bayou helped me become better.. i think he could help u guys too.. hit em up on the PM.. give em whatever bars u can think of daily, he was a great help to me and i was never a bother

anyway,

v artifice

I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls
HMM, OK
this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate
but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake
OK
in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump
i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped
COOL
ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does
only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz
DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND THIS ONE
u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought
watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop
COOL NAMEFLIP

VS

i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky
cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy
HMM, OK
so u must not be that tasty snack
10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac
I SEE YOUR ANGLE BUT THIS SOUNDED RATHER CORNY TO ME
I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence
UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent
DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THIS ONE, WASN'T COHESIVE
attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue
so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league
OK
talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream
anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team
HMM, THIS ONE'S A MISS FOR ME

I got Artifice taking the W here, much more structured and consistent verse compared to Mac. ya'll stay up. peace.

Art wins