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Aero vs. Ajax {Aero wins}
https://i.ibb.co/tQ81f3f/scxlogo.png Round Two . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 12th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 14-20 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Aero @Ajax |
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Fine.
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No more gimmicks...
This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’… His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice; I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas. This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely... Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony. Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud. And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd... Goodbye. |
Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go
You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point |
This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. ok You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. nah Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. nah not feelin, kind of just a corny joke One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. nope You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice; I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas. decent This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. nah He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely... Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony. Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud. And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd... im honestly just glad this is over Vs Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote lol ok Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave lmfao Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there no wtf Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives ehhh This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time ..what.. You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray alright Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today lol’d Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point nice Idk maybe I’m not in touch with the UPN style but Ajax verse was pretty painful if we’re being completely honest. Aside from the opener I was just pist off the entire time. No hate. Aero had some funny shit in there, dont think it will work next round but it takes it today. Vote Aero |
Aero had a good verse, but his misses were rough so it read with a lot of ups and downs. Microwave, Wendy’s, and power point were dope
Ajax had calling station, basket, kennedy, pony. I liked the craft bears wording but it wasn’t a punch. Flowed nice too throughout. Going Ajax here. Aero had a good verse though. |
This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. lol good current event dig. nice open You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. cool stock/trader personal. calling station is a fresh take, solid jab Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. pretty damn racist, but another fresh trader punch. punchline really stretched but the flow doesn't get lost.. i liked this conceptually One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. i havent seen this either, but there's enough tie ins to get it.. i imagine the guys are drinking beer in the scene... the idea of uppercutting him while simultaneously drinking beer is a bit much .. this was okay You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice; I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas. dope. this was nice This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. hahaha He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely... Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony. lol kinda corny tbh but i chuckled.. this is elevated because of all the great dancer comments he makes Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud. And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd... nah throwaway... you seem to do this with closers vs. Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote LOL, this was clever... good open Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave cut the flim to vent is fire. very creative, but i'm upset you used "saw footage of us eating" as opposed to sex tape footage or somehing that wouldve been a lot harder... regardless this was very impressive conceptually Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there i get what you were going for with the netflix/finish the season angle , i didnt like this at first but in hindsight all the tie ins are there and the setup is actually pretty good... this is fresh and hits Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives LMAO this was funny and delivered well to me This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time ehh maybe it's the wording i dunno, but this really fell flat as constructed. miss You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray lol this is a decently funny jab. wording is really good here which probably helped it land somewhat. funny redhead / old punch Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today i dont know if im missing soemthing here...seems like pure filler to me & i usually think most of aeros concepts are funny Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point dope. very creative gunbar thats well worded and delivered here Mann this is actually a lot closer then i thought it was when i first read this battle... im honeslty a little torn, Ajax was consistently pretty good throughout, but cut the film to vent and power point are the two best bars in the battle for me... On the whole tho i have to edge this to Ajax for being more consistent and having the harder punches... Aero was probably one good bar away from edging this for me , but the wendys and get some sun bars fell really flat for me...ajax i didnt love the flying circus bar and the closer was more of a throwaway diss to NCs then aero tbh, but i do think you had some fresh concepts, had great stock/trader angles, and again were a little less dissappointing in your misses Pretty fun read. props to both. I have Ajax in an enjoyable close battle Vote - Ajax |
This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. Vs. Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point 5-4 Aero deserves the nod here, unlike last rd. IMO Dope battle tho |
2 - 2 Tied up
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This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’…
His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. It’s personal but it doesn’t seem that clever or witty and even though the setup is short that second bar could’ve been way shorter You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. Another decent personal jab Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. Bit more harsh, again second bar could’ve been shortened imo One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. Lol You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice; I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas. Nice This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. Nice again although I’m sure I read same concept on here recently He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely... Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony. Lol nice. Pony rips though. Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud. And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd... Ok closer Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote Don’t get the in-joke but the wp is cool Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave Lmao this is the most left field diss I’ve seen in a while but it works. Although I bet Ajax hasn’t had a microwave meal ever Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there Decent Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives Lol kinda played though This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time Haha this is cool and well executed You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray Nice Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today Decent Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point Nice closer Close one here. Ajax had a load of personals which were cool but some came off a bit light. The short bar long bar style was a bit jarring to me as well. Aero came off more polished again with personals and a couple contenders for lotb. Overall I think aero was just more enjoyable to read and had the higher highs Vote - aero |
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You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you;
I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. vs. Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point Came down to 3 lines i liked vs. 4 lines i liked. Usually see Ajax drop much better than this, not sure if he just wasnt inspired this time around or what, but it read kinda sloppy. Aero came correct and scored what, in my mind, is an upset. V - Aero |
Best believe this African hack is in the red…
The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. Vs. Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point Tied in quotes but after reading twice more I was feeling Aero a bit more. Felt like his misses were a bit stronger personally. Cool battle, guys. Vote-Aero |
Ajax
This token’s whiter than me. Even punks are all laughin’… His people are marching the streets. He’s in Wisconsin holed up in his Uncle Tom’s Cabin. Ok You gamble on equities. But, try me… I’ll blatantly own you; I’ve been raising the game for 20 years. You’re an obsolete ‘calling station’ like phone booths. Had to look it up. Clever Best believe this African hack is in the red… The last time he ‘took home anything from the markets’ he carried it back balanced in a basket on his head. These quotations gotta go. This was so-so One uppercut; this battle is BAD news… This clown will ‘take flight’ like Monty Python’s Flying Circus while I’m relaxin’ sampling craft brews. Wasn't feeling You’re a joke. You lack the energy and malice; I’ll beat you over and over ’til you’re ‘looking at a worse slump’ than Jackie Kennedy in Dallas. Hmmm. Maybe? This troubled midget will just never be fly, son… His life’s a rollercoaster — and theme park insurance companies wont let him ride one. Aight He tapdances 'round the truth. So, ya know this urban ballerina’s lonely... Watched Magic Mike. Now, he walks up to battles to the background beat from Pony. Almost chuckled Hes a clown. This bitch is just so so loud. And that fake gunplay only works for the wigger with cornrows crowd... This what I've been trying to tell ppl Other's might be, but I'm not a fan of super short set-ups or excessive quotations. Both detract from the overall bar. Thus, I really only liked rollercoaster & calling station. 5/10 VS Aero Your oblivious but your wife's fed up & said you've got to go You're not seeing the discord, it's to the point Orc's asking you not to vote Ok Saw footage of us eating lobster, he went into a blinding rage Had to cut the film to vent, then took his TV Dinner out the microwave Tf does lobster have to do with anything. Cool twist though Netflix & chill, rich niggas fuck an entire series she dont even care Her place is Disney World, the plan's for every baller to finish the season there Clever. I like Saw your pic Jeremy, the huge nostrils are fucking repulsive Least you could do's get a nose job, helping police find drugs & explosives Aight This pale faced Ginger twisted a phrase it made me look twice I said let's get some sun, he said don't threaten me with a good time Kinda chuckled but you know damn well this didn't rhyme. You hate being redheaded, and at forty-five it's a cold fate but you're having the best time in your old age you can finally go gray Meh Jax doesn't understand sarcasm, his FB post was a stark display Shoutout to my teachers who said I'd end up working at Wendy's!! I start today Above avg filler Goons walk to ur patio door w pistols, aim and say that's our joint Get animated, bullets from the slides hit the screen that's a power point Clever, but still a gun bar. 6.5/10 The contrast of styles makes this an easy one for me. Disney > Rollercoaster/Nose Job/Calling station > Discord/TV dinner/Magic Mike Vote: Aero |
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