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Cashius vs. Steve Fox aka DLB {Cashius wins}
https://i.ibb.co/tQ81f3f/scxlogo.png Round One . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Cashius @Steve Fox |
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Amish keep in touch with Neighbors, you lose that when you against him Sure, he's versatile with personals, yet a quote'll have him rattled "I'm feeling Blue" - you, ya pregnant girl, and all the votes after ya battles Speaking of her..... She loves diversity in her mouth and cooch from all directions Heard your people pro-testing now, 'cause ALL your kids got dark complexions Quote:
But that's history after your kind came w/ disease and forced Natives to flee "I'M A MONSTER!", Nightmare when it comes to challengers Meaning all the tales and weapons are Unreal like he's from Soul Calibur http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=34693 ^^Give him credit; bank on stretched bars to say the least It's txtonomics when a Cashless society makes interest rates increase |
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It’s funny, you call yourself a coon...when you need to put a lid on that trash These bullet holes have you in a baddddd condition...This fucker gonna bleed dead I don’t care where you live...You’re State gonna be “Opened Up” when you Leave Red The most socially awkward EVER...You approach a girl with shakes, clown Shit, even saying Hydrangea...If you bought her Flowers it’d give you a nervous breakdown You’re the corniest dude...It’s like you were born to just lose Only time Fox is on the Right Side of ANYTHING is when they’re reporting the news The Milly’s or Wesson...either way bullets leavin’ they clip It’s an episode of First Take...either ‘let the Max talk’ or give Stephen A. Smith Hit you on the street with a full round...Come get your noodle tagged Only time YOU start clicking on the corner with the clip...is trying to skip a YouTube ad |
I didnt like steve fox much here. All the extra links and quotes were like a record skipping. Cost you momentum.
Cashius, fox news and first take were the stand outs. Rest of the verse was lackluster.. Still enough to win Vote- Cashius |
Goin with Cash here.
Steve: Sure, he's versatile with personals, yet a quote'll have him rattled "I'm feeling Blue" - you, ya pregnant girl, and all the votes after ya battles Cash: These bullet holes have you in a baddddd condition...This fucker gonna bleed dead I don’t care where you live...You’re State gonna be “Opened Up” when you Leave Red The most socially awkward EVER...You approach a girl with shakes, clown Shit, even saying Hydrangea...If you bought her Flowers it’d give you a nervous breakdown You’re the corniest dude...It’s like you were born to just lose Only time Fox is on the Right Side of ANYTHING is when they’re reporting the news The Milly’s or Wesson...either way bullets leavin’ they clip It’s an episode of First Take...either ‘let the Max talk’ or give Stephen A. Smith hey, solidest section i've read today. Read pretty effortlessly. Good shit. Steve, you just didnt have much as far as WIT. you chose to go for the deep personal angle and it wasnt effective enough, like, at all. i respect the choice, just not the execution. Cool battle. V - Cassius |
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Fox had the blue line.. but 6 quotes and a link for a 12 line verse, i mean, it’s gotta intertwine effectively and was just a miss for me here cash- red state was niiiice, fox was solid and stephen a was a bangerrr.. that was fire and lotb.. v Cashius |
Sure, he's versatile with personals, yet a quote'll have him rattled
"I'm feeling Blue" - you, ya pregnant girl, and all the votes after ya battles Speaking of her..... She loves diversity in her mouth and cooch from all directions Heard your people pro-testing now, 'cause ALL your kids got dark complexions vs. Have you see his fucking verses?...The kid is just ass It’s funny, you call yourself a coon...when you need to put a lid on that trash These bullet holes have you in a baddddd condition...This fucker gonna bleed dead I don’t care where you live...You’re State gonna be “Opened Up” when you Leave Red You’re the corniest dude...It’s like you were born to just lose Only time Fox is on the Right Side of ANYTHING is when they’re reporting the news The Milly’s or Wesson...either way bullets leavin’ they clip It’s an episode of First Take...either ‘let the Max talk’ or give Stephen A. Smith Good battle guys. Fox i appreciate the very personal direction you took with your verse. i dont have any problem with all the links and quotes etc personally, i just felt a couple werent great conceptually and didnt hit.. I liked the two i quoted tho Cash pretty consistent verse overall...i know Neigh had a Stephen A bar in the fight night recently but your execution as really dope....Cash was more consistent with the 3 best bars of the battle so he took it Vote Cashius |
It’s tough with all the quotes in a verse I’m not trying to choose my own adventure honestly. Too much of that going on in Steve’s verse paired with some decent bars.
Cashius trash, fox, and steph smith bars were nice. Solid verse all around. Vote Cash |
DLB had — dark complexions
Cashius had —opener, hydrangea & closer Thought DLB tried to take a personal approach here which I can appreciate, but the payoff wasn’t there in his punches; good concepts botched by below-average wording/execution. Cash didn’t seem like he tried too hard here, but wrote enough to win. The bars I mentioned from him were above average jabs & the rest were standard disses that still hit v/ Cash |
This was a cool little battle. I think Fox would have been much better suited without all the commentary/quotes.. the personals didn’t hit hard enough to warrant dedicating most of the verse to them, IMO. If he’d have focused more on wit/punches, he might have taken this.
Cashius had an ok verse. I know some folks liked that Hydrangea play, but I wasn’t a huge fan. I keep reading it in a Fargo accent to make it work, and it just doesn’t hit to me... but, generally, Cashius was slightly more witty than Fox and was more direct. Just a consistently, slightly better verse. So, Cashius takes it. |
This was a good read. DLB went the personal route. I liked the harshness and you had smooth wording. There just wasn’t enough wit though. Your style is different which is fine but there wasn’t enough with at times. I enjoyed the Blue line.
Cashius, to be honest I liked the whole verse. I thought he killed it. Opener was fire. I could probably quote the whole verse. Stephen A Smith was a banger too. Good job. Nicely executed. Vote Cashius. |
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