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~RustyGunZ~ 06-01-2020 01:07 AM

Resin M-I-C vs. Dave {Resin wins}
 
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Round One

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FIGHT!

DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast

12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS
The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery


@Resin M-I-C
@evaD

Resin M-I-C 06-01-2020 05:52 PM

check

evaD 06-02-2020 05:07 PM

Here we go again

12-14? Ready whenever

Resin M-I-C 06-02-2020 05:48 PM

aight let’s go, i can drop tonight

evaD 06-03-2020 04:44 AM

Back to battling again? This Resurrection won’t last long
Without at least two viagra and his best selection of fag porn
I can’t explain how wack you became, ill sure shank you in this lifetime
Classic campaign like Andy Dufraine; his early exits in the pipeline
Never stutter when I spit, cool like a glacier with the gun cocked
So god damn Gutter with this shit that when I Fascia you just Run Off
Administer facial Modifications, this suckers hopin I don’t
But don’t worry, your Chelsea smile will still get -OPEN FOR VOTES
Our last battle was close. Closer for Res come to think of it..
He said he was glad to see the back of me. Then he winked and licked his lips
He just got me in NBL, now I’m going Ham against this guy
The .357 will Boar you out... Res lose a battle? When Pigs Fly
Show up to his Block Chain him up, shits gettin scary now and fast
So when I let go, fuck Crypto, I’ll just Aerum out for Cash
Another loss for your career, Dave taking hostage of this queer
You do the Math and call him Jimmy when I make this HOFer disappear

~RustyGunZ~ 06-05-2020 07:57 AM

@Resin M-I-C

Due today

Resin M-I-C 06-05-2020 10:48 PM

my b


Aiyyo
Listen here, Retard.. this is a mental massacre..
cuz i don’t need a strong password to put the press on a special character.
I’m killin everyone. .45, the boss wired..
while you? just a klan reject.. you’ll stray from gettin caught up in the crossfire.
Maann, my crew be animals.. they gonna start going in on dude..
Dr. Strange.. no one knows where you end up when my circle closes in on you.
make like Ouch, suicide note go jot ur words..
slit wrist? bridge jump? nahhh, just hang yourself on a doorknob: Do Not Disturb.
It’s a wild ride.. grab the heattt, watch this guy cry..
there wont be a dry eye.. quarantine birthdays: all u gonna seee is a drive-by.
It’s nothing but lead now.. death is the only circumstance..
deuce deuce to your eye.. you travolta doing the pulp fiction dance.
beat u with no motivation.. now let my best hits revel..
when this Dave chap gets another L it aint a netflix special.
You’re a loser, a nerd, noncommittal and brittle
iota kill your mother.. but ur life decisions already do that little by little.
Mahfucka.
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Fracture 06-06-2020 03:02 AM

One of the better battles


Daves shawshank line was a haymaker.. Great flow too. Aerum out and hofer were also bangers. I dont remember dave being this dope. Good stuff hombre

Resin.. What ive come to expect. A lot of creativity and chances. Klan, Dr strange were haymakers. Drive by was a good one, and travolta was siiiiiiick. Greeat visual. Dave Chap line is the new cold look then pow. Lol missed for me

Overall resins verse had more spark and originality for me. Dave had a verse that normally gets you to round 2. Just not here

Vote- resin

UPN Zuch 06-06-2020 09:48 AM

Lol Dave is putting it together as of late. Much better than the last couple verses I’ve read from you. You may have had LOTB with crypto and the Shawshank line was dope.

Resin, idk why but your bars aren’t flowing well to me, not that that matters a whole lot. But you had some fire sticks here and some great concepts. Opener and pulp fiction I really liked. Not sure why you didn’t rhyme the opener but it was dope nonetheless.

This was actually close. In the end Dave had more misses and therefore I’m going to go resin based on consistency.

For real though, good battle

Vote- resin

Ajax 06-06-2020 12:13 PM

This was a cool, close battle. Dave’s Shawshank line was really well done. I wasn’t a fan of the HOFer line, because his name was Hoffa and I don’t think I’ve ever heard it actually pronounced like “Hoffer.” But, generally, the verse solid and straight forward. Pretty witty.

Resin had several really solid concepts (drive by, Dr Strange...). There were also a couple I thought were stretches (principally the wordplay ones... Dave Chapelle and Iota).

All in all, it was close.. but I think Resin pulled it out. Good stuff.

Blue Bayou 06-06-2020 02:08 PM

Back to battling again? This Resurrection won’t last long
Without at least two viagra and his best selection of fag porn
res erection angles have been done before but i kinda lol'd. i like how u buiilt the wordplay into the setup...multi really didnt work for me tho
I can’t explain how wack you became, ill sure shank you in this lifetime
Classic campaign like Andy Dufraine; his early exits in the pipeline
this was fireee. early exits in the pipeline was a dope concept props
Never stutter when I spit, cool like a glacier with the gun cocked
So god damn Gutter with this shit that when I Fascia you just Run Off
man i like this concept but even in slang this wordplay doesnt work for me.. fash e aw , face ya just doesnt work and is forced
Administer facial Modifications, this suckers hopin I don’t
But don’t worry, your Chelsea smile will still get -OPEN FOR VOTES
like the jokers face cuts? had potential but the "open" part only very loosely ties in for me...this needed more
Our last battle was close. Closer for Res come to think of it..
He said he was glad to see the back of me. Then he winked and licked his lips
lol nah, kinda funny but too basic. aeros get behind you on that is a similar example of a joke bar like that that was elevated
He just got me in NBL, now I’m going Ham against this guy
The .357 will Boar you out... Res lose a battle? When Pigs Fly
dece. tie ins were okay. single multi mehh, ok gun bar and concept
Show up to his Block Chain him up, shits gettin scary now and fast
So when I let go, fuck Crypto, I’ll just Aerum out for Cash
fireee. wordplay was fresh and dope, and this was worded well as an attack line
Another loss for your career, Dave taking hostage of this queer
You do the Math and call him Jimmy when I make this HOFer disappear
hof'er and hoffa i just dont really care for as a reference...seems like a reach


vs.

Listen here, Retard.. this is a mental massacre..
cuz i don’t need a strong password to put the press on a special character.
doenst rhyme for me... and better special character lines have been done but the press on/password flip was a cool take...needed a diff setup
I’m killin everyone. .45, the boss wired..
while you? just a klan reject.. you’ll stray from gettin caught up in the crossfire.
like the delivery here but KKK/crossfire ideas are pretty old. decently enjoaybel flip
Maann, my crew be animals.. they gonna start going in on dude..
Dr. Strange.. no one knows where you end up when my circle closes in on you.
fireeee. this was dope. one of the best bars of the round
make like Ouch, suicide note go jot ur words..
slit wrist? bridge jump? nahhh, just hang yourself on a doorknob: Do Not Disturb.
lol i like the creativity here tbh, its just too impractical to work.. ppl wil hang themselves from the ceiling of their room or a rafter , not a doorknob lol....even peter dinklidge couldnt pull that off....doesnt work
It’s a wild ride.. grab the heattt, watch this guy cry..
there wont be a dry eye.. quarantine birthdays: all u gonna seee is a drive-by.
niiice. this was dope
It’s nothing but lead now.. death is the only circumstance..
deuce deuce to your eye.. you travolta doing the pulp fiction dance.
another cool fresh concept in follow-up
beat u with no motivation.. now let my best hits revel..
when this Dave chap gets another L it aint a netflix special.
hmmm.... creative angle on the nameplay, just not sure it works
You’re a loser, a nerd, noncommittal and brittle
iota kill your mother.. but ur life decisions already do that little by little.
nah


Coool battle guys. I think this is actually quite close as both had a few absolute bangers but also some misses in there....both verses a little up and down but a lot of creativity demonstrated by both

Shawshank and Aerum were flames, Dr. Strange & Quarentine bday were flames

I think this comes down to the misses/non quotable bars and i think Res was a little more consistent in that department....Fun read props to both i have Resin edging this with slightly better concepts, execution and consistency overall


Vote - Resin

Aero 06-06-2020 02:34 PM

evaD:

Back to battling again? This Resurrection won’t last long
Without at least two viagra and his best selection of fag porn
lol aighht.. it works
I can’t explain how wack you became, ill sure shank you in this lifetime
Classic campaign like Andy Dufraine; his early exits in the pipeline
not going to look this up, i get it conceptually..
Never stutter when I spit, cool like a glacier with the gun cocked
So god damn Gutter with this shit that when I Fascia you just Run Off
Don't get the reference again...
Administer facial Modifications, this suckers hopin I don’t
But don’t worry, your Chelsea smile will still get -OPEN FOR VOTES
Chel see a ? I've got to read someone elses vote to understand this
Our last battle was close. Closer for Res come to think of it..
He said he was glad to see the back of me. Then he winked and licked his lips
I chuckled ha but what is this
He just got me in NBL, now I’m going Ham against this guy
The .357 will Boar you out... Res lose a battle? When Pigs Fly
I think this was a positive comment towards him and not a diss
Show up to his Block Chain him up, shits gettin scary now and fast
So when I let go, fuck Crypto, I’ll just Aerum out for Cash
alright
Another loss for your career, Dave taking hostage of this queer
You do the Math and call him Jimmy when I make this HOFer disappear
I like how this was used...


Resin:
Listen here, Retard.. this is a mental massacre..
cuz i don’t need a strong password to put the press on a special character.
ha cool...
I’m killin everyone. .45, the boss wired..
while you? just a klan reject.. you’ll stray from gettin caught up in the crossfire.
ehh
Maann, my crew be animals.. they gonna start going in on dude..
Dr. Strange.. no one knows where you end up when my circle closes in on you.
cool
make like Ouch, suicide note go jot ur words..
slit wrist? bridge jump? nahhh, just hang yourself on a doorknob: Do Not Disturb.
fire
It’s a wild ride.. grab the heattt, watch this guy cry..
there wont be a dry eye.. quarantine birthdays: all u gonna seee is a drive-by.
liked the delivery here.. punch was okay
It’s nothing but lead now.. death is the only circumstance..
deuce deuce to your eye.. you travolta doing the pulp fiction dance.
nice
beat u with no motivation.. now let my best hits revel..
when this Dave chap gets another L it aint a netflix special.
ha nah nope
You’re a loser, a nerd, noncommittal and brittle
iota kill your mother.. but ur life decisions already do that little by little.
I owe duh here



Resin had a couple standouts here. Dave did well but a lot of it was light.

MVGT Resin

evaD 06-06-2020 03:23 PM

Good shit Resin congrats. Special characters and Travolta were fire.


@Blue Bayou
https://youtube.com/watch?v=-a7VsGzRJFY

(I know if I have to provide a link it’s on me ftr)

Blue Bayou 06-06-2020 03:45 PM

That one is diff from the Google one I looked up lol

Still sounds like fay she uh to me , but I'm drunk

evaD 06-06-2020 03:52 PM

I think there’s two meanings I’ve never even heard of the medical term. The Fay-sha one is the part of a house the gutter connects to.. where the rain would run off. Yeap it’s a force!

Barcotic 06-06-2020 06:18 PM

This was a hot battle

But hang yourself on a doorknob? What is he.. a cat??

~RustyGunZ~ 06-06-2020 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic (Post 775448)
This was a hot battle

But hang yourself on a doorknob? What is he.. a cat??

Would be better if he off’d himself with an anteater

evaD 06-06-2020 06:27 PM

I think it’s a name play Dave - D - D’angelo Barksdale

Neighbor 06-06-2020 06:33 PM

Nice read fellas, went back & forth w/ this one

Resin had — opener, dr. Strange, drive-by & closer

Dave had — opener, Andy Dufraine, Block chain & closer

I think resin’s punches were executed a little better than Dave’s & he had less misses.. but it’s very close

v/ Res

Barcotic 06-06-2020 07:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Da Brayn Lord (Post 775449)
Would be better if he off’d himself with an anteater

Long nose would work better, you absolutely right


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