Week 8: Schism (0-0) vs. Hands (0-0) vs. Steve Fox (0-0) - HANDS WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines @Schism @Hands @Steve Fox |
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knocking off the rust
. . . . I'm no rook check the facts; ur jaw won't stay intact Cuz Talking any shit will get hands stuck like Chinese finger traps U cant fight; n that's not going on a hunch w/ a little whiskey I'll tango with fox trot n have him dropped in one punch My wordplay witty; sorry for u to have to face this flaunt when my verse drop it'll send these two guys to the moon like the spaceX launch U new? Dont panic! One hook n you'll vanish And I'll put a cramp In hands style like a beginner pianist I'm the king; even my thrones golden Lets be real.. you couldn't take my spotify sold out like joe rogan Not pulling any punches; I'm going to degrade dude Cuz truth is nobody listening to fox.. we all know that's fake news |
who are these niggas......
Schism We all respect him for being a lyricist and kinda dope Psych, Schizo wack his verse is only quotable if they're tryin' to diagnose I'm a grinder, re-writing verses bout niggas I'm up against Schiz' not a GrindR, unless we talkin' bout how he Tinder with other men Quote:
You're not a problem, child...More like the "Lil Heathen" nobody remembers Hands He wanna Bonita Applebum, but the game ain't nice Last time he was put on, film surfaced and the Ravens released Ray Rice Son's wrestling with wackness that seeps through computers My legacy's money like Ted DiBiase. You gotta Legacy like Ted DiBiase Jr.'s You're no threat. Small, weak, frail describes his frame Hands getting thrown before the real battle like Practice Mode in a fighting game 12 |
Hands is winding up, both will get clocked with grave intent
Watch batteries go down til neither one can ever tock the same again I don't believe any of the hoopla that they're selling me This foe Schis'll be as much comp as Snoop Dogg at a spelling b Smoke will rise as I revoke ya lives with shots Consider yourself history as soon as I open Firefox Think you can escape? Bet. Say less, get far Or I'll just tap the trigger to aid stress - ASMR 2 pistols by my side and I'm firing surely If I brought the Colts' Andrew, Luck can't save ya from retiring early Empty an LMG into your ride on some dumb shit from afar KFC delivery man; everything from the drumsticks to your car |
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vs opener, problem child, practice mode vs Spelling B, fire fox v/ Steve Fox... Good scrap. Spelling Bee was LOTB. Practice mode was the next best line imo and i think that won me over PS @Hands I thought u were gone forever...LITERALLY been a week. U too old for this. Go outside |
Schism
Chinese finger traps, ok np foxtrot i dunno the nato alphabet thing was cool, but punch was kinda light SpaceX seemed to statementish, even tho it was current Piantist was another ok np spotify was a good wp liked this Fake news was a good np. liked this also. Steve Psych was ok np Grinder didnt like Notorious was ok i guess Ravens is a nah Ted bar was okish Practise mode is the banger, shoulda done more bars like this in a 3way. Hands Tocks, wow connections everywhere but only punched soft, good bar tho Shizzle dope np Firefox just a good np needed more to make it dope ASMR not getting it And Drew Luck nice kinda cool wp. think your Barc now Drumsticks sorta works. I liked Hands best. |
Schism
I'm no rook check the facts; ur jaw won't stay intact Cuz Talking any shit will get hands stuck like Chinese finger traps Nice opener U cant fight; n that's not going on a hunch w/ a little whiskey I'll tango with fox trot n have him dropped in one punch Feel like you could’ve approached this name play better from a different angle My wordplay witty; sorry for u to have to face this flaunt when my verse drop it'll send these two guys to the moon like the spaceX launch A bit basic U new? Dont panic! One hook n you'll vanish And I'll put a cramp In hands style like a beginner pianist Pianist doesn’t rhyme with Vanish, it’s closer to Venus phonetically. Kinda spoils what would’ve been a nice bar I'm the king; even my thrones golden Lets be real.. you couldn't take my spotify sold out like joe rogan This is nice. Current topic and worded perfectly without excess words Not pulling any punches; I'm going to degrade dude Cuz truth is nobody listening to fox.. we all know that's fake news Decent finish Steve Fox We all respect him for being a lyricist and kinda dope Psych, Schizo wack his verse is only quotable if they're tryin' to diagnose Skitz so wack? Kind of works but the context is either too awkward or doesn’t make sense I'm a grinder, re-writing verses bout niggas I'm up against Schiz' not a GrindR, unless we talkin' bout how he Tinder with other men Unless I’m missing something this is way too basic? "Notorious", came back and people name me a contender You're not a problem, child...More like the "Lil Heathen" nobody remembers Is this just about Connor McGregor and Jeremy Stephens? Might be missing something here Hands He wanna Bonita Applebum, but the game ain't nice Last time he was put on, film surfaced and the Ravens released Ray Rice Don’t really get the connection Son's wrestling with wackness that seeps through computers My legacy's money like Ted DiBiase. You gotta Legacy like Ted DiBiase Jr.'s set up well but it ends badly You're no threat. Small, weak, frail describes his frame Hands getting thrown before the real battle like Practice Mode in a fighting game Could’ve been better if it was hands thrown after the battle like khabib or something? Do fight games have practice modes before the fights? Hands Hands is winding up, both will get clocked with grave intent Watch batteries go down til neither one can ever tock the same again This is nicely done throughout I don't believe any of the hoopla that they're selling me This foe Schis'll be as much comp as Snoop Dogg at a spelling b Nice name flip Smoke will rise as I revoke ya lives with shots Consider yourself history as soon as I open Firefox Thought this was basic at first but just caught the name flip too and it’s nice Think you can escape? Bet. Say less, get far Or I'll just tap the trigger to aid stress - ASMR not sure about this one 2 pistols by my side and I'm firing surely If I brought the Colts' Andrew, Luck can't save ya from retiring early is someone’s name Andrew here? Empty an LMG into your ride on some dumb shit from afar KFC delivery man; everything from the drumsticks to your car Decent finish Best lines we’re Spotify, fighting game, the clock wp and Firefox was LOTB Vote - Hands, stronger throughout and two dope highlights |
Skizum-
Finger traps. Okay name play idea, clean but a jab Dance essamble it was done well enough with a enough complexity for a tired word association idea, still tired though. Space was current but lacked a punch to it Pianist- it was clean but simple idiom punch, send them to the Moon was a meh as a jump off point Spotify wordplay done to def but okay version here. Fox News was a simple jab but okay Fox Psych-Not a massive fan of the execution of this idea. Borderline okay Grindr- a bit obvious basic angle Unless I’m missing more too this from the lil heathen part this wasn’t great I stopped watching wrestling at 12 I don’t know this angle beyond one guy was rich. Closer was your best bar Hands/barc/Hollywood/Cronus -I don’t appreciate the rage qui/creating an alias same week shit it just sad. Batteries- I think I’m missing all of this . For the love of god don’t tell me I was supposed to read rock as talk. Spelling b was cool Firefox was okay Asmr wasn’t linked in great American sports references can fuck off Drumstick wasn’t good. I’d just edge this to Michal/AuntRuths nephew I’d give the two other guys around a4.5/5 out ten.mike around 6 out ten. All can do better v/hands |
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Schism seemed really rust Fox had some wording and concept issues Crohands had the best bars V handcotic |
I'm no rook check the facts; ur jaw won't stay intact
Cuz Talking any shit will get hands stuck like Chinese finger traps cool U cant fight; n that's not going on a hunch w/ a little whiskey I'll tango with fox trot n have him dropped in one punch ok My wordplay witty; sorry for u to have to face this flaunt when my verse drop it'll send these two guys to the moon like the spaceX launch too simple, not really feeling it U new? Dont panic! One hook n you'll vanish And I'll put a cramp In hands style like a beginner pianist this is ok, the word "style" doesnt really fit in with the second meaning I'm the king; even my thrones golden Lets be real.. you couldn't take my spotify sold out like joe rogan nah, this is been done a lot. Also you use "like" in a lot of your punches which generally isn't received well by many of the voters here Not pulling any punches; I'm going to degrade dude Cuz truth is nobody listening to fox.. we all know that's fake news ok idea, wording couldve been harsher We all respect him for being a lyricist and kinda dope Psych, Schizo wack his verse is only quotable if they're tryin' to diagnose ok opener I'm a grinder, re-writing verses bout niggas I'm up against Schiz' not a GrindR, unless we talkin' bout how he Tinder with other men eh its been done a lot, wording is solid though "Notorious", came back and people name me a contender You're not a problem, child...More like the "Lil Heathen" nobody remembers not a fan of the wording on this one He wanna Bonita Applebum, but the game ain't nice Last time he was put on, film surfaced and the Ravens released Ray Rice ok, reference is a little old but not really old/iconic enough to be a classic reference Son's wrestling with wackness that seeps through computers My legacy's money like Ted DiBiase. You gotta Legacy like Ted DiBiase Jr.'s ok You're no threat. Small, weak, frail describes his frame Hands getting thrown before the real battle like Practice Mode in a fighting game I like this concept but the wording weakened it for me Hands is winding up, both will get clocked with grave intent Watch batteries go down til neither one can ever tock the same again dope opener, lotb so far I don't believe any of the hoopla that they're selling me This foe Schis'll be as much comp as Snoop Dogg at a spelling b nah im not feeling this Smoke will rise as I revoke ya lives with shots Consider yourself history as soon as I open Firefox not loving the execution, but the concept's dope Think you can escape? Bet. Say less, get far Or I'll just tap the trigger to aid stress - ASMR same comment as above, i love this concept. Saying you're gonna do it to aid stress just isn't an aggressive enough idea 2 pistols by my side and I'm firing surely If I brought the Colts' Andrew, Luck can't save ya from retiring early eh not feeling it. Seen this andrew luck type wp done and i wasnt a fan of the execution Empty an LMG into your ride on some dumb shit from afar KFC delivery man; everything from the drumsticks to your car ok closer I got watch batteries as lotb. I got steve fox in 2nd place behind hands but I think hands was overall more consistent with fresh concepts and better execution v/ Hands |
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fox news vs practice mode vs batteries spelling b firefox hands was better here, a lil more consistant and spelling b was funny and prob lotb.. good 3 way v hands |
Good shit hands I honestly thought this was going to be no shows
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I got hands too. Fo Shizzle was terrible but other than that he was cool. Shis and DLB seemed rusty. Both will get better as weeks go on. Practice mode was okay. Fox News was okay. Connections just needed to be better.
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