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Blue Bayou 05-11-2020 05:38 PM

Week 6: Contendership Match: Destroyer (4-1) vs. Flow (3-1) - FLOW WINS
 
NBL Season XIV

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@Destroyer
@Flow

Blue Bayou 05-14-2020 05:51 PM

@Destroyer
@Flow

Check in

Flow 05-14-2020 06:16 PM

Check. Ext. Post in morning.. like 10 hours from now

Destroyer 05-14-2020 07:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 770144)
NBL Season XIV
• A check in isn't mandatory,


Blue Bayou 05-14-2020 07:50 PM

If I say it's encouraged , you do it.

You're on thin ice pal

Flow 05-14-2020 08:06 PM

Lmao at both of you. @Destroyer good luck pal

Destroyer 05-15-2020 09:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flow (Post 770557)
This contender beef.. an this cattle miss the triple cus he a fake bitch that's well beaten
Eaten by AK so fast Allen's breath been stinkin of whack faggot since there last meeting

u been sneaking into easy wins lately, so I see no need to fight fair
How u ever gonna be where it’s at? Bitch, you ain’t even “right there”
I’m not even here to bring bars. Just here to bruise u & stab shit
cuz I been like efflorescence he proved he was a blooming faggot
& there are bones about it... what I mean is this lad’s gay
this dude been in bed w/Lars wayyy before Jackie Q said namaste
He’s got Love for the game, met a girl, got scared and he lost her
this guy’s trying to stay a Packer til he retires - no Aaron Rodgers
fucking British bitch. I don’t know how else to tell u to be gone queer.
How the fuck u gonna be limey on NCs and somehow still not belong here??
& how u in a contender match? all I seen u write is so garbage...
someone fucked up the schematics somewhere if we see flowcharted
u stole that 1-2 title from Blue... i mean if we’re speaking honestly
That’s one Dunbar that won’t be getting cleared of alleged robbery
it’s over dude. This is ur brexit. Boris Johnson with a cobra tooth...
this be such a bloody rape, I guarantee Lars comes in to drop a vote for u

Flow 05-15-2020 10:51 PM

Waste of space, when it comes to life I guess your just passing through
Such a dead weight the only mark you left on life was your son taking after you
N homies pathetic, loss after loss got you an emotional wreck
old bitch gettin robbed every other week.. no wonder you hold Bags so close to your chest
Yes were both about hip hop.. jus mine isn't the name of a medical condition lurking
Shit this old g says his kidneys Ouch cus they black n not working
An your deserving of HOF for the work you've put into this dying hobby...
Never thought I'd see the text game bored, but bet your ol' ass prolly still owns a copy
Ten years ago I was still a rookie you were already scoldin peers
Ironic you ain't won shit in a decade an these are your so called "golden years"
Honestly fear that when I'm your age I'll also find everything played
But then you were knee high to a grass hopper when God still sent em as plagues
Lil bitch made neanderthal.. this was never a contest
Helped invent the wheel n still never got his head around fire concepts
N no disrespect..Destro had a kid die.. I know cus i asked his midwife
She said your miss carriage was a bigger vegetable than Cinderella’s after midnight

Incredible 05-16-2020 07:38 AM

Lil bitch made neanderthal.. this was never a contest
Helped invent the wheel n still never got his head around fire concepts


Vs.

u stole that 1-2 title from Blue... i mean if we’re speaking honestly
That’s one Dunbar that won’t be getting cleared of alleged robbery


Damn rough battle to vote on here and not because of how good each battler did. What happen here guys? With flow calling him old or ol so many times I thought he was on a farm. And destroyer with the expected Lars tie ins was just Elementary. Look I get it you probably both would win against me. So me making a joke about it may not make much sense but this just wasnt good and I couldnt help it.

The 2 bars above are imo the best from both. If this were a 1-2 battle and it was a judge between just those bars this would go to des cool current event creative concept and pretty cool wordplay. But this isn't and as a whole and not by much at all Flows was better. While his concepts of old this/your dead kid that were light jabs. Felt like they still were overall better than whatever des was trying to put together there. No offense just 100 percent the worst des verse I've ever seen. Vote - Flow

Coop 05-16-2020 11:52 AM

Destroyer

u been sneaking into easy wins lately, so I see no need to fight fair
How u ever gonna be where it’s at? Bitch, you ain’t even “right there”
Kind of a weak opener to criticize his spelling
I’m not even here to bring bars. Just here to bruise u & stab shit
cuz I been like efflorescence he proved he was a blooming faggot
The np works, but barely. Good creative effort. Set-up could've been more relevant.
& there are bones about it... what I mean is this lad’s gay
this dude been in bed w/Lars wayyy before Jackie Q said namaste
Meh personal
He’s got Love for the game, met a girl, got scared and he lost her
this guy’s trying to stay a Packer til he retires - no Aaron Rodgers
All bars that end like this are misses
fucking British bitch. I don’t know how else to tell u to be gone queer.
How the fuck u gonna be limey on NCs and somehow still not belong here??
Punches that are statements need to be witty or harsh to work.
& how u in a contender match? all I seen u write is so garbage...
someone fucked up the schematics somewhere if we see flowcharted
This was better than the last one, but the np doesn't work both ways.
u stole that 1-2 title from Blue... i mean if we’re speaking honestly
That’s one Dunbar that won’t be getting cleared of alleged robbery
Above avg filler
it’s over dude. This is ur brexit. Boris Johnson with a cobra tooth...
this be such a bloody rape, I guarantee Lars comes in to drop a vote for u
Another Lars reference. Meh for a closer


Flowed well, but not enough wow factor in those statement punches & personals. The efflorescence bar out shined the rest of the verse.


4/10


vs


Flow

Waste of space, when it comes to life I guess your just passing through
Such a dead weight the only mark you left on life was your son taking after you
Already the lotb
N homies pathetic, loss after loss got you an emotional wreck
old bitch gettin robbed every other week.. no wonder you hold Bags so close to your chest
Saying he got robbed, is saying he should've won, which is praise. Other than that, decent
Yes were both about hip hop.. jus mine isn't the name of a medical condition lurking
Shit this old g says his kidneys Ouch cus they black n not working
I like the black n not working concept, but not really how it was used here
An your deserving of HOF for the work you've put into this dying hobby...
Never thought I'd see the text game bored, but bet your ol' ass prolly still owns a copy
Above avg filler
Ten years ago I was still a rookie you were already scoldin peers
Ironic you ain't won shit in a decade an these are your so called "golden years"
Would be better but this is 4 straight bars referencing him being old.
Honestly fear that when I'm your age I'll also find everything played
But then you were knee high to a grass hopper when God still sent em as plagues
See above. 5.
Lil bitch made neanderthal.. this was never a contest
Helped invent the wheel n still never got his head around fire concepts
See above. 6. This is the best one though.
N no disrespect..Destro had a kid die.. I know cus i asked his midwife
She said your miss carriage was a bigger vegetable than Cinderella’s after midnight
Definitely harsh if true. Decent if not.


I liked the verse overall, but the old theme got tired fast. I would've slightly reworded the dead weight & not workin punchlines, went elsewhere with text game board & golden years concepts, got rid of plagues, and made fire concepts your opener.

7/10



Vote - Flow

Neighbor 05-16-2020 08:30 PM

I’m not even here to bring bars. Just here to bruise u & stab shit
cuz I been like efflorescence he proved he was a blooming faggot
He’s got Love for the game, met a girl, got scared and he lost her
this guy’s trying to stay a Packer til he retires - no Aaron Rodgers
& how u in a contender match? all I seen u write is so garbage...
someone fucked up the schematics somewhere if we see flowcharted
it’s over dude. This is ur brexit. Boris Johnson with a cobra tooth...
this be such a bloody rape, I guarantee Lars comes in to drop a vote for u

vs.

Ten years ago I was still a rookie you were already scoldin peers
Ironic you ain't won shit in a decade an these are your so called "golden years"
Honestly fear that when I'm your age I'll also find everything played
But then you were knee high to a grass hopper when God still sent em as plagues
Lil bitch made neanderthal.. this was never a contest
Helped invent the wheel n still never got his head around fire concepts
N no disrespect..Destro had a kid die.. I know cus i asked his midwife
She said your miss carriage was a bigger vegetable than Cinderella’s after midnight


So this is a close one, opposite the voting so far. I thought Des had some good concepts per usual, but slipped up on the wording/execution here & there.. those little tweaks that're the difference between a jab & a haymaker. Overall, a consistent verse w/ ups that balanced the downs. Flow started off really slow.. I basically thought Des was going to run away w/ it as I wasn't feeling his first 4 bars, at all. The Ouch line was funny, but delivered kinda haphazardly, imho. Halfway through his verse, he picked up steam & started landing some big shots, finishing strong; that closer was probably LOTB. As much as it pains me to vote against Des, I have to keep it a buck & go w/ who I felt landed the heavier shots.. despite this one being very, very close. It comes down to quotables as you both had 4 misses & I think Flow was more effective w/ his lines that hit

v/ Flow

P.S. Des, I love you <3

Ryno 05-17-2020 10:38 AM

Got it 3-3. Des has his opener, efflorescence, and flowcharted. Flow had mark on life, plagues, and his closer. Light scrap. I think Des misses were worse than Flows. Wish glow would have cleaned up the ouch punch. Could have been a banger. But I think flow had the better verse.

V/Flow

Saint 05-17-2020 05:02 PM

I’m not even here to bring bars. Just here to bruise u & stab shit
cuz I been like efflorescence he proved he was a blooming faggot
& how u in a contender match? all I seen u write is so garbage...
someone fucked up the schematics somewhere if we see flowcharted

+ Aaron Rodgers - almost

vs.

Ten years ago I was still a rookie you were already scoldin peers
Ironic you ain't won shit in a decade an these are your so called "golden years"
Honestly fear that when I'm your age I'll also find everything played
But then you were knee high to a grass hopper when God still sent em as plagues - jab but points for creativity
N no disrespect..Destro had a kid die.. I know cus i asked his midwife
She said your miss carriage was a bigger vegetable than Cinderella’s after midnight - lotb

I've got Flow w/ the heavier hits in the battle imo
closer was lotb, golden years was cool too..
some jabs, some wording issues too..

V- Flow

Barcotic 05-17-2020 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flow (Post 770717)
Waste of space, when it comes to life I guess your just passing through
Such a dead weight the only mark you left on life was your son taking after you
Dece
N homies pathetic, loss after loss got you an emotional wreck
old bitch gettin robbed every other week.. no wonder you hold Bags so close to your chest
This is fire
Yes were both about hip hop.. jus mine isn't the name of a medical condition lurking
Shit this old g says his kidneys Ouch cus they black n not working
Huh?
An your deserving of HOF for the work you've put into this dying hobby...
Never thought I'd see the text game bored, but bet your ol' ass prolly still owns a copy
Nah
Ten years ago I was still a rookie you were already scoldin peers
Ironic you ain't won shit in a decade an these are your so called "golden years"
Ok, bland but ok
Honestly fear that when I'm your age I'll also find everything played
But then you were knee high to a grass hopper when God still sent em as plagues
Lmao k, creative & funny
Lil bitch made neanderthal.. this was never a contest
Helped invent the wheel n still never got his head around fire concepts
Dope
N no disrespect..Destro had a kid die.. I know cus i asked his midwife
She said your miss carriage was a bigger vegetable than Cinderella’s after midnight
Damn


Blue Bayou 05-17-2020 06:16 PM

Flow wins props to both


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