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Blue Bayou 05-03-2020 09:22 PM

Week 5: Sinacog Da Fuckin GAWD (0-3) vs. Slect (0-4) - SLECT WINS
 
NBL Season XIV

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@Serpent Lord
@Slect

slecht 05-03-2020 10:20 PM

All right

Sinacog 05-03-2020 11:23 PM

I'm Heaven's born, I'm the serpent lord from the German horn
Burning accord's of burning horns; I'll 'kill you' and you'll learn you're born..
I'm the perfect sword; I'm the serpent dragon from the wind dragon
I killed ten daggers, and killed ten dragons with ten daggers
I'm the wind dragon; I killed Chinese diplomats and aristocrats
I'm the Siamese twin from the lightning wind; I'm 'burning sea' like Iscariots
I'm the heaven's born wind dragon of RA: I'm the heaven's born dragon
I'm the anguish of ten dragons; I killed you with ten daggers
I'm the ten daggers of RA; I killed Chinese diplomats and aristocrats
I'm the wind dragon of RA; I killed a demon with a obelisk
I'm the demon swordsman; I killed accord's of anguish scorn
I'm the dragon horns; I 'killed sea' like Adam's thorn..

slecht 05-08-2020 04:31 AM

need ext, will post soon

slecht 05-09-2020 01:22 AM

aka Dragon Rapper.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinacog (Post 768220)
I am the asthma attack; the planet of rap; the planet of granite from the tangent of rap!
I'm the asthma attacker; I'm the asthma attacker; asthma attack


Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinacog (Post 768220)
I killed 50 zillion demons;

I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad.
Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled.
It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle.
here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure
with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia
I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon.
Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions
beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes.
If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.
another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump
U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters.
Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers.

Flow 05-09-2020 03:31 AM

Vote sinicog. Excellent work as usual.

Adverse 05-09-2020 04:11 AM

Honestly sick of feeding the narrative of Sinacog being this Brian Scalebrine type figure, dude never tries to improve and is essentially a free win for anyone who puts forward even a microcosm of an effort forward. The only thing even remotely resembling a punch in his verse was the “killed sea like Adams thorn” but even then it was a force and one attempt per battle verse will never win you anything. So again, I’m tired of feeding the narrative on Sin

Slecht is a bit of a sleeper, he’s been a proven battler when not dealing with issues with deadlines and what not. This wasn’t his best verse by any means but it didn’t have to be. He had a few light jabs but they connected enough.

If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.
another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump
U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters.
Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers.

^ that was my favorite segment

So overall Slecht strolls his way to an easy win here but did you expect anything else?

V~Slecht

Destroyer 05-09-2020 11:16 AM

I only read slecht’s opener and sinicog’s entire verse
That opener slayed me

V/slecht

Flow 05-09-2020 01:46 PM

I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad.
lol decent
Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled.
It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle.
nice
here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure
with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia
don't get this one pal. My lack of vocabulary but not exactly a common word I don't think
I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon.
Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions
this was stretched as fuck and tbh felt overkill on sin plays, predictable
beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes.
If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.
coo
another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump
fair hit
U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters.
Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers.
meh I got it but wasn't savage enough for me

Decent showing. You did what needed to be done. Nice

Answer 05-09-2020 01:56 PM

So serious vote here, the only lines that sin has that can possibly be interpreted as being a diss to his opponent his "I'll 'kill you' and you'll learn you're born.." which doesn't make any sense, and maybee "I 'killed sea' like Adam's thorn.." which would only make sense if Slecht has some alias with the name "Sea". Otherwise sinacog's verse was essentially just a non-sensical topical verse, so I can't really do much of a breakdown on it

Slecht

I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad.

Funny opener. The whole 7 seas idea wouldn't generally be considered as an extra layer but since Sinacog is known for weird cryptic lines like this, I think it enhanced your bar.

Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled.
It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle.

This bar is a bit basic but it's funny.

here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure
with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia

I think you couldve attacked this concept in a different way and it wouldve landed harder.

I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon.
Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions

"Sin" bars are already pretty played out, so you should definitely aim to be more out of the box with your thinking when trying to come up with bars like this

beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes.
If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.

I like the general idea. Execution is okay, but it could've been a little smoother

another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump

Given the context from the quote, I thought this was a good bar

U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters.
Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers.

Okay wordplay, I don't feel like the wording is funny enough to make me lol nor is it aggressive enough to land as a haymaker



overall sinbad and asthma pump are the stand outs.

mvgt - slecht

Barcotic 05-10-2020 05:44 PM

I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad.
beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes.
If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.

another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump

vs

Nothing

Slect, work on matching your syllables in your rhymes. A few minor changes can make a huge diff.

Sin, I have no advice for a troll account that likely only exists to vote for himself

Mvgt Slect

Ouch 05-10-2020 05:53 PM

To be for real I wasn't feeling either, but after I read Sinacogs stuff I thought there is no way that the other guy can't win.

No offense to Sinacog but that was like some weird ass topical verse or something... and it seems like there is a language barrier


vote - slet for sure, I wasn't impressed by anything really but you know, live up to your competition or whatever.. he didn't need anything to win it.

no offense sincog keep writing but damn.

Blue Bayou 05-10-2020 05:59 PM

Slect wins


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