Netcees - Week 5: Defiant (2-2) vs. Answer (1-0)

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Week 5: Defiant (2-2) vs. Answer (1-0) - ANSWER WINS

NBL Season XIV

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@Defiant
@Answer

check

Pick however many bars you want to do. If you don't, I'm dropping 20. Please, no extensions, promise I’ll show before the deadline.

NS Verse

Save ur breath.. medics trynna do THAT while u intubated, gasping, doin a mime impression
Gun’s NBL - modded well, mags drop quick, and if u turn to blue nothing can get u a time extension
Have you EVER won a battle that wasn’t a noshow? This faggot dweeb acts retarded
Def was gonna drop but he knows that onesided.. this match would be that REGARDLESS
Defiant noshows his battles, dropped out of school, his marriage packed up and failed
Your issues staying committed apply to everything except being ass-fucked in jail
I can fake being a class act.. tell the press conference this ain’t a bad Bout at all, dude
Say “I can’t take anything away from my opponent..” then knock your ass out and rob you
Your fat troglodyte bitch trynna holler at me looking like an 8-foot carole baskin
She DM me again I’ll reply with 2 arms squeezing at her heart.. Send that facebook care reaction
She stan me getting aroused at every word I’ve ever spoken in a rap flow
Every concert I do she in the front row getting soaked like it’s the splash zone
I’ll punt the shit out your face, one roundhouse to your fucking tooth is inducing lockjaw
You need an energizing kick, I got that down to a Tea I’ll come through and Kombucha top off
Check your temper cause if you act out, I’ll leave you bruised in the street
The Rock as Derek Thompson.. If this fairy starts getting short, somebody’s losing their teeth
I was the odds on favorite to win the second they shared the thread, g
Covid exams, everyone expected Antibody and you were never prepared to test me
I’m a BEAST at rap shit, you’re hot garbage.. bet this nerd is left dead
Comparin our rhymes you see they’re soooooooooooooo far apart it’ll be the topic of headless verseman’s next thread

Answer wins by NS open for feed

Quote:

Originally Posted by Answer (Post 768656)

NS Verse

Save ur breath.. medics trynna do THAT while u intubated, gasping, doin a mime impression
Gun’s NBL - modded well, mags drop quick, and if u turn to blue nothing can get u a time extension

Nice cool stuff here

Have you EVER won a battle that wasn’t a noshow? This faggot dweeb acts retarded
Def was gonna drop but he knows that onesided.. this match would be that REGARDLESS

nah not feeling this one

Defiant noshows his battles, dropped out of school, his marriage packed up and failed
Your issues staying committed apply to everything except being ass-fucked in jail

Don't like the direction you went with this concept, but was worded smoothly so it hits.

I can fake being a class act.. tell the press conference this ain’t a bad Bout at all, dude
Say “I can’t take anything away from my opponent..” then knock your ass out and rob you

lol funny

Your fat troglodyte bitch trynna holler at me looking like an 8-foot carole baskin
She DM me again I’ll reply with 2 arms squeezing at her heart.. Send that facebook care reaction

nah

She stan me getting aroused at every word I’ve ever spoken in a rap flow
Every concert I do she in the front row getting soaked like it’s the splash zone

cool really well executed

I’ll punt the shit out your face, one roundhouse to your fucking tooth is inducing lockjaw
You need an energizing kick, I got that down to a Tea I’ll come through and Kombucha top off

lol, cool simple wp nicely worded

Check your temper cause if you act out, I’ll leave you bruised in the street
The Rock as Derek Thompson.. If this fairy starts getting short, somebody’s losing their teeth

this was ok

I was the odds on favorite to win the second they shared the thread, g
Covid exams, everyone expected Antibody and you were never prepared to test me

Nah

I’m a BEAST at rap shit, you’re hot garbage.. bet this nerd is left dead
Comparin our rhymes you see they’re soooooooooooooo far apart it’ll be the topic of headless verseman’s next thread

lol ur an asshat for this one

Allen nicely done, your unique spin on comedic wording is always a refreshing sight for sore eyes.

I’ll punt the shit out your face, one roundhouse to your fucking tooth is inducing lockjaw
You need an energizing kick, I got that down to a Tea I’ll come through and Kombucha top off

lol

Defiant noshows his battles, dropped out of school, his marriage packed up and failed
Your issues staying committed apply to everything except being ass-fucked in jail

lol'ed

Cool verse.. Shorten the lines only advice

Quote:

Originally Posted by Answer (Post 768656)

NS Verse

Save ur breath.. medics trynna do THAT while u intubated, gasping, doin a mime impression
Gun’s NBL - modded well, mags drop quick, and if u turn to blue nothing can get u a time extension
LOL. Nice flip. Mad WORDY but the punch is there
Have you EVER won a battle that wasn’t a noshow? This faggot dweeb acts retarded
Def was gonna drop but he knows that onesided.. this match would be that REGARDLESS
Eh okay.
Defiant noshows his battles, dropped out of school, his marriage packed up and failed
Your issues staying committed apply to everything except being ass-fucked in jail
Ok
I can fake being a class act.. tell the press conference this ain’t a bad Bout at all, dude
Say “I can’t take anything away from my opponent..” then knock your ass out and rob you
LOL, fair
Your fat troglodyte bitch trynna holler at me looking like an 8-foot carole baskin
She DM me again I’ll reply with 2 arms squeezing at her heart.. Send that facebook care reaction
dope.
She stan me getting aroused at every word I’ve ever spoken in a rap flow
Every concert I do she in the front row getting soaked like it’s the splash zone
ight
I’ll punt the shit out your face, one roundhouse to your fucking tooth is inducing lockjaw
You need an energizing kick, I got that down to a Tea I’ll come through and Kombucha top off
dppe
Check your temper cause if you act out, I’ll leave you bruised in the street
The Rock as Derek Thompson.. If this fairy starts getting short, somebody’s losing their teeth
nah
I was the odds on favorite to win the second they shared the thread, g
Covid exams, everyone expected Antibody and you were never prepared to test me
nice
I’m a BEAST at rap shit, you’re hot garbage.. bet this nerd is left dead
Comparin our rhymes you see they’re soooooooooooooo far apart it’ll be the topic of headless verseman’s next thread
no

Some misses, some haymakers in there. Overall, execution was nice. Some were wordy but overall, good work.