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Week 5 Contendership Match: Aura (3-0) vs. Letterman (3-1) - LETT WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due THURSDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends Sunday • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 14 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @Letterman @Aura |
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Letterman aka the David Blaine of netcees..
disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast 14. |
Aka Packed Graves
Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh |
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disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket nah doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! made me lol, cool I liked it everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life fire, damn this was dope make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped racist but I can dig it, cool erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle i think the wording hurt this, decent at best for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire huh imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast coulda been so dope, your execution made this just OK 3 good 1 ok 1 decent 2 misses Vs Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer fuck, this shit was DOPE. G tho I haven’t read something this nice in a long time. Thank you Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you shoulda said “at what I airdrop you” instead of when, but this was still cool and clever U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause ok I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving ha, nice I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack ehh wasn’t feelin it too much They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie nice It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh ok 4 good 2 ok 1 miss That sway from aura was a bitch move but the real ones won’t let it discredit letterman’s verse. Aside from that, aura had a pretty nice verse and I didn’t think it was going to be topped. That Black Widow line was crazy. Letterman had a stellar verse, barely any misses in it. Strongman is the best bar I’ve read in a while. Close battle and props to both. Vote Letterman |
Letterman aka the David Blaine of netcees..
disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket This wasn't it chief, seems very statement ish. doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! Idk pleth this isnt looking too good bro. Idk if u rushed this. But naw everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life I dont like the set up makes no sense to me, i get black widow/ african american but ur talking about his race not his wifes. For all we know shes hungarian lol. What does being african american have to do with a more depressed wife after death. make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped .bro cashius at least had dope ones vs karaoke. Ur racial bars either make no sense or are corny jokes at least make them dope like cashius did. erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle This was cool needed better wording tho for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire This one was not bad either, crafty imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast Light Quote:
V/ letter took this pretty comfortably ...pleth idk it seemed you struggled with writing for letter. Your usually much sharper. |
I got this one super close
Gonna re-read before I pick a winner Great battle, boys |
disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it
so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket -Decent idea, but I don’t feel like it was worded well enough to really stand out. doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! -Pretty funny concept. Not a huge hit but cool. everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life -I did a Scarlett/Black Widow bar a few years back, so this lost points for me. The Lett partial name play got some back. make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped -kind of light to me erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle -Not crazy about using a record as a concept. Seems a bit old, but the 7 up thing is cool. for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire -I see all the connections, but the whole concept/timeline just sees a little forced. And sun/son loses points even if it’s only one connection of many. imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast -Had to google. Still kind of missed for me. Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer -Cool concept. I don’t think I’ve seen it. Nice. Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you -Another cool one the Mac concept doesn’t fee super fresh. AirDrop is cool tho. The message tie in feels a bit old too. U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause -This is ok. I would’ve like the connection to be better and I think you could’ve taken it a different direction. I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving -I thought this was dope. I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack -Not feeing this. They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie -This was a cool idea. Just like last dance I think this could’ve been fire if you did something different with the tie ins. It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh -This was dope. This was a cool battle. Props to both. It was pretty close but I think Letterman had the two lines of the battle with Kyrie and Engrave. So, I’m going to go with Letterman by a small margin. |
Uppp....this battle is fire
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Thought you both had some really creative lines that hit well & not a lot of misses After reading each verse a few times, I have Aura winning by a small margin.. I felt like he was slightly more creative. LOTB definitely goes to Letterman w/ that Kyrie Irving bar, though I know Letterman’s up in votes right now, so I can break it down further if need be v/ Aura |
Cool battle. I don’t have time for a full breakdown but as far as dope bars go I got the following :
Aura - Black widow, 7up Vs Letterman - Strongman, AirDrop, Kyriee Irving, Polygraph Letterman gets this for me. More stand out hits. Strong man was fire. Dug the styles of both though and enjoyed the read. Vote - Letterman |
disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it
so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket i like the idea, execution couldve been better but overall a good opener doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! wording is funny, execution is a little rough but decent bar everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life okay, not quite on par with your first 2 bars make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped nah not really feeling this erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle decent idea, but the execution just isnt landing with me for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire kinda the theme with all the bars here, I like the ideas you've got going but when you put them together they're not landing quite as hard as they could imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast its a current event and all but im not really digging this one. You kinda had to make up a whole weird scenario where blue steps down and letterman becomes a mod to make this work, which is too much Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer good opener Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you think the execution could've been done better but overall I like this U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause Not really digging this one I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving I think this just has too many dated ideas and not enough new spin on it I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack nah, this a miss for me. They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie The context here is also a bit forced, this is okay It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh I like the wording and execution more than I like the idea itself, decent closer this is a bit tough to vote on, I think Aura had some better ideas overall but Letterman definitely had better execution and wording. I think ultimately Letterman gets this for being more polished overall. I can see this going either way though tbh. Airdrop and and strongman were lotb followed by aura's opener. mvgt - Letterman |
This was a decent battle
I have Aura here on just more variety of punch types Letterman kind of overdid it on the nameplays which I think hurt him whether they were the right name to make plays on or not. Irving was ok, I hate that end of the line style tho which hurt it for me Black widow and 4-letter words were dope V/aura |
doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt
had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped vs Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie Aura, I did a Scarlett nameplay on him already but yours was different enough w/ the black widow flip to still hit Letter, I almost bolded the polygraph bar bc it's fire...w the expection of how elementary the rhyming was Iunno fellas, I'll bb |
Let's gooo
Aura: disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket ^ good idea but the execution lacked imo doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! ^ decent hit here good nameplay everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life ^ dope here make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped ^ I'll echo the kind of racist thing but way to keep the theme going and this was decent erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle ^ it's okay for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire ^ i don't know ehh imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast ^was okay not the best imo Letterman: Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer ^ cool reference, solid opener Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you ^ been a lot of mac references liked the airdrop tie in but this wasn't executed the best U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause ^ehhh alright I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving ^ loved this lol I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack ^ alright They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie ^decent enough It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh ^ decent closer MVGT/Letterman his verse was just a little more consistent imo |
Letterman took this
Irving, Krause, hammer lines were all dope Oddly, I only liked Aura’s opener. Not much else there. Vote - Letter |
disappeared last contender match, ur punches were weaaak to top it
so slight of hand when they gave u Cash, now that nigga has $50 in his pocket Ok. Cash obv incredibly overdone but the relevance makes it okay doggystyled ur girl screaming yes daddy while i dicked her butt had her on all Four Letter, Word.. she kept saying oh shit & fuck! This was cringe to me. Needed better wording to carry it off. Set up didn’t help. everyone knows ur african-american so ur death'll depress ur wife leave a permanent Scarlett, & she'll play the role of Black Widow rest of her life This is fireee make that bitch my sex slave, every homie plan to get laid so when we run a train at night, it'll remind u of how ur ancestors escaped Fire again. Don demarco. Racist bars in 2020 yeesh erase ur last loss boss, then its laser beam on top of the nickel wanna make sure ur record 7up, when u get the can with a red dot in the middle Okay okay for five racks burn ur child to ash off my windshield & tires see sun go thru glass over paper, & thats exactly how ima start the fire Can’t rock with a sun bar. Doesn’t matter if Shakespeare himself wrote it imagine Blue retired & Lett overseeing nbl, i'll pop one fast if u were Ahmaud Running Down the Road, it'll all end with a shotgun blast Too much of a stretch conceptually to work man Vs Letterman: Muscles don’t block bullets. 1911 pistol.. I’m not one for the glamour But it doesn’t matter if you’re strongman, you can still get your bell rung from a hammer This is nice, well worded Think it’s a game, end up in pain— you‘ll really get shot, fool I’m sending a message with the Mac, so don’t be surprised when what I airdrop you AirDrop tie in made it okay U said u were the man at prom, but ur date said that was very false She couldn’t wait for the last dance, that bitch hated the feel more than Jerry Krause Could have flipped this way better bro it’s a miss as it is I’ll gunbutt you over & over, just to make sure this guy leaves hurtin’ I don’t even gotta pull up & shoot, I can just beat you with the handle - Kyrie Irving This is firee I fuck bitches better than you. Your ex bitch is who you can ask, in fact.. She said ur sex was boring.. & thats why she came to me whenever she wanted action, pack That’s not his alias so this missed They quote all ur make believe shit. Why does this pretender try? Polygraph Test - Cuz you get a reaction, but we can all tell from the lines that it’s a lie A little wordy IMO - lines concepts been overdone. I’ll give you an ok It’s over once I use the blade & I rip thru ur chest But this is gonna be your engraves, once letter starts carving into your flesh Not him so again it misses Good battle of two up and comers in this league. I think Aura edged it, Lett wasted two bars on nameplays that didn’t relate to Aura, if he had used those bars wisely it might have been different imo. However, a good match, vote Aura |
Aura
Opener, four letter word, ancestors escaped, scarlet and closer Let Jerry Krause, action pack, kyrie Irving and closer. This was a dope battle for sure. It’s a toss up and can go either way. I think though aura was more consistent with hit after hit. He had more lines that I found to have a harder impact. Felt like Lett could of been a bit more harsh with his wording. Enjoyed the read. I got aura by a hair. Aura |
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