Week 3: FGR (1-1) vs. Neighbor (1-0) - NEIGH WINS
 

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@FGR
@Neighbor

Check

12?

Yup

@FGR i have received Neighbors 12

We can go toe to toe in this fight. The punches your supplying are worse
If you hear he's beating me to death It's bcuz Im killing him first
Face to face I would trash u.. a smack or two and he's done
I'll beat your ass halfway home then feel bad about you living in one
I can't stand this lame fuck. And everyone here hates you alot
Final stage boss? We're hoping that's what the doctor says when asking what kind of cancer you got
I don't shoot to wound I shoot to kill. So this dude ain't stopping me
If I dump the clip at Boreas dead! & I ain't into Greek mythology
Imma pull up n murder everybody... Mom, dad, even your young kin
Bring that rifle thru your house so fast you'd think I was looking for something
Barrel aimed at your head... There's no point in wearing a vest
Neigh better run from this armorial get put in a box like storing a family crest


@Blue Bayou

Wtf's an FGR? lol


My resume's stacked; 50+ wins on the dopest to board w/ you
Before eyewitness F-150, they'll be describin the truck I loaded ya corpse into
Getcha face sawed & sliced til I snap the fuckin blade off the knife
It's effortless.. w/out breakin a sweat, lodge in the temple like a Masonic shrine
Let a cartridge burst in ya living room - ya wife or ya daughter first?
Tied up, held at gunpoint; put ya fam in the middle of the sticks like Martin Byrde
Ya whole world do a 180° - I empty shells, you ain't gettin ANY help
The semi melt; what I pull off the buckle's flippin F's upside-down like a Fendi belt
Ya bitch be payin me for sex; that whore won't stop takin porno shots
& trust me, I ain't cheap - it cost her $10K to get the Loadout like a Warzone drop
Nuclear bomb attached to ya ride; irony's in the Glad bags ya tied to:
Ya gettin my throwaways for Chemist & they'll be diggin through HAZMAT to find you


G'luck

We can go toe to toe in this fight. The punches your supplying are worse
If you hear he's beating me to death It's bcuz Im killing him first

I had a similar bar in my verse this week, but this is cool 8/10

Face to face I would trash u.. a smack or two and he's done
I'll beat your ass halfway home then feel bad about you living in one

cool concept, think it could've been worded in a way that was either more aggressive or more comedic 7/10

I can't stand this lame fuck. And everyone here hates you alot
Final stage boss? We're hoping that's what the doctor says when asking what kind of cancer you got

I like this, thought the line does seem a bit stretched out in comparison to the rest 8/10

I don't shoot to wound I shoot to kill. So this dude ain't stopping me
If I dump the clip at Boreas dead! & I ain't into Greek mythology

this would be cool but the pronunciation is baw ree us which doesn't fit in with the "bor he's" wp i think you're going for. 6/10

Imma pull up n murder everybody... Mom, dad, even your young kin
Bring that rifle thru your house so fast you'd think I was looking for something

I like the concept, it's fresh and creative. Syntactically it could be executed better though 7/10


Barrel aimed at your head... There's no point in wearing a vest
Neigh better run from this armorial get put in a box like storing a family crest

Not sure if this has been done, but I haven't seen it. Cool concept, but again the wording could just be executed better 7/10


43/60 - 71.67%

My resume's stacked; 50+ wins on the dopest to board w/ you
Before eyewitness F-150, they'll be describin the truck I loaded ya corpse into

this reads like it was a chore to word correctly, and overall I think it was worded pretty well but still sort of flawed in saying "I witness F won 50" vs. the correct syntax of "before I witness F win 50". Nitpicking, but I think it's a good bar. 8/10


Getcha face sawed & sliced til I snap the fuckin blade off the knife
It's effortless.. w/out breakin a sweat, lodge in the temple like a Masonic shrine

I don't really know of any real association with masonic shrines having sweat lodges and kinda the same comment as above about the wording reading like it's a chore, not that it isn't done well. 7/10

Let a cartridge burst in ya living room - ya wife or ya daughter first?
Tied up, held at gunpoint; put ya fam in the middle of the sticks like Martin Byrde

I've only watched a couple episodes of ozark but the wording is pretty self explanatory and comes off much smoother than the previous two bars imo. I haven't really been reading many battles lately so I don't know if it's been done, but it's fresh to me. 8.5/10

Ya whole world do a 180° - I empty shells, you ain't gettin ANY help
The semi melt; what I pull off the buckle's flippin F's upside-down like a Fendi belt

This is solid and the wording is executed well, but the concept itself just seems a bit basic/obvious on the name even if it's not played. 7/10

Ya bitch be payin me for sex; that whore won't stop takin porno shots
& trust me, I ain't cheap - it cost her $10K to get the Loadout like a Warzone drop

This is dope, 8.5/10

Nuclear bomb attached to ya ride; irony's in the Glad bags ya tied to:
Ya gettin my throwaways for Chemist & they'll be diggin through HAZMAT to find you

real solid closer 8/10

47 / 60 - 78.3%


I've never seen FGR before, I thought he had some dope concepts but overall I think the wording on some of the bars weren't to my preference, and I think the boreas line was a big misstep against a consistent opponent unless there's some alternative wp intended that I just missed. That being said, I think he kept it a close match-up and would've had my vote with a couple minor changes

I've enjoyed most of the verses I've seen from Neighbor, and this wasn't an exception. Admittedly, I have seen better from him, but it seems apparent to me that he takes both sides of the syntax when wording his bars and drives them home well, and being able to do that consistently is about 70% of what makes a good bar, with the other 30% being creativity and potential behind the concept.

mvgt Neighbor

FGR

Beating me to death
Final stage boss
Rifle thru ur house

A decent verse. These 3 stood out to me most with final stage boss being your best line

Neighbour

Masonic shrine
Fendi belt
War zone drop

Decent verse here too. I enjoyed your fendi belt line most then warzone drop

This is real tough. I like both of your styles and it’s hard to pick a fave from these 2 drops. 3 quotes each so I need to determine who’s verse was stronger as a whole.

Neighbour had that Byrd line which I can see is cool. However, I haven’t seen the show yet and had to look it up... takes the sting out. Closer was ok and opener I didn’t enjoy.

FGR had armorial which was ok I guess. Just don’t massively enjoy wordplay bars unless they’re super dope and unexpected.
Boreas and halfway home wasn’t really feeling

After much consideration,
My votes going too - Neighbour

this battle was lowkey fire

well ..hold up.. i take that back

there were a few bangers. unique flips that i particularly liked.

We can go toe to toe in this fight. The punches your supplying are worse
If you hear he's beating me to death It's bcuz Im killing him first
(this is pretty cool. kinda came off bland but its an alright open)
Face to face I would trash u.. a smack or two and he's done
I'll beat your ass halfway home then feel bad about you living in one
(i like this. never seen this flip oddly enough)
I can't stand this lame fuck. And everyone here hates you alot
Final stage boss? We're hoping that's what the doctor says when asking what kind of cancer you got
(cool)
I don't shoot to wound I shoot to kill. So this dude ain't stopping me
If I dump the clip at Boreas dead! & I ain't into Greek mythology
(fractional nameplays. not a fan of you going at the BOR part of his name. noone calls him Bor bro)
Imma pull up n murder everybody... Mom, dad, even your young kin
Bring that rifle thru your house so fast you'd think I was looking for something
(underrated bar. really like this)
Barrel aimed at your head... There's no point in wearing a vest
Neigh better run from this armorial get put in a box like storing a family crest
(nah)

y resume's stacked; 50+ wins on the dopest to board w/ you
Before eyewitness F-150, they'll be describin the truck I loaded ya corpse into
(ok little loose w/ the F-150 shit in regards to that LOOKNG like his name w/ the record. but passable)
Getcha face sawed & sliced til I snap the fuckin blade off the knife
It's effortless.. w/out breakin a sweat, lodge in the temple like a Masonic shrine
(blade off the knife/masonic shrine was a little clunky but the concept is dope. this is alright as an result rather than firel)
Let a cartridge burst in ya living room - ya wife or ya daughter first?
Tied up, held at gunpoint; put ya fam in the middle of the sticks like Martin Byrde
(cooL)
Ya whole world do a 180° - I empty shells, you ain't gettin ANY help
The semi melt; what I pull off the buckle's flippin F's upside-down like a Fendi belt
( nice)
Ya bitch be payin me for sex; that whore won't stop takin porno shots
& trust me, I ain't cheap - it cost her $10K to get the Loadout like a Warzone drop
(this was clever. i fw this)
Nuclear bomb attached to ya ride; irony's in the Glad bags ya tied to:
Ya gettin my throwaways for Chemist & they'll be diggin through HAZMAT to find you
(mmmmm idk . didnt really raise my eyebrow or anything)

i think i got neigh here. but hold up
v/neighbor

super close lemme look again

fuck..yeah.. if fgr hadnt had two blatant misses i think he takes this fr. neighbor was slighty more consistent

We can go toe to toe in this fight. The punches your supplying are worse
If you hear he's beating me to death It's bcuz Im killing him first
wasn't overly keen on this, not enough going in an wasn't savage enough to make up for that lack of complexity
Face to face I would trash u.. a smack or two and he's done
I'll beat your ass halfway home then feel bad about you living in one
lol simple but effective. Made me laugh
I can't stand this lame fuck. And everyone here hates you alot
Final stage boss? We're hoping that's what the doctor says when asking what kind of cancer you got
ok, clean, still just jabs ATM but consistent
I don't shoot to wound I shoot to kill. So this dude ain't stopping me
If I dump the clip at Boreas dead! & I ain't into Greek mythology
I have no idea what is going on here, Boreas... Bore ears? Bore? Is he boring? Neighbour... Neigh I'd shorten that too. Even if it was bore.. bore as dead? Bore ears dead. No idea here
Imma pull up n murder everybody... Mom, dad, even your young kin
Bring that rifle thru your house so fast you'd think I was looking for something
this was fire man. I love this
Barrel aimed at your head... There's no point in wearing a vest
Neigh better run from this armorial get put in a box like storing a family crest
quite clever this tbf. Probably could have done more with the wording an not as clean as the others but it's clever


VS

Wtf's an FGR? lol
I presumed it's either a gun or he's just being a git using a hard to flip name. Total dick move but not a bad shout lol

My resume's stacked; 50+ wins on the dopest to board w/ you
Before eyewitness F-150, they'll be describin the truck I loaded ya corpse into
ohhhh snapp. Were you highlighting is unflippable name just for this bar cus if so that was subtle Jedi mind trickery and a boss move..either or I thought this bar was fire
Getcha face sawed & sliced til I snap the fuckin blade off the knife
It's effortless.. w/out breakin a sweat, lodge in the temple like a Masonic shrine
not a fan
Let a cartridge burst in ya living room - ya wife or ya daughter first?
Tied up, held at gunpoint; put ya fam in the middle of the sticks like Martin Byrde
ssheesh. Fire bar, amazed this hadn't been done before given ozarks popularity. But yeah man dope
Ya whole world do a 180° - I empty shells, you ain't gettin ANY help
The semi melt; what I pull off the buckle's flippin F's upside-down like a Fendi belt
creative idea here
Ya bitch be payin me for sex; that whore won't stop takin porno shots
& trust me, I ain't cheap - it cost her $10K to get the Loadout like a Warzone drop
hahaha that's the shit son. Dope
Nuclear bomb attached to ya ride; irony's in the Glad bags ya tied to:
Ya gettin my throwaways for Chemist & they'll be diggin through HAZMAT to find you
meh I'm not so sure on this one

Interesting..I think this is definitely a contender for botw. Tbh I think the was probably more consistent. Neighbours ending and masonic shrine fell flat for me compared to FGRs only miss of Boreas (pm me wtf that was supposed to be man). However, despite FGR having a fire bar with the rifle, the rest were jabs for me. Neighbour had some absolute fire bars in here, the loadout the opener the Ozark line. Sheesh. Even that belt buckle bar was dope tbf.

Great read from both but neighbour took this for me comfortably with reflection.

Vote neigh

can go toe to toe in this fight. The punches your supplying are worse
If you hear he's beating me to death It's bcuz Im killing him first
Face to face I would trash u.. a smack or two and he's done
I'll beat your ass halfway home then feel bad about you living in one
I can't stand this lame fuck. And everyone here hates you alot
Final stage boss? We're hoping that's what the doctor says when asking what kind of cancer you got
Imma pull up n murder everybody... Mom, dad, even your young kin
Bring that rifle thru your house so fast you'd think I was looking for something

Vs.

My resume's stacked; 50+ wins on the dopest to board w/ you
Before eyewitness F-150, they'll be describin the truck I loaded ya corpse into
Getcha face sawed & sliced til I snap the fuckin blade off the knife
It's effortless.. w/out breakin a sweat, lodge in the temple like a Masonic shrine
Ya whole world do a 180° - I empty shells, you ain't gettin ANY help
The semi melt; what I pull off the buckle's flippin F's upside-down like a Fendi belt
Nuclear bomb attached to ya ride; irony's in the Glad bags ya tied to:
Ya gettin my throwaways for Chemist & they'll be diggin through HAZMAT to find you


4-4 in quotes. neighbor had 2 personals in the bars I quoted vs. 1 for FGR so that's the tiebreaker.


V-Neighbor

5-0 neigh wins

Great battles guys some real nice concepts in this one