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Week 2: FGR (0-1) vs. Sinacog (0-0) - FGR wins
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due Wednesday by 11:59 PM PST. • Goal is for voting to end Saturdays • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @FGR @Sinacog |
I'm the salutations of a raptor rapper; rapture raptor; the essence rapper
Capture master; abracadabra; this is a communion with crucifixion; no need to 'wine/whine' you''re a peasant cracker!! Message capture; I'm the rhetoric master; the essence! abracadabara! MASTER OF RAPPERS! The master of candor; I am jasper and casper! Abracadabara murdered abracadabra! I'm the blade cutter; I'm the essence of rap; the message of rap; the message of *ZAP* I'm the message of *ZAP*; the rhetoric rapper; I'm killing 'FGR' with a RPG!! I'm the message rapper; the message *ZAPPER*; the essence rapper; the rhetoric spitter! The rhetoric spitter; the rhetoric spitter! FGR? *READ A BOOK* you're 'such a bitch' you're the essence of giver! I'm the message spitter; the message of rap; the message of *ZAP* the message of *ZAP* I'm the essence of rap; I'm the 'gene pool' the inherited gene's of *RAPTOR*!! I'm the rhetoric spitter; the message of spitter; I conquered platoons of *PHONICS* I'm embryonic; the tectonic plate that *CUT* the *PLACE*; I hope you're *FUCKING ERASED*! I'm the bubonic plague; the death of masters; abracadabra! The message of rappers; the *RHETORIC SPITTER*; I *INHERITED NINEVEH* I conquered platoons of grasshoppers; water buffalo; and Chinese aristocrats! I'm the Chinese diplomat; I killed *THE HEART OF A SWORD* with *SISTINE/SIXTEEN* *GLASS* #*SHOTGLASS* |
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I can get you killed for $1000. Easy money to have your life cut short
I suggest running... cuz when I drop a rackets all over like a messy tennis court I get $$$$ n ball hard. you will always live on a budget Sin couldn't make big figures in front of a lamp doing shadow puppts Ya life is sad af....never had a girl & u stay on some lonely shit He's had a one night stand but thats cuz he got no one to share furniture wit Imma give him a WSHH beating.... then display this ass whooping on diff shows I'll beat the shit outta u on khamsin then hide you body where that wind blows Your last battle left u quite rattled..none of ya shit got laughs You had more trouble with pen then Michael j fox doing autographs You ain't a murderer like me! Dude never held a gun n put people in a hearse If you heard he open fire..it was coming in this thread and reading my verse @Blue Bayou make this open for votes pls |
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FGR had a more structured verse than Sinacog
V - FGR |
peasant cracker lol
FGR had the better verse here no question. a convincing punch all he needed V FGR |
Sinacog
This was actually kind of hypnotic. Seemed like a mix between a topical and a rap. The style you've used isn't the style that's currently in vogue, so it will be difficult to win dropping verses like this. Also, writing in your word flips with slashes like 'whine/wine' or 'sistine/sixteen' takes away from them. You have to trust the reader to get the flip without holding their hand. If they miss it, they miss it. Too much bragging, too little attacking FGR. But I thought it was a fun read. Nice to read something a little different. FGR I get $$$$ n ball hard. you will always live on a budget Sin couldn't make big figures in front of a lamp doing shadow puppts Sinacog didn't have any actual punches. The closest he came was wine/whine. I liked the bar I quoted from FGR. FGR had good concepts, but the wording was a little off. Like the first bar; it only works if you read it as dropping 'a rack it's' all over. If you try and read it the other way, like literally dropping rackets on tennis courts, it doesn't work because you said 'a rackets' and you can't use an indefinite article on a plural noun. Probably an unnecessary amount of detail to go into here on a clear FGR win, but that's why I only quoted one bar, even though the concepts were decent. Vote - FGR |
FGR
tennis court had potential but lacked sting due to iffy wording Shadow puppets was so so. I’ve done a shadow puppetry bar before One night stand is played but the flip was ok Michael j Fox was LOTB for me. Not fire but solid. funny and enjoyable Sinacog. Honestly, there’s nothing wrong with different styles but this isn’t a netcees text battle verse to me. Can appreciate some of the writing but FGR more on point in this format. He was always gonna win Vote - FGR |
FGR Wins
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