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Mother
She been there through my first and talk
she took me to the park so we can spend the day together She kept me out of the dark Everyone is a shark Life is rough She taught me how to stay strong When things get tough I've got her pride No matter what She's by my side |
I'm not going to lie, I have read a lot of your stuff and I thought I knew what to expect, but the 'everyone is a shark' line took me by complete surprise. I was in no way expecting that.
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I like it
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Thanks guys
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You've upped your steez...Good stuff Robranda.
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Thanks
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A lot more insightful than previous things i read from you, maybe write more personally going forward? Also try to write a whole verse next time and not a quarter of one, keep writing
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Thanks for the feedback
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