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dull boy 02-17-2020 10:45 AM

I wanna fuck me like a cannibal
 
Welcome to my private hell. There's no one to fight now, enjoy myself. I'd rather drown than ask for help. I wish I was someone else. Mr. Perfect, Ms. Construed. Lead the way, follow through. You probably hate me, I do too. You're so much like me I feel sorry for you. But I think you're pretty, pretty sure. You will profit, you will get hurt. I eat my words they taste like dirt. I'm only ashamed because I know what it's worth. Find my comfort inside blame. Shove my pride back down my face. My worst habit's waking up at least once a day. Balance barefoot on a needle heaven's just a jump away.

Adverse 02-17-2020 11:07 AM

Burn Fetish - Eyedea & Abilities

dull boy 02-17-2020 11:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse (Post 757303)
Burn Fetish - Eyedea & Abilities

I’m looking for feed on my original piece, Buzz Killington.

Adverse 02-17-2020 11:39 AM

Sorry dude i just thought you might like that Eyedea track

dull boy 02-17-2020 12:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse (Post 757310)
Sorry dude i just thought you might like that Eyedea track

No, I’m sorry. My comment was light hearted. I do like the track.

Exis 02-17-2020 06:38 PM

You're one of the best people I've read doin' paragraph style...Oh & @CopyPat, my bad had to give him a shout out.

Plot 02-18-2020 01:32 AM

I liked this for the content, too short though. And needed more multies instead of single rhyme sounds. Liked the kinda switch of tempo/scheme towards the end.
Im feeling the name as a play on a trent Rezner track, and gotta sort of abstract music vibe.. when you mention 'think your pretty' i subconciously think of the sex-pistols, and when you talk about 'hurt' my mind goes to Johny Cash. Maybe it was intended maybe not, might be some I missed even

Eŋg 02-20-2020 07:15 PM

ms.construed was clever. i liked that.

Master Rock 02-21-2020 11:38 PM

Yo, the dull boy is polishing the area. Watch out!

slecht 02-22-2020 08:23 PM

I can relate.

Wish was longer though.

Cool piece.


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