Week 5: Plot vs Obey - PLOT WINS
 

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the stickied rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE Sunday, @Plot @Obey

Check

Concerned about this as a noshow..
I live in Australia and its about 12 hours ahead if I remember..
so Im going to bed now if theres nothing dropt when I wake I'll do a no-show verse.
Jaded by the non-check

I'll be posting a bit later man, before due time tho

I gotta admit I was surprised, but there's no hiding the fact that your bent
So when we see Plot twist, the truth..... He's simply lying about not climaxing with men

I slay newbs, serial-killer hidden in plain view.. that cold bro,
Kill you with a kiddie book! Everyone be looking for ya body like Wheres Waldo?

Winner is Plott.

i did not dig the climx line

obey butchered his bar. came off super weird the way he executed it

plot had a decent bar and did enough to take this

I got plot. The plot twist had no real tie in to the rest of the punch for me. Maybe I missed it completely. Plots bar was decent I liked last weeks effort better tbh. The punch ends kind of awkward which took away from the sting. But I’m giving it to plot for a better constructed punch. Props fellas

Plot

Plot because the plot plays have been played for a bit and you've got to bring some creativity to the table to make one work. Obey was worded oddly and didn't do anything new with a dried up concept. I've seen Plot do a lot better but he got this week pretty handily.

V/Plot

Plot lost on kill you with a kiddie book. Obey butchered the wording but it was direct.

Obey

Ive got Plot on this one

Plot Wins.

Plot wins this one

Plot got it... because I’m sure the plot twist thing has been done a lot.. so has the Waldo... but I bet the plot twist has been done a lot more and his take on it was kind of strange.. just didn’t work for me