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Flow 02-05-2020 04:59 PM

Week 4: Incredible vs Sinacog - INCRED WINS
 
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE MONDAY,

@Sinacog @Incredible

Sinacog 02-08-2020 12:09 AM

I'm a beast with melodies; deceasing revelries; the darkest sun from the sheik of destiny!
The beast is destiny; you're not 'Incredible Hulk'; you're green with envy!

Incredible 02-08-2020 11:42 AM

The metals in ur mouth, explodes down where ur intestine sits
My niggas like wild wolves, tear ur top off they aint packin on cigarettes

Inno 02-08-2020 12:30 PM

Ok so inc I get what your trying to do but homie this just didn’t work. I see the tie ins with the pack reference the rest got lost in translation homie. I was feeling the setups but it just fell short with the punch.

Cog. Same ish as last week but you keep inching towards formulating a punch. This was decent and honestly if inc would came a bit more harder I would of gave him the vote.

Tough one cuz inc had this but I just don’t get his punch so ama give it to cog

dull boy 02-08-2020 12:32 PM

Vote - Cog

Dullboys explanation:
Quote:

Incredible: I don’t know what packing cigarettes has to do with taking the top off. Maybe I’m not getting it. I think you mean the cellophane but how that relates to packing them and wolves idk.

Cog used destiny twice, which was weird, and the hulk part is sort of out of place besides needing it to work for the wordplay.
- INF

FGR 02-08-2020 02:57 PM

. I got cog taking this.. Dude is still far from beating top tier but i do see week after week him getting better.. Incred ur shit didnt connect bro.. I see what u was going for but in the end if didnt connect..
Vote sin

Ouch 02-08-2020 04:19 PM

yeah no offense to either of you but I didn't see a punch at all... from either


literally I though after reading sinacogs thing anyone can beat that.. because there wasn't a punch.. then I read 'Incredibles' bar whcih was layed out more normal or to my liking... but ya shit just confused me man.. im not sure what you were trying to do, but it made no sense at all



soo.... vote --- Sinacog because his shit didn't make any sense either, but at least it rhymed

Amen 02-09-2020 11:56 AM

Sinacog’s was hardly a punch. You said he green with envy. Uh ok, no real impact.

I get what Inc was saying however it was terribly worded.

Inc took this with more of a PUNCH.

Considering this is the 1-2 PUNCH league.

V/Inc

John Dillinger 02-09-2020 10:13 PM

Vote Inc, a little more creative than calling someone green with envy imo

Adverse 02-11-2020 03:24 PM

Though Inc kind of botched his wording a bit i think his approach was definitely better and hit a bit harder. Had more edge to it. Sin is heading in the right direction but needs to start going for the throat

V/INC

Habitat 02-11-2020 08:17 PM

Inc definitely messed up the wording and botched what could have been a dope bar. But sinacog came through with that 1992 concept. Tough call but even though inc messed up his wording I dug his concept more. I just cant get behind green with envy

V/inc

Cashius 02-11-2020 10:00 PM

Vote incredible for having a more aggressive bar.

Blue Bayou 02-11-2020 10:14 PM

Intestine sits and cigarettes... I just can't

Vote Tie

Saint 02-11-2020 10:50 PM

Coin flip. Sins would've hit better w/ rewording even still the diss was more direct than Incs.
Inc was jumbled up again but the concept was much better & not lame

V - INC

Saint 02-11-2020 10:50 PM

Incred wins


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