Week 3: Slecht vs Incredible - SLECHT WINS
 

Week 3

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE MONDAY,

@Incredible @Slechtq

*The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.*

Howdy.

It's not a farm tragedy in South America, If u hear what the drama is about.
Fuck what ya herd, Incan trouble as soon as the llamas are out

His fam got the presses workin - RIP above ur dome, he a hot head
Cuz the 9mili my cuddle buddy and it's real touchy, Finny suicide thread

much preferred Inc’s wording here but the actual punch itself was lacking something that really attacked his opponent for me personally

Incan trouble I’m sure will have been done, even if I’m not familiar with it, so I guess I’ve a slight edge to slecht here in a close one

Both kill it I felt like incredible came out stronger compare to sletch
Vote Incredible

V/ Sletch

Lmao vote incredible. I debated a finny angle myself tbh. Anyways Inc gets my vote. Incan definitely been done and wasn't keen on the wording either. It wasn't a bad effort though so keep it up man but you got popped this week.

Vote inc

Vote-Slecht.
I think Slecht had some good tie-ins.
farm/SA herd/heard, also llamas are a cool word to gunplay.
Inc is getting better, wording is getting crisper,
Didnt like the cuddle-buddy, I wouldnt say that in battle bar.
But mostly I didnt like the rhyme, rhyming just last syllables is meh
Had an opportunity to make a 3 or so with suicide but didnt.
Actually on a second look..'he a hot head' thats lazy mate

Slect I want to like your line but it only works one way because I’m not completely sure that incans ride llamas. Incredible this bar was pretty cool, I think, definitely enjoyed your wording and execution a lot more

Vote credible

Both stumbled tbh. Slect with llama reference I feel like you used that to tie in the gun theme but it doesn’t really tie in to anything else in your bar. Inc had a good bar too but I feel like he made the same mistake. I don’t see a strong enough tie to the finny thread, might just be going over my head.

Another close one but I think ama give it to slect on this one.

Both were over boiled. I go with Slechht

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Vote Slecht

Inc - I actually liked your concept more... the potential could have been good but the setup & word choice of cuddle buddies threw it off for me. Bar was written well otherwise.

Slecht - I think this needed a revision imo. I'm not familiar w/ Incas relationship to llamas....but ok. Had several ideas here which together made it better than they would singularly. U did enough here to win.

Slecht WINS