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Week 3: Maximus vs Pharaohs Army - MAXIMUS WINS
Week Three You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread. DUE THURSDAY @Maximus @Pharaohs Army Extensions need to be agreed by both parties |
my attack's too ferocious, get dismembered with mad huge explosives
i'll hit you with an Incredible Blas you won't survive like your last two opponents |
think you're hot? na. you're not that groovy
i'll rape your wife and kill your kid like the Gladiator movie |
Vote max, he was more creative and I just felt had the better bar
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vote max
definitely more creative, pharoahs was too straight forward imo |
max: omg u said my name dope
phar: too simple man v/ max |
Max got this. Good all around. PA was decent...movie is dope but the bar was too simple
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Max multis were almost on point. 4-5-5 count but it was still swagged out. Nice reading pace. Just an all around gd bad tbh.
Pharaoh. No. Mvgt- max |
Maximus- pretty straightforward. Nothing too too special imo. Decent personal. Multies helped.
PA- way too simple, pimp. Not really anything here tbh. No real impact imo Vote Maxine |
Rayge was nice. This sort of bar gets done occasionally but it was done well. Pharoah, you're getting closer to 'battle' bars. What you're missing is wordplay - I think the most basic connection is trying to tell a joke or make a pun. Feel free to reach out if you want some suggestions
V/max |
V/Max ... he had all the right elements here. PA was alil too straight forward here
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I got max here... thought he worded his punch nice. Cool concept.
phar was a bit to basic for me |
Yeah Maximus wins here, the nameplays was cool.
Pharaoh needs to come up with a way to flip his concepts. 10 - 0 |
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