LR WK 2: Bleak Vs SuthaVeli -Bleak wins
 

@bleak @Suthaveli

Bullets can't harm dis Blob. When I blow da nickel, u'll go, "It tickles."
Let dem hollow points poke at ya stomach & u'll let out da pillsbury doughboy giggle

hold the metal overheads in a harming manner
I'll bring the jungle to ur living space &blow ur top out like an RV camper

I'm leaning towards bleak here. Seen enough fat bars about bleak, even though this is funny and being personal is usually huge for me. I think bleak did just enough with his flip though

V/bleak

Yeah I will vote bleak here. It's close. Personal angle always good to take an it was funny but it felt long winded for lackluster execution. Bleaks was neater

Vote bleak

saying "points poke at his stomach" is a good connection to the pillsbury dough boy but it doesn't seem like a reasonable gunbar, nobody threatens to poke your stomach with bullets but i enjoyed the creative attempt nonetheless.

saying ur going to bring the jungle to him was kinda interesting but im not sure i liked it, also the connection wasn't even that relevant to the punch, they were almost both very simple and avg bars on their own, i will give you an ok for the attempt and creativity though.

well, i did not enjoy either bar that much but im going to edge suth cuz i thought it was funny.

v/ suth

2-1 this needs votes



Lol sighs bar was funny... I like how bleak bar was harsher a bit more creative and tied together nice

V/bleak

Suths had potential it's just worded so light and corny to me

Bleak I liked the Meta and the tie ins were on point... Pretty fresh to me

Ive got Bleak in this one for the more enjoyable bar.. props to both

Bleak got this one here. Didn’t like the giggle get poked shit nah


Bleak

Bleak wins