LR Week 1: Barcotic vs Zelti BARC WINS
 

i hate fake.. & yall hoes. dont make my dogs roll
if we show Zelda business, our first shot'd take the console

My slimes’ rude w the long nose. Arms wave when he’s in the grove yo
Squidward shooters.. he’s either givin’ barnacles or he’s lettin the tool blow!

This was cool both had a witty punchline here and I'm not a huge fan of name plays but I think zelph did this pretty well and read fluently. Vote = Zelph

Maybe my accent but barc knuckle & barnacles didn't roll right w. me. I like the idea tho.
Barc had a ok set up. It's been a min since I've seen him write but I feel he can come more clever. The ending wasn't the greatest but whatevs
I feel barc connected more harsh so mvgt him.
Vote- barc

barc- very lazy setup, zelda wp was cool, concept was cool & the connection was well worded
zelt- liked ur other spongebob concept but not this one so much, the connection was weak but the name flip was cool

edge to barc for a better overall bar although if zelt had flipped this better he could have taken it

v/ barc

@Suthaveli I think he meant Bar Knuckles

Zelda was different, barnacles was ok but the squidward reference was some Nickelodeon shit.. just nah

v/Barcotic

"y'all hoes" was a lazy multi, but otherwise Barc's bar was good. Simple nameplay but set up and executed well enough for a pretty decent punch. Zel's bar was cool. Bar knuckles is sliiiiightly forced, not enough that I couldn't fuck with it, but every little thing has to get considered when it's only one bar. The flip was creative but not as hard hitting as Barc's IMO, that's the main factor influencing my decision.

V/ Barc

I like Barca Zelda shit. Not seen that angle used an thought it was dope. However the set up was just rushed as fuck. Really took away from it for me. Bar knuckles took me a minute but I like it, very different, enjoy that you are really making cartoon gun bar things your style almost.

Tough shout. Both flawed when scrutinized but good on own merit.

Vote Zelph I think. I enjoyed the added layer of complexity.

Vote Zelph

Btw this has less then hour before closing.

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barcs bar read smooth... I don’t think I’ve seen a Zelda wordplay on zelph... zelph squidward shooters? Nah barnacles was cool but the fuck is squidward shooters

V/barc

Barcotic wins 5 2