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The underdog but never the fan favorite
What good is jumping off if your head hit the damn pavement?
I'm on a bridge with a message from van halen
Like "God, I'm pickin hell instead of this damn nation"
Addicts all around you - some regular anne frank shit
Kids moving bricks is better than grand masons
Ask em if they'd kill you for benny & grant faces
They all would... nah gipetto you can't raise 'em
They know the right band will get her to dance naked
Be it the right jam, a wedding, or cash payment
The 5 keep em running like presidents campaigning
Whoever said the ghetto was better than plantations
They all talking shit, I'm forgetting the damn language
I been trynna find a rosetta for translation
Lean in the shot like kevin durant fadin
Red in the damn face - yosemite sam wasted

Good shit

Raw bro...Think your wordin' could be tinkered with, but only slightly from a readers perspective so the flow is more catchable...I caught it, just sayin'.

Stay dope brethren.

dope, could fuck with the flow especially throughout the second half

I’d nitpick over using damn twice in the first four end rhymes, but that’s just me being a perfectionist no good asshole that would never rhyme that tbh lol

I ain’t hating though, this was good

Beginning was better to me than the latter half of it preference wise but I don’t like judging stuff for tracks like I would text pieces, the two are different beasts to me and I write nothing like I would in text for actual songs lol

Record it bruh