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Allen Knight vs Incredible - AK WINS

SOL Season 1
Wk 5

Due Thursday, Feb 21

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

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Probably 12, could be 14.

Yo ima try to drop tonight, but ext just in case.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Incredible, 2/11/2019

Bullets bigger than a rock, make a B line to where ur standing
Guarantee when I drop back, it's a straight shot to OBJ unlike Eli Manning

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight, 2/3/2019

& u stay goin to gay clubs ready to grab a limb
cuz ur a Giant faggot & OBJ any nigga that throws a pass at him

smh u a fan

i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait
jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core
ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side
ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds
ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom
& this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds
if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs

Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar
My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap
Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks
Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin
When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science
I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal
"F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read
Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head

ALLEN
i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait
NAH STATEMENT
jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core
MORE STATEMENT, SWITCHIN PPL TILL UR HURT MORE??? WTF IS THAT?
ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side
ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds
I LIKE IT! GOOD NP, PROLLY NOT TOO PLAYED SINCE HES KINDA NEWBIE
ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom
IS THIS EAVES/EZZ? THATS A REACH.
his pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds
if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs
DUNNO WHY 'DOWN' IS THERE, BUT PRETTY GOOD NP.

INKY
Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar
WHUT? WHO U DISSIN MAN? ALLEN OR THE STUPID ACTOR?
My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap
Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks
I DONT GET IT, PLUGS WP???
Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin
When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science
WHUT?
I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal
HUH? YOU HAVE A BLINDSPOT WHEN YOU DRIVE, THERES NO SIGNAL. WHAT IS THIS?
"F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read
Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head
THE BREADS SHOOTING LIKE A BROKEN SHOWER HEAD???

V-ALLEN KNIGHT, EASY WIN FOR AL, INC STILL HASNT GRASPT HOW TO MAKE A BATTLE VERSE.

i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait

Nice opener

jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core

This is coo

ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side
ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds

Fiya

ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom

This is coo

& this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds
if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body high

Lol funny, but not heavy

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Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar

Didn't get this one

My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap
Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks

This ok

Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin
When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science

Lost me here bro

I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal

Wording threw this off

"F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read
Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head

Again wording, when u see bread what exactly are you shooting?

Overall coo read I got Allen taking this one tho

V-Allen

jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core
ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom

v

I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal
(best attempt)

although aside the point idk how 5k in savings is bragworthy lolz.

allen didn't seem like he tried but he had some coo shit, incredible felt pretty statementish and there was nothing too complex or hard hitting.

cool stuff, v/ Allen

i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait
never knew chum was a synonym for close friend lol had to look it up. This was a good line
jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core
mmm wasn’t feein this one
ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side
ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds
alright, not a bad inc flip
ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom
lol ok, fresh wordplay I can dig
& this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds
if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs
damn that wordplay was tough but the blow up doll part made it kind of corny for me, overall it’s still creative and works for what it is

Vs

Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar
ahh this is a fresh concept that I was hoping to see this week. Had mad potential with it here but you needed more tie ins to make it really connect. This is decent at best as is
My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap
Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks
my imagination led me to believe this was super dope until I read it a few times and realized it doesn’t make a lick of sense and is worded like hell
Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin
When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science
this is actually pretty good lol
I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal
ok not bad
"F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read
Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head
lmao yoooo “shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head”. That’s fire bro. Only problem is “when I see your bread” brought it from a solid 9 to a firm 6.

Hey incredible you’re getting better each week man, if this weeks verse is a glimpse of a new style you’re testing out, I like it a lot. Work on wording and better tie ins though. But as far as concepts, you got that down pact. AK you had a solid verse, very consistent and some examples of how wordplay should be done. Props to both but AK outshined incredible here.

Vote Allen Knight

AK took this on consistency. Inc improving each week and I do see the improvement. I also still wanna face him next week. @Incredible come get this L. But nah legit you improving bro an this was a solid showing. Maybe would of been a W against your own standard but you were on a uphill battle against ak soon as it was announced. AK was consistent here an even his misses are a tier above. Opener was fire as well dunno why someone was giving that shit.

Vote ak

lmao posting just to confirm Inc got annihilated