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Blue Bayou 02-06-2019 08:03 PM

FN?
 
Will run one of there's interest

Sharp 02-06-2019 09:59 PM

Fuck a different forum

Sharp's back, your wife knows I'm gross with style
Btw, that skank like being side bitch to a notepad file?
Every night. FN FN FN FN thread by blue the fuckin creep
You should F'n give it up already and go the fuck to sleep
Take a break. Find another outlet, friend
Get a real hobby and knit. You could matter in a thread again

veritas 02-06-2019 10:08 PM

Blue bayou why you think you can rhyme like I do?
Street fight, flames hit your chest, i’m Ryu
Boarding too much won’t fix your broken family, maybe try glue
Just raped your soul, be thankful I like you
Sharp quit frontin you lack the muscle mass to satisfy a female
Little vegan pussy boi, this is grass fed organic beef bought on wholesale
Put a yellow tag on your threads like I was a clothes sale
Serve ya moms a brown paper bag after it’s the entendre “hoe-tail”

Sharp 02-06-2019 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by veritas (Post 725606)
Blue bayou why you think you can rhyme like I do?
Street fight, flames hit your chest, i’m Ryu
Allen Knight would have done this when he was 12. Very basic and predictable punch
Boarding too much won’t fix your broken family, maybe try glue
Just raped your soul, be thankful I like you
while the style conforms to the existing style, you put the bar in reverse so the second of the two lines in this couplet is useless
Sharp quit frontin you lack the muscle mass to satisfy a female
Little vegan pussy boi, this is grass fed organic beef bought on wholesale
very statementish opener and the punch itself is more of a boast, so it takes attention away from the goal here.
Put a yellow tag on your threads like I was a clothes sale
Serve ya moms a brown paper bag after it’s the entendre “hoe-tail”
this is a stretch in a lot of ways. Wording is so clunky it falls over itself

Hey, you tried. Could use another layer of complexity or so

V/blue's eye roll after reading this



BLUE WINS FN LXIX

veritas 02-06-2019 11:44 PM

but if I get too complex then they tune out. And I appreciate hour feed. You are correct.

Sharp 02-06-2019 11:50 PM

I'd refer you to @DMS death by 1000 paper cuts punch

Overly complex is not a good punch

Blue Bayou 02-08-2019 08:49 PM

?

John Dillinger 02-09-2019 11:55 AM

Tn

Zaddy 02-09-2019 12:02 PM

@Blue Bayou now

BodySnatcher 02-09-2019 02:32 PM

I'll be down for one tonight...

Blue Bayou 02-09-2019 02:55 PM

I can't run one tonight

Someone else feel free tho

Ryno 02-09-2019 02:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 726024)
I can't run one tonight

Someone else feel free tho

Smh you only think about yourself. I’m really disappointed in you...

Zaddy 02-09-2019 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 726024)
I can't run one tonight

Someone else feel free tho

@big baby

Blue Bayou 02-09-2019 03:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ryno (Post 726025)
Smh you only think about yourself. I’m really disappointed in you...

Thats it... 40 lines due in 20 mins

Ryno 02-09-2019 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 726027)
Thats it... 40 lines due in 20 mins

I apologize for my outburst...

the Munster 02-11-2019 07:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 726027)
Thats it... 40 lines due in 20 mins

Let’s have a diss song battle due today.

DMS 02-11-2019 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 725626)
I'd refer you to @DMS death by 1000 paper cuts punch

Overly complex is not a good punch

Too be fair that bar was sick

Sharp 02-11-2019 11:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DMS (Post 726208)
Too be fair that bar was sick

it was an okay idea with weird execution

Blue Bayou 02-11-2019 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharp (Post 726210)
it was an okay idea with weird execution

Whats the bar?

Destroyer 02-11-2019 01:34 PM

Very low


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