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bleak 01-28-2019 04:20 AM

Cred vs Infiltrate - INFILTRATE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED
 
SOL Season 1
Wk 2

Due Thursday, Jan 31st

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

Cred 01-28-2019 10:38 AM

I got drip for sale

Saint 01-28-2019 10:52 AM

In 10-12

Saint 01-31-2019 07:09 PM

aim at ur top - target's in the clear so my team's takin the shot..
shout once this cold set-in cuz we'll spray on the spot & need blood stains to be washed
that's creative gunplay. while you're known as a boring punch writer..
cred's arnold in predator - cuz he say shit like keep'a 'stick around' for corny one-liners
made ur chick slave to dick, i squeezed between knees w/ a stern mount
she told me 'open my thigh, master.' i was in & out faster than the low body workout
'lemme talk my shit' 'zip em up' <- ya copy URL & botch them quotes..
i'd tell smack for evry stolen 'slogan-sue' then take my time draggin 1 across ur throat
dog i gotta ankle holstered piece that's hid under my pants cuff..
i'll 'draw from the bottoms' for paper like the barrel sharp picked from for my matchup
this a onesided battle, only thing worse is the mod noone reads..
'In/cred's' a bad look like if faggot runned the league or kids faces when he won custody..

Sharp 01-31-2019 11:50 PM

@Cred

Saint 02-02-2019 12:19 AM

Feed itt

DynamiCz 02-02-2019 12:12 PM

aim at ur top - target's in the clear so my team's takin the shot..
shout once this cold set-in cuz we'll spray on the spot & need blood stains to be washed

Nice opener here!

that's creative gunplay. while you're known as a boring punch writer..
cred's arnold in predator - cuz he say shit like keep'a 'stick around' for corny one-liners

Yoooo this was dope Inf

made ur chick slave to dick, i squeezed between knees w/ a stern mount
she told me 'open my thigh, master.' i was in & out faster than the low body workout

Ehhh, this was kinda light on the execution

'lemme talk my shit' 'zip em up' <- ya copy URL & botch them quotes..
i'd tell smack for evry stolen 'slogan-sue' then take my time draggin 1 across ur throat

Fiyaaa!

dog i gotta ankle holstered piece that's hid under my pants cuff..
i'll 'draw from the bottoms' for paper like the barrel sharp picked from for my matchup

Coo jab! Simple effective imo

this a onesided battle, only thing worse is the mod noone reads..
'In/cred's' a bad look like if faggot runned the league or kids faces when he won custody..

Ok closer!



Damn another battle that would have been fiya if @Cred showed! Props Inf on a overall nice verse man! You had some fiya in that joint. Good shit fam

Zaddy 02-03-2019 09:09 PM

Arnold in predator was fire lol...nice line pretty decent...dope...overall could be better but nice punch

Sinacog 02-03-2019 11:02 PM

Infiltrate -

aim at ur top - target's in the clear so my team's takin the shot..
shout once this cold set-in cuz we'll spray on the spot & need blood stains to be washed

This is a cool bar here..had gunplay essentials..but needed some wordplay..but it's good enough as a swift jab..

that's creative gunplay. while you're known as a boring punch writer..
cred's arnold in predator - cuz he say shit like keep'a 'stick around' for corny one-liners

I don't really know about this one..could be better in ways..needs more effeciency


made ur chick slave to dick, i squeezed between knees w/ a stern mount
she told me 'open my thigh, master.' i was in & out faster than the low body workout

Lmao..this was okay..needs wilder exquisition..but this was okay..



'lemme talk my shit' 'zip em up' <- ya copy URL & botch them quotes..
i'd tell smack for evry stolen 'slogan-sue' then take my time draggin 1 across ur throat

Lmao..this was cool..had all the essentials here..I could dig this..

dog i gotta ankle holstered piece that's hid under my pants cuff..
i'll 'draw from the bottoms' for paper like the barrel sharp picked from for my matchup

The wording was cool here..nice one man..your finest bar here..

this a onesided battle, only thing worse is the mod noone reads..
'In/cred's' a bad look like if faggot runned the league or kids faces when he won custody..

this needed better wording..but for what it was..it was cool..but needs something more..

overall - this was a cool verse..not your best..but it was cool in a way..had cred showed it would've been dope here..nice one man..


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