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Cred vs DMS - CRED WINS

SOL Season 1
Wk 1

Due Thursday, Jan 24th

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@Cred @DMS

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!

Phase me? I let the K sing, drive by ya spot if u play crazy
Don't care if EVERY1's home.. I'm airing thru the window like an AC
I really live this gun shit, u don't even clap rounds tho
Bitch better run quick. I'll Circle ur Block quicker than a App download
Get slapped up if u act tough since birth I knew u were a damn chump
HOW the fuck does my bitch drinks more beers than ur dad does?!
A Nfl QB fanboy vs a nigga who really spray wit them beams
Aim, let it ring! THIS arm 'll throw the fastest bullet u EVER seen
They matched a person w/ no profile vs the Gun Bar King. ain't it sad?
But lucky you.. still found a fuckin way to get ur name on a mag

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners
I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.
I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.
He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.’
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.

Cred -

Phase me? I let the K sing, drive by ya spot if u play crazy
Don't care if EVERY1's home.. I'm airing thru the window like an AC

Dope bar, had all the essentials for a nice hit. I could dig this, man.

I really live this gun shit, u don't even clap rounds tho
Bitch better run quick. I'll Circle ur Block quicker than a App download

This was okay, but I've seen gunplay app gun-bars before. Needs to be a bit more efficient.

Get slapped up if u act tough since birth I knew u were a damn chump
HOW the fuck does my bitch drinks more beers than ur dad does?!

This was okay..I suppose it was a nice hit? Lol.

A Nfl QB fanboy vs a nigga who really spray wit them beams
Aim, let it ring! THIS arm 'll throw the fastest bullet u EVER seen

This was your best bar, nice one - man. I dug this a lot.

They matched a person w/ no profile vs the Gun Bar King. ain't it sad?
But lucky you.. still found a fuckin way to get ur name on a mag

Your 2nd best bar, I dug this one a lot. Nice.

DMS -

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners

This needs to hit a lot more. It's kind of a safe concept, but needs to be better in ways for it to work. But it's okay.

I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.

Again, it's a safe concept - it's okay for what it is.

I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.

Your best bar, a decent hit here. Nice.

He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.

Lmao..so you called his guns a bitch? Lol..I suppose this was alright..niice one..
’
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.

Okay shot here..decent I suppose..

Overall - Pretty decent battle here, I was entertained by it. But for the better overall hits with wordplay and punchlines I have to say Cred edged this out. Nice one, guys.

V/ Cred

Phase me? I let the K sing, drive by ya spot if u play crazy
Don't care if EVERY1's home.. I'm airing thru the window like an AC
had potential but wasn’t feelin how you did it
I really live this gun shit, u don't even clap rounds tho
Bitch better run quick. I'll Circle ur Block quicker than a App download
this was nice
Get slapped up if u act tough since birth I knew u were a damn chump
HOW the fuck does my bitch drinks more beers than ur dad does?!
nah man
A Nfl QB fanboy vs a nigga who really spray wit them beams
Aim, let it ring! THIS arm 'll throw the fastest bullet u EVER seen
decent here
They matched a person w/ no profile vs the Gun Bar King. ain't it sad?
But lucky you.. still found a fuckin way to get ur name on a mag
played man

Vs

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners
thought this was pretty nice tbh, definitely need to work on fully executing your bars though
I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.
nah this is kiddy shit
I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.
lol I think we all have a credit karma bar we wanted to use against him but this wasn’t done too good, definitely had potential though
He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.’
wording ruined any potential of this
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.
lol this was sick, good shit

Ngl I had to read this battle about 3 times cause I wasn’t sure I was seeing shit straight. Cred bro you definitely slept on dms here and I don’t blame you because he usually drops hot trash but he caught you slipping here and grabbed a W.

Cred had app download

Dms had laundry cleaners & saints receiver

Definitely close but I’m edging it to DMS.

Vote DMS

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 723242)

Phase me? I let the K sing, drive by ya spot if u play crazy
Don't care if EVERY1's home.. I'm airing thru the window like an AC
Played concept barely flipped well enough to be effective.
I really live this gun shit, u don't even clap rounds tho
Bitch better run quick. I'll Circle ur Block quicker than a App download
Cool.
Get slapped up if u act tough since birth I knew u were a damn chump
HOW the fuck does my bitch drinks more beers than ur dad does?!
Too simple and ineffective in a form of a question.
A Nfl QB fanboy vs a nigga who really spray wit them beams
Aim, let it ring! THIS arm 'll throw the fastest bullet u EVER seen
This was cool.
They matched a person w/ no profile vs the Gun Bar King. ain't it sad?
But lucky you.. still found a fuckin way to get ur name on a mag
Played cocnept.

Quote:

Originally Posted by DMS (Post 723246)

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners
Um, what?
I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.
Wtf are you talking about?
I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.
This was ok.
He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.’
No.
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.
This had potential but your execution was ass. Lol ! Illegal/Ill eagle play.

Both verses sucked, IMO. Seemed Cred didn't apply much effort here, but w/e. Had DMS had at least one more decent to good bar, he could've caught Cred sleeping easily. He sucks, tho.

v/Cred

V -- Cred, did enough w/ circle block

DMS had the opener which had potential
rest was wtf..

Phase me? I let the K sing, drive by ya spot if u play crazy
Don't care if EVERY1's home.. I'm airing thru the window like an AC
nice
I really live this gun shit, u don't even clap rounds tho
Bitch better run quick. I'll Circle ur Block quicker than a App download
dope
Get slapped up if u act tough since birth I knew u were a damn chump
HOW the fuck does my bitch drinks more beers than ur dad does?!
nah
A Nfl QB fanboy vs a nigga who really spray wit them beams
Aim, let it ring! THIS arm 'll throw the fastest bullet u EVER seen
st8
They matched a person w/ no profile vs the Gun Bar King. ain't it sad?
But lucky you.. still found a fuckin way to get ur name on a mag
not bad

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners
st8
I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.
nah
I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.
nice
He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.’
couldve been better
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.
dope

vote- Cred in a close one

circle block was fire.. seems like cred just coasted .. dms had ideas like laundry cleaner and saints reciever but at the end it came out a lil basic..

cred got it