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Bodey 10-13-2018 01:34 AM

A flex maybe?
 
My brain takes hostages with its honest wit, not derived from colleges or opulence and all that shit. I’m confident with a nostril drip, calmest when it’s chaotic, bliss. Coughin out hits between these alcoholic sips. I’m a monster, bitch. I could grip Dahmer’s dick with a big fat grin til his balls’ll rip cuz I’m a squalid pig. My conscience dipped and called the quits so that consequence can suck my dick. Metaphorical dick, stupid. Shoved a fork in it, chewed it...shit his corpse out in fluid. Bleeding asphalt while eating bath salts cuz I’m a fiending ragdoll for this sad cult of drug-addicted assholes. Another master of the craft, a driven raptor gone exquisite. Wash it down with a flask but I’m spittin faster than I’m winnin. Dismantled the writing utensil just to sip on the ink. I’ve channeled the liquid pencil and crammed it into my mental and inevitably sampled a change in the way I think.

dull boy 10-13-2018 12:21 PM

Dope

big baby 10-13-2018 04:12 PM

sucked bad. db also thought it sucked. be nicer

2tripple0 12-12-2018 04:49 PM

Idk it was alright i guess.....

Exis 12-12-2018 08:26 PM

I like the paragraph style, only a select few can pull that shit off & you did it justice...I actually find your flow easier to catch in this format to what you normally drop, which to me is odd as I used to hate the whole paragraph thing because it just came across as words collidin' back to back with each other.

This was really good yeah, haven't seen Copy in a while but you & him should collab para wise...would be raw.

Stay upwards ma.


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