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DMS 10-06-2018 05:24 PM

Fukital ODs
 
Don’t wanna write a verse for me huh? Okay, now you’ll see the consequences.

Dragon, the flames a-lighted, don’t step to the cave of giants
Unless you happen to be David and you came to slay Goliath.
Thinking you passed unnoticed when in reality you damned n hopeless
So screw ya rap of poet’s when I come with Abaddon’s locust,
If you’re hopin’ for core support
You’ll be torn open with the 4 horse men’s swords
“ I’m Dragon, my vocab and subject matters pitiful.
I face the behemoth and leviathan in an battle ritual.
Every verse sounds the same because they basically are.
I battled a demon once and it gave me a scar.”

I’m lighting in a bottle, you’re barely trapping some sparks.
For my amusement, I’ll have this animal farmed.
This pig rules the world, I’ll put your pride attached with a cart,
I’ll have you bakin’ in the pan with some spice,
Have you graspin’ for life then I go ham in your arse.

Cereal 10-08-2018 04:09 PM

aite good start, def needs more to it but concept is def there


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