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Ghost1 09-26-2018 02:44 PM

dull boy is more prouderer of this
 
yo my battle clout is tantamount to a cancer diagnosis im perched in handstand set to mount crouched with the fans of iron lotus I move like a bullet train my goons got the wookie brain semi auto spray set the tune to the boogie dance im totaled on a full tank of adrenochrome spiraling into a k hole wondering is jesus home I keep a small hammer like im carving chess pieces out of some sandalwood steel on me like a pawg slammer the pound speakin loud as an animal yo Ill fuckin hit ur shitzu w some jujitsu fr im talkin bout blitzin that little shit w legit moves mojin bu w pistols wrapped in ginsu knife utensils no chance in life he'll dance thru knife inflicted rib wounds toss a Molotov into my fireplace im dramatically extravagant toss thanos into shackles while im asking peter panning where his shadow went cuttin rails out but where did the man in the mirror go? beard of a hero 10 pints deep getting weird in the beer hole ask me if im bout to be steerin a vehicle I put the steel to ya ear hole and blow ya brains have u swear its a miracle I don't like questions or any kind of verbal type suggestion matter fact don't send any words to my direction im in the whip w the pistol near me take u on a trip past the strip to a field w a little clearing show u the burner an ask if u think its scary then laugh while I let it clap an kick at the back of ya head like an insiguri

veritas 09-26-2018 03:59 PM

Insiguri was fire.

Hush 09-26-2018 07:15 PM

Read it

~RustyGunZ~ 09-26-2018 08:37 PM

dull boy wouldn't be fucking proud of this?

literally nothing that is even remotely as inspired as window pain or technical as orange door hinge...

big baby 09-27-2018 11:05 PM

wow suck thx

Mediocrity 09-28-2018 11:44 PM

I dare anyone to read this in one breath

dull boy 09-29-2018 04:25 PM

This was offensive.

dull boy 09-29-2018 04:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knucklehead (Post 703351)
dull boy wouldn't be fucking proud of this?

literally nothing that is even remotely as inspired as window pain or technical as orange door hinge...

Don’t reduce me and my highly developed tastes to this nonsense.

PancakeBrah 09-29-2018 08:56 PM

I though it was pretty good?

CopyPat 10-04-2018 11:49 PM

hahahahha i liked. obv a joke, and u needed commas and periods very badly. if you did more of these with comma's and periods i'd peep. and if you took more time and actually tried it'd prob turn out pretty dope i think

Vammy 10-05-2018 06:21 PM

y'all need to add spaces to your bars, easier to read. This flowed nicely tho

Geno 10-12-2018 05:44 AM

Lol. Clearly u not from around these parts. Otherwise u would know this was in jest.

Anyhow. I thought it was fire. Just mho. Thanks for taking the 2 seconds to write and post this. 1

Dope girl 10-12-2018 09:53 AM

In my opinion flammable


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