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veritas 08-16-2018 03:17 PM

This Time _ Only (tm)
 
Meanwhile in my Subconscious:

A Quark for every choice and non choice at the same time in superposition,
only this time line designs time of confined mind to the prison of it's decision.
The apex of technology, the start of Oneirounatical neuroscience emerged
the poor were oblivious, while the rich took advantage and splurged.
Imagine if you could record every dream you ever had and study it?
Imagine if every dream was really another universe waiting on you to discover it?
We said too much. Try our beginner package, one night's dreams recorded,
Analyzed, synthesized, symbolized, and then reported.
We swear that the enlightenment alone well makes up for the credit you took to make this afforded.
What a benefit this service would provide the neurotic individual. Eternal Sunshine of the Dreamful Subcon.//////////////}}}}}}}}}><^$&#**#%%

commence further level of programming.

Imagine if you could replay moments of dream lucidity.
Nothing more metaphysical to watch yourself live in another form of reality.
At first they were mad at me.
Then I was heralded, sought after, and found.


stay tuned. All will be revealed.

this is just a journal for my next novel. I know it did not rhyme. Thanks guys.

veritas 08-16-2018 03:23 PM

This is basically a rough draft of an idea I had for my next novel that I am writing. I needed to store it here, so I didn't forget it lol.

Shoutouts to Zytorg and Zimdar.

Mediocrity 08-18-2018 02:08 PM

I want more of this. And would like to read your previous works @veritas

Exis 08-20-2018 09:22 AM

The apex of technology, the start of Oneirounatical neuroscience emerged
the poor were oblivious, while the rich took advantage and splurged.
Imagine if you could record every dream you ever had and study it?
Imagine if every dream was really another universe waiting on you to discover it?

^^Fire...

NYCSPITZ 08-24-2018 12:10 AM

this was pretty cool. I don't know what oneinuerotical means and i'm not googling it but the multiple universe line was hawt.

Exis 08-24-2018 12:47 AM

I think it's a few things combined? Idk lol, it read dope so don't care yo.

Geno 09-05-2018 10:34 AM

<3

Pharaohs Army 02-02-2019 09:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by veritas (Post 693321)
We said too much. Try our beginner package,

Love this part


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