i made a song
 

tell me if it's trash

https://soundcloud.com/7sinatra/black-benz-new-x8

With a voice box?

Not sure if my desktop is lagging but the quality is weird?

I'll have to listen when I get home, bro. I heard like vocals in the background with your weird flow then the instrumental interruption and shit cutting in and out?

This shit trash b

Fade in and random noises till verse starts around 1:00

Sht sound like bumblebee from transformers using s bunch of different radio station voices trying to fuse sentences together

Lmao
Fuck zelph, but yeah, basically

Yo this shit straight garbage lol

So what you think throw it away or what. I might be biased to the improvements that's why I ask. A lot of cutting and probably too many voice alterations went into this. Its listenable to me.

If you’re making music to only be “listenable to you” then props
You’re on the right track

I mean is it unlistenable or is it too far trash to be considered listenable. Does genre make it trash or is it all around trash.

What genre do you consider this?

The beat is vaporwave so vaporwave with rap over it I guess

Why would you want to do that?

You know people don’t actually like that shit they just need a group to cling onto for a sense of community right?

You don’t actually enjoy listening to music that would be similar to this do you?

I mean I like vaporwave. I had never heard it until soundcloud would play it after i was listening to my own songs. It's like chopped and screwed 90s r&b/jazz its alright

What music do you listen to the most? What are you passionate about?

Rapping wasn’t bad


Neither was lyrics

I know there's some rough cuts but the levels are almost evened out for it being put together like Frankenstein. I need to listen to it in the car to know how I really feel about it but I dont hate it which is good news to me

I heard it in the car

Horrible mix


But u had a cool flow at times

I respect it if you're not just saying that. If you truly want to make music for you then that's not a bad thing. The problem is that it's shit music. The beat was awful and you took over a minute to start rapping. 4 bar intro man, that's all you need.

People say I'm garbage tho, so don't take this personally. I just don't like this at all.