FINAL 4: BodySnatcher vs. Jabari Black BS WINS
 

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@BodySnatcher
@Jabari Black

My G.....16?

Yep...16 is good

Red Gang Nigga!

Mafia shit...
Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat
But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street
He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll
Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole
My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot
& dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot
Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make...
Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake
This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless
I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office
My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead
But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head
Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib
Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib
Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami
So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji
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The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/
With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/
Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/
Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/
Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/
Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/
Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/
This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/
Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/
Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/
You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/
Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/
You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/
Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/

Pretty fucking fire gun battle tbh... I had JB on first read but then noticed he got a bit S&Fish... on my phone but will edit when i get home

Props

Mafia shit...
Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat
But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street
pretty cool, solid opener
He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll
Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole
lol fuckin dope
My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot
& dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot
good again, swaggy
Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make...
Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake
nah not feelin this
This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless
I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office
not feelin it
My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead
But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head
mmm decent flip, I had a Spotify punch last nbl season. Completely different from yours but yea they called mines played so yours is too bitch
Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib
Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib
alright cool
Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami
So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji
ha this was nice lol


5 good
1 Decent
2 misses

Vs


The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
lmfaoooooo I literally busted out laughing at this. I like it
One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/
With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/
damn this was fire, creative & all around dope
Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/
Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/
mmm decent at best w/ this one
Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/
Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/
Decent again, this was done pretty basic and dull
Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/
This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/
OK flip, the judge concept was used a lot in the first 1-2 Cypher
Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/
Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/
took a minute for this one to click but it’s nice lol
You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/
Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/
ehhh nah not feelin
You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/
Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/
decent at best, pretty played concept


3 good
3 Decent
1 Miss


Really dope battle here, props to both for dropping straight BARS and closing out with a bang. I have body with more nice punches but also with 1 more miss than Jabari. In this case it’s not about who had more misses burcause they’re only 1 apart, but Jabari also had a few decent lines that contained some played stuff unfortunately but with a decent flip to it. I think I gotta go with body here. Dope battle fellas.

Vote BodySnatcher

That black block body censor bar was dope af. But over all Body’s nameplay and less S&F bars took it.

Censor bar
Opener
Spelling bee

Vs.

Opener/closers
Pothole line
Drake
Trick shot

V/Body not as close as o thought just comparing ‘highlights’

This shit close I'm gonna edit in tmrw I'm fucking baked and tired don't wanna sleep on anything besides these titties. Holler tmrw yall

Mafia shit...
Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat
But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street

Dope opener here!

He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll
Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole

Another nice jab here

My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot
& dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot

Lol I like this

Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make...
Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake

Ehh, drake/blackface references getting kinda worn out, this was ok tho

This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless
I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office

Decent at best on this one

My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead
But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head

Think the wording made this a no for me

Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib
Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib

Nice

Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami
So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji

Lol this was cool closer

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The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/


Dopeee opener

One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/
With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/

Another good punch here

Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/
Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/

Ehh didn't really like this one to much

Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/
Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/

Nice here

Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/
This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/

Damn this was nice, but so many people are killing this concept now lol

Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/
Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/

I the creativeness here, this a hit for me

You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/
Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/

Another creative line here, no direct impact on the hit but still nice

You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/
Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/

This was a decent closer here/concept played tho


This was a dope ass battle here no lie, both was coming out the thread with fire! I read this battle 4 times actually. Both with the same amount of misses, but I have to say....Body in this one didn't have as many played concepts as JB. JB had some dope lines, but they wasn't DIRECT hits as of BS was coming with more direct swings. Both had good haymakers, but Body had more in this case. Dope ass battle though and props to both, but I got to give this one to Body.

V-Body

JB u know I fk w/ you but idk man you weren't attacking here enough. I don't think it would have taken but like 1 or 2 more to take this easily. First half was fire, 2nd just needed a little rewording to direct it more at him instead of hyping yourself. The I Promise shit could have been cool but needed something putting Nick down on the totem pole. Use it in a sentence could have been cool but doesnt even put Nick in the picture at all.

NJ I like this verse, I think it could have been better but its still cool, consistent. You maybe OD'd on nameplay but that's what Nick James is known for, huh?

Nick James

Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat
But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street
yup
He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll
Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole
dope
My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot
& dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot
cool angle, this is nice
Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make...
Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake
na..
This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless
I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office
lol jocks flawless, wasn't feeling this one
My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead
But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head
fks w/ this, nice
Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib
Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib
again
Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami
So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji
yup. dope concept, executed really clean

The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
fuuuuck, lol this is dope af imo
One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/
With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/
coo
Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/
Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/
hmm, just ok to me
Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/
Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/
not feeling this one
Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/
This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/
ok
Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/
Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/
lmao, dope
You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/
Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/
na
You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/
Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/
I think you should of closed on a different note, this was st8 tho

Thought JB had LOTB w/ his opener, but Body had some really heavy hits as well.

I think Body got this w/ consistency. Dope battle fellas.

v/ body