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Incredible 07-14-2018 09:40 AM

WK 10: DynamiCz 6-4 vs. Cred 2-2 - DY WINS VIA FF
 
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@Cred @DynamiCz

takemtwoschool 07-14-2018 10:28 AM

Cash.

DynamiCz 07-14-2018 01:02 PM

12?

takemtwoschool 07-18-2018 07:23 AM

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
 
I’m known for the homi, we stackin that number up for a reason
U don’t got a Body on ur side.. shit, Snatcher already passed u up dis season
I brought the gang in. Head shots is how we handle the clips
Multiple hammers bangin’ off ur roof like we puttin a patch on that bitch
Discreet wit the heat n once u see it, believe heavens waitin
Wait til it’s dark b4 the clip show.. “it’s time for our feature presentation”
I let off that 50 shot wit 1 hand. Either u duck or u better run
Like a poor man tryna make the band.. bitch I bucket wit the drum
I’m sick, run in ur crib n head shots have brains look like vomit
Totem pole shit.. That’s one Stick wit ur whole families face up on it

DynamiCz 07-18-2018 09:02 AM

Scary dream, I wake u up....grab the nine make this a scary scene
Machine with the lens! Shooting clips off the wall like it's a projector screen
Metal Scope! Attach it to the laser arm, It need it's own room for biz
Magnify the body..when beams aiming from the attic-Honey, I Shrunk the Kids
You the type to trace some shit! I go an buy the artillery with a stolen card
Stick raise watch him stop..then wave 5 in his direction like a crossing guard
Will Ferrell-Room full of drums, i dare you try to step brother
Bullet graze his New Era, have his fitted hanging side ways-T.I Trap Muzik Cover
5 across his temple-the arm start bending..look like a marines corp salutin
Nicholas Cruz the 9mm! When I take em 2 school it ain't a mass florida shootin

BodySnatcher 07-18-2018 11:16 AM

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I’m known for the homi, we stackin that number up for a reason
U don’t got a Body on ur side.. shit, Snatcher already passed u up dis season
shoutout...cool line, was this a diss to me or him tho? lol
I brought the gang in. Head shots is how we handle the clips
Multiple hammers bangin’ off ur roof like we puttin a patch on that bitch
another cool line, kinda simple tho since u just said "patch on that bitch"
Discreet wit the heat n once u see it, believe heavens waitin
Wait til it’s dark b4 the clip show.. “it’s time for our feature presentation”
i fuck with this
I let off that 50 shot wit 1 hand. Either u duck or u better run
Like a poor man tryna make the band.. bitch I bucket wit the drum
ehh, st8...
I’m sick, run in ur crib n head shots have brains look like vomit
Totem pole shit.. That’s one Stick wit ur whole families face up on it
dope

2 dope, 2 avg., 1 st8


Scary dream, I wake u up....grab the nine make this a scary scene
Machine with the lens! Shooting clips off the wall like it's a projector screen
nice, flowed well
Metal Scope! Attach it to the laser arm, It need it's own room for biz
Magnify the body..when beams aiming from the attic-Honey, I Shrunk the Kids
dope
You the type to trace some shit! I go an buy the artillery with a stolen card
Stick raise watch him stop..then wave 5 in his direction like a crossing guard
cool...actually better the second read
Will Ferrell-Room full of drums, i dare you try to step brother
Bullet graze his New Era, have his fitted hanging side ways-T.I Trap Muzik Cover
DOPE
5 across his temple-the arm start bending..look like a marines corp salutin
Nicholas Cruz the 9mm! When I take em 2 school it ain't a mass florida shootin
cool closer

2 dope, 3 avg

I got DynamiCz here in a close one by a quote. I felt like Cred had his normal dope schemes but his execution was rushed or lackluster on a couple. Either way this was a dope battle fellas. Good read.

Blue Bayou 07-20-2018 03:07 PM

I’m known for the homi, we stackin that number up for a reason
U don’t got a Body on ur side.. shit, Snatcher already passed u up dis season
pretty good with a nice personal edge, set-up well
I brought the gang in. Head shots is how we handle the clips
Multiple hammers bangin’ off ur roof like we puttin a patch on that bitch
mehh, it's dece.. I've personally never referred to a head as a roof, looking past that it's a pretty simple played hammer play w/out much extra
Discreet wit the heat n once u see it, believe heavens waitin
Wait til it’s dark b4 the clip show.. “it’s time for our feature presentation”
lol good swag here, clips / movie idea is tired but the flip was enjoyable
I let off that 50 shot wit 1 hand. Either u duck or u better run
Like a poor man tryna make the band.. bitch I bucket wit the drum
pretty cool gun bar here... cant help but feel like it could've been worded more directly at Dyna tho
I’m sick, run in ur crib n head shots have brains look like vomit
Totem pole shit.. That’s one Stick wit ur whole families face up on it
good closer, like the concept


vs.



Scary dream, I wake u up....grab the nine make this a scary scene
Machine with the lens! Shooting clips off the wall like it's a projector screen
set-up well and a cool meta in general, this is worded s&f'ish tho I feel like the wording doesn't make it very impactful .. need to get after the more than one syllable multi
Metal Scope! Attach it to the laser arm, It need it's own room for biz
Magnify the body..when beams aiming from the attic-Honey, I Shrunk the Kids
lol, cool swag bar and again I like the meta but the punch is light to me due to the wording
You the type to trace some shit! I go an buy the artillery with a stolen card
Stick raise watch him stop..then wave 5 in his direction like a crossing guard
niiiice, good attack line
Will Ferrell-Room full of drums, i dare you try to step brother
Bullet graze his New Era, have his fitted hanging side ways-T.I Trap Muzik Cover
okay pretty dece attack line here... the step brother play has been done a lot which kindve takes away from the bar a bit imo, that said the drum tie in was flipped cool... like the meta on the gun bar
5 across his temple-the arm start bending..look like a marines corp salutin
Nicholas Cruz the 9mm! When I take em 2 school it ain't a mass florida shootin
dece nameplay.. the 9mm / school shooting seems easy but it was effective nevertheless


LoL I figured this would be an all out gun bar battle and it definitely was... pretty tough to call tbh as u both had some decent swag bars that were cool but a bit on the light side, and were pretty even conceptually... I think the deciding factor for me with it being so close and only a 5 bar battle is the wording & delivery, Creds was way stronger to me which gives him the edge.. Dyna u should really try and up ur multi game past one syllable, not a huge deal but it will make ur punches smoother imo..

Props to both... Cred edged it

DMS 07-21-2018 12:11 PM

I got Dynamicz here, he had my fav bars of the battle. His Honey Shrunk the Kids and Projector bars won it

V/ Dynamics

bleak 07-25-2018 02:08 PM

@Cred that ones up to you this shit needs votes but that vote ass lol
@Flow @Killing Spree @For Battling @Schadenfreude @Jabari Black @Twodrop @Barcotic

Can we get this closed? Just a quick thing I'm sure they aren't worried about Cronus level breakdowns

bleak 07-25-2018 02:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 684332)
I brought the gang in. Head shots is how we handle the clips
Multiple hammers bangin’ off ur roof like we puttin a patch on that bitch
Discreet wit the heat n once u see it, believe heavens waitin
Wait til it’s dark b4 the clip show.. “it’s time for our feature presentation”
I let off that 50 shot wit 1 hand. Either u duck or u better run
Like a poor man tryna make the band.. bitch I bucket wit the drum

Sick of stick lines or that last one would have made the cut too. that feature presentation was heat, I like creative shit like that.

Quote:

Originally Posted by DynamiCz (Post 684380)
Metal Scope! Attach it to the laser arm, It need it's own room for biz
Magnify the body..when beams aiming from the attic-Honey, I Shrunk the Kids
5 across his temple-the arm start bending..look like a marines corp salutin
Nicholas Cruz the 9mm! When I take em 2 school it ain't a mass florida shootin

I feel like 5ths at the side of the face has ruined any wave the 5 bars for me I always think of Schad lol. The TI shit was just too basic, his hat leaning off his head? Ill man I think it's cause I read ur shit 2nd and I was burnt out on gunbars, let's try this the other way around.

I still got Cred here, quotes were strict no one missed completely. Good battle very close

Cred

takemtwoschool 07-25-2018 04:10 PM

yo give my mans @DynamiCz that dub so yall can get these playoffs going

Aero 07-25-2018 04:12 PM

Yea good battle.

Light off the wall like projector was niiiice.. magnify too... feature presentation nice too.

bleak 07-25-2018 04:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 686362)
yo give my mans @DynamiCz that dub so yall can get these playoffs going

1hun


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