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Pharaohs Army 07-11-2018 01:50 AM

quickish
 
Are You fronting?
Are you just gonna do nothing?
I'm never intimidated.
My text will leave you incinerated.
I write quicker.
I'm a rhyme wizard.
It's about time you delivered.
You don't wanna go there; Your ideas lead to nowhere.
It's not supposed to be this hard
to write three or four bars...
?Can I get a witness to back me up,
that I am better than half these chumps.
Most of what they say is nonsensical.
Their lack of skill is indefensible and reprehensible.
N i'm from New York but not a fan of the Yankees.
The shitty rhymes you post, make me cranky.
So I grab two guns and You Run!
Speaking of guns,
You dumb tards think you stunt hard
All i see is the same ol' gun bars.
I'll fuckin'
Rhyme the beginning of the line like I WAS Lars.
Don't make me Catch another charge.
Homey i can flow for days and you can't see that far.
So, I guess this just a flex piece
I'm a bragger who stays relevant.
The swagger is self-evident.
Activate the magic potion.
Rap can wait; you bastards think I'm jokin'?
Slow down on the drinks, and smokin'
Now look what I've done set in motion.

Exis 07-18-2018 02:05 AM

Yep...your better than me.

ACTIVATE SELF 07-18-2018 01:12 PM

You said absolutely nothing of substance, bro. And I dug it. Every word. Simple; but potent. With an ample amount of undercover wit and nonchalance embedded beneath the surface.

Quote:

I'm a rhyme wizard.
It's about time you delivered.
You don't wanna go there; Your ideas lead to nowhere.
It's not supposed to be this hard
to write three or four bars...
?Can I get a witness to back me up,
that I am better than half these chumps.
Most of what they say is nonsensical.
Their lack of skill is indefensible and reprehensible.
N i'm from New York but not a fan of the Yankees.
The shitty rhymes you post, make me cranky.
So I grab two guns and You Run!
Speaking of guns,
You dumb tards think you stunt hard
All i see is the same ol' gun bars.
Lol. Don't play with matchs, bro. You can fuck around a burn something down.

I like this.

neutral 08-07-2018 07:35 PM

Decent freewrite.


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