WK 9: Incredible 2-2 vs. Twodrop 5-3 - TWODROP WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JULY 6th! and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:

• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@Twodrop @Incredible

chek

12

12 is good

@Incredible

Ayo,

Got no-showed my last battle...U hit me up like "who u want next?"
Sent u a shit emoji & now we're here...I assume u got the context
U pale Racist hick...Pull the burner out n' suppress this guy's breathin'
Put a Foreign his face - Make him uncomfortable for ALL the right reasons
N ur Talent? I do Nazi it... S'medics needed when I burn ur concentration
Since he gas'd up I'll curb stomp his enthusiasm if Hebrew up confrontation
Fking cuck w/ a 'Braveheart'...Wifey callin' cuz I fuck the bitch proper
U gladly signed the slut over on wedding night w/o enacting Primae Nocta
Got a Holy pump that'll lift ur soul up...Saving this man'll be simple
Exorcise the shotty til' this pussy screamin' 6 voices like Anneliese Michel
40-year old virgin...lives at home w/ moms but u ain't gotta stress son
U'll hit ya stride soon & be knuckle deep in pie...next time auntie requests 1

12

I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives
Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you
I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go
Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk
You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker
Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent

twodrop:
opening four was nice, the rest kind of seemed like and overflow of those heavy punches.. you caught the pace again you delivered in closing bar but it is alot of weight lost in the time through out..

incredible:
a little more quirky then twodrops, and good name play.. word choice all sweet and delivery on point.. good punches all in all dope piece..

vote = incredible

Got no-showed my last battle...U hit me up like "who u want next?"
Sent u a shit emoji & now we're here...I assume u got the context

Lmao, funny opener

U pale Racist hick...Pull the burner out n' suppress this guy's breathin'
Put a Foreign his face - Make him uncomfortable for ALL the right reasons

This didn't sting to much here

N ur Talent? I do Nazi it... S'medics needed when I burn ur concentration
Since he gas'd up I'll curb stomp his enthusiasm if Hebrew up confrontation

Coo here

Fking cuck w/ a 'Braveheart'...Wifey callin' cuz I fuck the bitch proper
U gladly signed the slut over on wedding night w/o enacting Primae Nocta

I didn't rock with this one

Got a Holy pump that'll lift ur soul up...Saving this man'll be simple
Exorcise the shotty til' this pussy screamin' 6 voices like Anneliese Michel

Nice jab!

40-year old virgin...lives at home w/ moms but u ain't gotta stress son
U'll hit ya stride soon & be knuckle deep in pie...next time auntie requests 1

Lol funny

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I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives

Nice opener, alittle stretched on the last line, but still cool though

Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you

Lmao, oh yall want to be funny in this battle huh? Good one

I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go

Ehh, wording messed the last line up...

Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk

Lmao, Fiya!!!

You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker

This was ok

Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent

Wording didn't really make the closer sting out like that. Line was decent tho!


This was a funny ass battle an you both had some good jabs in here. You both had one miss each in my book, Standout bars I got Two with the "Anneliese" line and Incred on the Honda Civic trunk line. Two with two misses & Incred with One & a half miss, very close battle.


V-Incred

Got no-showed my last battle...U hit me up like "who u want next?"
Sent u a shit emoji & now we're here...I assume u got the context
lol
U pale Racist hick...Pull the burner out n' suppress this guy's breathin'
Put a Foreign his face - Make him uncomfortable for ALL the right reasons
light
N ur Talent? I do Nazi it... S'medics needed when I burn ur concentration
Since he gas'd up I'll curb stomp his enthusiasm if Hebrew up confrontation
cool line
Fking cuck w/ a 'Braveheart'...Wifey callin' cuz I fuck the bitch proper
U gladly signed the slut over on wedding night w/o enacting Primae Nocta
ehh
Got a Holy pump that'll lift ur soul up...Saving this man'll be simple
Exorcise the shotty til' this pussy screamin' 6 voices like Anneliese Michel
dope, maybe lotb
40-year old virgin...lives at home w/ moms but u ain't gotta stress son
U'll hit ya stride soon & be knuckle deep in pie...next time auntie requests 1
st8


I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives
st8
Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you
lolol
I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go
ehh
Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk
cool line
You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker
decent at best
Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent
cool closer

I got Twodrizzle here with a close one. His Excorism line was dope and the deciding factor for me. Good battle fellas

Got no-showed my last battle...U hit me up like "who u want next?"
Sent u a shit emoji & now we're here...I assume u got the context

(Lol bruh this nigga Twodrop is funny. Good opener)

U pale Racist hick...Pull the burner out n' suppress this guy's breathin'
Put a Foreign his face - Make him uncomfortable for ALL the right reasons

(The wp is cool but you didn’t close it out strong enough imo. ‘Make him uncomfortable for all the....’ wasn’t strong enough tie in imo. This is just okay)

N ur Talent? I do Nazi it... S'medics needed when I burn ur concentration
Since he gas'd up I'll curb stomp his enthusiasm if Hebrew up confrontation

(This is pretty good. I don’t think the nazi wp was particularly good but you had enough word association/wp to carry the bar. Hebrew up confrontation was simple but i liked it)

Fking cuck w/ a 'Braveheart'...Wifey callin' cuz I fuck the bitch proper
U gladly signed the slut over on wedding night w/o enacting Primae Nocta

(Hmm this was okay. ‘Cuck with a braveheart’ is a forced tie in imo - kinda just thrown in there to make the punch land. It was okay though)

Got a Holy pump that'll lift ur soul up...Saving this man'll be simple
Exorcise the shotty til' this pussy screamin' 6 voices like Anneliese Michel

(This is a good concept. ‘Screaming 6 voices’ once again is just kinda thrown in there to make the punch work. Exorcise this shorty is kinda slick. Overall I think this was okay too)

40-year old virgin...lives at home w/ moms but u ain't gotta stress son
U'll hit ya stride soon & be knuckle deep in pie...next time auntie requests 1

(Kinda funny. Not as effective as the opener. Somewhere between okay to light jab)



I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives

(Dang this was nice but you kinda...fumbled (lol) the punch at the end. You prob shoulda found a way to end the line with ‘my line out two in the dirt’ and built the punch around that because that part was slick)

Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you

(This was just okay. Not a bad angle but you needed to do more here. As is, it felt kinda basic)

I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go

(Hmmm this was real light. I thought the ‘flat out refusing to go’ part would have been a miss but I think you had enough tie ins to make it decent. Gaining traction a little subtle tie in - I see you)

Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk

(This is pretty nice. Idk if you can consider the seats ‘rolled up’ but I’m giving you the pass. This is a good name flip)

You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker

(I liked where you were going with this but the execution let you down here)

Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent

(This was light at best. The punch was extremely basic imo)

This was a good battle. A lot closer than I expected. Two has been flying under the radar and had been trending upwards for a while. Between this league and the 1-2 league, incredible has been getting better and better as well.

Two, you’ve GOT to keep up the jokes and humor. That certainly can be a signature style for you. I think you def got the talent to become top tier if you keep working on your execution and wording.

Inc, this was a dope showing bro. You’re def getting better. You’ve had some dope concepts you just gotta iron out the kinks when it comes to wording. You def had some dope stuff like the Honda line.

Overall, this was a good battle. I got two drop with a few less misses and edging this battle.

Mvgt Two

Vote on this shortly. I’ll edit post

Got no-showed my last battle...U hit me up like "who u want next?"
Sent u a shit emoji & now we're here...I assume u got the context
lol cool I liked this
U pale Racist hick...Pull the burner out n' suppress this guy's breathin'
Put a Foreign his face - Make him uncomfortable for ALL the right reasons
nah the foreign wp is overused + it wasn’t done good here
N ur Talent? I do Nazi it... S'medics needed when I burn ur concentration
Since he gas'd up I'll curb stomp his enthusiasm if Hebrew up confrontation
lol come on man this is like 2002 wordplay, I can’t give it credit
Fking cuck w/ a 'Braveheart'...Wifey callin' cuz I fuck the bitch proper
U gladly signed the slut over on wedding night w/o enacting Primae Nocta
nah
Got a Holy pump that'll lift ur soul up...Saving this man'll be simple
Exorcise the shotty til' this pussy screamin' 6 voices like Anneliese Michel
decent at best
40-year old virgin...lives at home w/ moms but u ain't gotta stress son
U'll hit ya stride soon & be knuckle deep in pie...next time auntie requests 1
bro what? No

Vs


I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives
i don’t get what you were going for or how this makes any sense
Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you
decent personal
I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go
ummm wasn’t feelin
Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk
i don’t get it
You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker
no
Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent
nah


If I’m being completely honest this wasn’t a good battle. I’ve seen both of you drop a lot better and both of these verses feel like neither of you wanted to do this battle. Twodrop had 1 good and 1 Decent while incredible only had 1 Decent. I really didn’t get a lot of the shit you all were dropping tbh but maybe it just went over my head.


Vote Twodrop

vs

Incredible
I'm glad we finally head to head but listen bitch I am not a nice guy
My line put Two in the dirt, get dropped for the score, we ain't slappin high fives
decent but wording hurt it
Quiet at first now makin dumb posts like "shit no one bumps dude!"
Its ironic cuz when I saw it in the disc. forum...It made me think of you
no
I'm gaining traction here you already hit your peak, and losen it slow
Its getting pumped lately really just a car with no gas, flat out refusin to go
again, no
Murder scene in full effect both you and ur bitch get the ticket bruh
So when I'm cruisin with Two rolled up that's a full Honda civic trunk
dece
You think its Humerus when these clowns jump ship, Ahoy Sailor!
Rip those bones out then put my teams logo on it, I'm a real noise maker
weak attempt
Had a chance for the champ match been falling off ever since
Inc the God, take ur blessings another way...nothing you wrote was heaven sent
whack

0 gd punches
2 jabs
4 misses

v/2D