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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPaBa...ature=youtu.be


Just a banger I cooked up awhile back. Cant wait to drop all this shit but I'm impatient so here's one for my NCG's. Feedback is always great whether good or bad


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@Hush @El Muffin @Ghost1 @Genocide @For Battling @Destroyer @Knucklehead @uh-oh @Amen @Lenox @who ever listens to rap music lol

You are improving with every track.

Flow, presence and delivery bro. Props.

Only negative feed I have is the beats to slow for you, again but you managed to ride this one out fairly well with some minor hiccups.

Keep at it man. Dope shit.

Mic presence is on point

I like it
The chorus needs more
Like other laughter maybe
An actual joker sample would be dope, like the first time you hear ledger’s laugh in the dark night. It probably fits too. I think the cadence is pretty similar to your chorus
Dope shit

The 9, I ain’t talkin bout my little brother


Like hush said you have good mic presence and delivery, flow, and lyrics on point. Sometimes I can’t tell I whether you’re black or Spanish but at some points you can definitely tell you’re spanish. Kinda remind me of the male cardi b

40 to the head leave a bitch nigga wasted sheeeesh

If you have this on Spotify I’d definitely add to my playlist. Beat was perfect and you rode it well. Yo you’re gonna make it, because if anyone has what it takes or fits the image on this site to get big in rap it’s you tbh. Text battling definitely helped you be as good as you are because it shows in your lyrics and delivery etc. So you’re at an advantage.

If you wanna use my beast wars bar on your next song please feel free.

Ha ha ha hook was the only thing I felt weird about. Oh and never rap about killing cops we’re good people

Needs more cop killing tbh

^^ agree w/ this.

Track was fire. Props

You don’t sound like you believe what you’re saying. That’s not an easy thing to do. Even if you do have conviction, it’s difficult to repeat it when you know you’re performing. It’s why rappers make decent actors.

FACTS

@Destroyer that sounds dope, talkin bout the laughter behind the chorus. Gonna try n make that happen.

fuckin gone @ more cop killing lmaoooo


@dullboy i should try rapping some shit i don't actually live then to try and convince my audience?

Not what I said.

To expand on what destroyer said, I would say almost every line should have laughter [ha ha ha] at the end. And for the extra chorus laughs maybe some random diabolical movie laughs on top of your own

Cred?
Ya this shit.dope.homie. cred though? Didnt realize u made a name change. Uf not.its similar and i rocks with this

I feel what @dullboy saying though. A little more umph behind your conviction. IDk. Whenever i have used to have a hard time with that id just repeat the shit over and over again with as much swag as possible until i found something.close.to the desired feel. Its all about feeling yourself basically. Not that you dont actually live this shit. Just that you have to say that shit like you believe in it more than anythi g out there. Cocky, raps rocky shit.

Anyway. Content flames as usual (if this is cred). If not still good. 1

growing on me
keep doing u