Hood Telapathy
 

Tryna find the beauty in the ugliness/
Black people disturb your calm no longer my tongue resist/
It’s like the spirit of death beds in this jungle gym/
I made my bed now the reprocussions is bugging friend/
Like Bed bugs..... tossing and turning sleepless nights/
The day’s Agrivation crawls in my ego mind/
Gotta settle this now the hood telepathy/
80% communication stood mentally/
The swag in your walks all the hood needs to know/
... about your status esteem good grief it shows/
Call it a paranoid disorder - the aura attracts demonic spirits/
I scare my boys, Lord I lack trust - my logic errored/
Who’s my enemy, devil schemes on my sense of hearing/
Making the lips on men, a deceptive weapon - eerie/
Distorting their words to agrivate my heart/
The goal is death or in jail thru agrivate assault./

I'm not sure why you do this /? If it's there to signal the end of the line, got it but its not needed...it's pretty easy to tell where things close off man...I'd do away with that tbh.Thought your wordin' is a little up & down, same as the multies...for me personally that took away from the flow...havin' said that I like the emotion & imagery, it's like you have all this detailed shit in your mind yet when transferrin' that to a piece the transistion isn't a smooth one, you have good concepts & you can obviously rhyme, I've commented on stuff of yours a few times pretty favorably as I recall...just need to tidy things up fam.

Stay upwards yeah.

Yeah i liked this.....

the reprocussions is bugging friend
not a fan of the spelling or phrasing here

80% communication stood mentally
huh?

agrivate
twice spelled wrong


You can do better than this man I've seen it before.

Wasn’t for you.. doesn’t mean it’s not good.