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Incredible 06-18-2018 10:39 AM

WK7: Barcotic 1-1 vs. Tic 0-0 - Barcotic WINS!!
 
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@Barcotic @Tic

Barcotic 06-19-2018 12:59 PM

yo

Tic 06-19-2018 03:51 PM

Yooo....12-14?

Barcotic 06-19-2018 03:53 PM

Tic vs. Barcotic
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Tic (Post 675714)
1 year off and Barc my first opponent. Smh.

ya

ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am
im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars
haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again
a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes
plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battlebots
ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it
said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an outlet

Barcotic 06-23-2018 12:34 AM

@Tic

Tic 06-23-2018 09:10 AM

My bad for being late, fell asleep.

Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play
AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol
And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop
I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream
Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced
I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower
Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber alert

DMS 06-23-2018 02:21 PM

Hmmmmmmmm, before I get into the specific bars, lemme just say Tic had the multi game easily this battle.

Tic edged it. His first couplet was one of the best in the battle. Multi game was allot more consistent. Some lines on Barcot’s just didn’t land with me.

V/ Tic

Bongo Bear 06-23-2018 05:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic (Post 675505)
ya

ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am

Nice nameplay.

im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars

Good nameplay to a movie reference. Nice.

haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again

I like how the ending was phrased but, the concept itself feels underdeveloped in this bar.

a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes

Lmao, this is nice. Solid wordplay.


plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battlebots

I was just watching a couple of battlebot videos yesterday and thought "If I had a bar about this people are never going to get this nerdy ass reference." Then I see this. Lol. Props for the reference. It's a nice punch.

ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it

Wordplay is nice, decent punch. Wording can make it better.

said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an
outlet

A little weak here imo. But, the whole verse was mad consistent. Nice read.


My bad for being late, fell asleep.

Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play

This is pretty good. Kinda has a twist to it. Nice creativity.

AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol

Nice


And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop

Lmao. I didn't really feel this but, I appreciate the originality. Multi's on point to.

I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream

Solid.

Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced

Light.

I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower

This is ok. A little underdeveloped but it's solid.

Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber aler

Lmao, hard to type when you just woke up aint it? The ending is good. Would've tried to developed this a little more. It still holds up either way imo.

This was a good battle. I was surprised at the creativity of both battlers. My vote goes to the battler who was more consistent/diverse throughout punch wise.

V/Barcotic

BodySnatcher 06-23-2018 09:37 PM

.

ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am
st8 opener
im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars
yeah, i like this
haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again
lol but light
a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes
eh
plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battlebots
nerdy dope
ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it
w/p is slick but the line is soft
said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an outlet
st8



Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play
lol fresh
AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol
fuck with it
And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop
nice w/p, line is just ok tho
I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream
nice
Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced
eh
I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower
cool but light
Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber alert
st8 closer


This was a close tight battle, I only didn't like 1 bar from each guy. In the end it comes down to fresher harsher shit and I think Bar did that, slightly. This is the first I've read from you Tic, it was dope and I look forward to reading more.
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GUDELJ 06-24-2018 07:44 AM

ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am
didnt like this
im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars
more of a SnF line and the ticket wp been used on him, either way this was ok
haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again
alright
a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes
ok
plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battle bots
i had to look this up and it was a pretty good bar
ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it
good wp but punch itself was weak
said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an outlet
lol no

This verse was the type of verse that “gets by because the wordplay works” but none of the lines really hit hard or stuck out. You kinda just solely relied on wordplay to make the punch wholesome, some of the wordplay was weird too. I didn’t quote them as misses because they work but they weren’t great.

Vs


Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play
i don’t get this one bit
AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol
this was fire
And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop
wtf no lmao
I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream
nice
Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced
had potential but fell short by how you did it. Miss here
I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower
ok
Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber alert
no, this was lazy and it’s obv you put this here just to finish the verse

After reading your border patrol and white head lines I thought you were gonna take this, both of those were the best lines of this battle. But aside from that you had a good number of lazy misses such as your closer, had you dropped a better closer or at least another good line you’d have probably won.


Wasn’t really a huge fan of this battle tbh, barc OD’ed on wordplay again and some was good and some were forced and weird. Tic could have came up with a win but was lazy and came up short on a few lines, giving him more misses than Barc. Tic definitely had the stronger hits but there weren’t enough to credit him the win. So barc wins.


Vote Barcotic

DynamiCz 06-24-2018 12:35 PM

ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am

Coo opener

im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars

Light, but I like the wording

haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again

Lmao this was fiya

a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes

Nahh

plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battlebots

Decent

ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it

Nice

said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an outlet

Not to big on the closer

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Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play

This was ok for the opener

AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol

Wording here nice, punch itself might be a little played

And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop

Nahhh b

I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream

Nice

Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced

Lmao

I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower

Nahh fam didn't like this one

Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber alert

Could have worded this way better for execution so it missed bro

Props to both, I see Tic gone be coming with the heat he just have to shake the rust off of course. Barc you the wordplay king lol, you had some nice hit and misses in there, but I seen way harder verses from you. Good shit to both, I got Barcotic by 2 bars

V-Bar

Blue Bayou 06-24-2018 04:30 PM

Cool battle and good read here, both had an assortment of good punches

Bar - i liked pretty much everything except the closer, and thats only cuz i like the concept and think more could've been done with it.. its still a cool line

Tic - lmao at the woodwork bar, that was a funny flip to me and hit.. liked moat except Conjure as i dropped a way better bar with the same wp in the tag battle against orc and cred (imo), white head played and didnt like the closer.. pretty solid throughout tho


On the whole i personally really liked Bars verse and think he killed it... tic dropped nice but consistancy wise ive got Bar bere.. props to both

Jabari Black 06-24-2018 10:12 PM

I’ll edit in a bar by bar breakdown later but for now:

This battle was fire imo. First time reading Tic but dude really knows what he’s doing. Really good showing but Barcotic was on one in this one.

I feel like some people aren’t a fan of Barc’s style but he does what he does very well. A lot of very clever wp throughout. Didn’t really have any of the obscure wp that kinda haunts your verses from time to time.

Both verses were dope but Tic has a few misses in there. Barc capitalizes with a slightly more consistent verse and was able to edge the win.

Mvgt Barcotic


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