WK 6: Twodrop 3-2 vs. Lenox 2-1 - Twodrop WINS!!
 

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@Twodrop @Lenox

Check 12

yup

dropping early, 8.

ur comps low tier nobodies > the reason no one believes in him.
Cuz the only spree u faced last week was the continuation of easy wins.
robbin voters of their time, u got a tedious style that reeks shit.
think iTunes remastered albums.. cuz all he does is take a dated concept & tweaks it.
show up to his fgt rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.
Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in

Look,

Stop talkin like u bang guns when u're begging for male snapchats
Nigga, the only strap u've worn was going to school on ur backpack
Unemployed since ya dropped out, u'll never be a winner dude
Let's be real...Even Veritas ignored your application for an interview
I'm Yoel Romero w/ the right. One punch might break ya jaw
If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw
N I won't hesitate if u try to test, Gang life when I whip out the tecs
U'll wish u was locked up when u see the strap on my ankle like house arrest

I got lenox here pretty sure much more clever didnt resort to even talking about stupid fucking shit...... the other guy was nice but lenox was better sorry..... yeah....

Vote: lenox

I have Twodrop here. I liked his last 2 lines, thought they were pretty good. Lentil was creative and the better of the 2. I really wasn't feeling much of anything from Lenox. None of concepts were real creative and the wording wasn't harsh.

V/ Twodrop

Lennox:

rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.

fav line.. tight subtly open lines with good carriers and the punches were bubbly.. nothing over the top but the swings were nice, you kept them coming..

TWo:

dope all one line punches.. very impressive very close range.. some tight personals in there.. all in all dope..

vote = Twodrop

Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in

Good. The imagery is nice.

If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw

Nice wordplay, a little iffy but it still works for me.

Two drop was more consistent overall for me with punches.

v/ Twodrop

ur comps low tier nobodies > the reason no one believes in him.
Cuz the only spree u faced last week was the continuation of easy wins.

Coo

robbin voters of their time, u got a tedious style that reeks shit.
think iTunes remastered albums.. cuz all he does is take a dated concept & tweaks it.


Decent here

show up to his fgt rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.

Nice

Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in

Ok here


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Stop talkin like u bang guns when u're begging for male snapchats
Nigga, the only strap u've worn was going to school on ur backpack

Played, but worded coo

Unemployed since ya dropped out, u'll never be a winner dude
Let's be real...Even Veritas ignored your application for an interview

Lol funny

I'm Yoel Romero w/ the right. One punch might break ya jaw
If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw

Light Jab here

N I won't hesitate if u try to test, Gang life when I whip out the tecs
U'll wish u was locked up when u see the strap on my ankle like house arrest


Kinda seen this before, but again you did word it nice



Coo battle here peeps, Lenox you just got to get that structure up right and a little better creativity, Two drop your verse was a coo read as hell, props to both


V-Two Drizzle

Lenox first two line were st8 at best and his last two line could have been fire if they were harsher/worder better.

Two had Veritas, lol, and Lentil which i thought was dope/fresh. Closer couldve been better but was effective.

I got Twodrizzle in a short easy read fun battle. Good shit fellas

ur comps low tier nobodies > the reason no one believes in him.
Cuz the only spree u faced last week was the continuation of easy wins.

(Dang this has potential but you need to do a bit more with this for it to land)

robbin voters of their time, u got a tedious style that reeks shit.
think iTunes remastered albums.. cuz all he does is take a dated concept & tweaks it

(Hmmm okay. This was decent)

show up to his fgt rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.

(Not bad. Had to read this again. The wording probably wasn’t as concise as it should have been which made it a bit harder to understand but I’m seeing some creativity)

Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in

(Like the concept again. The execution was off though)





Stop talkin like u bang guns when u're begging for male snapchats
Nigga, the only strap u've worn was going to school on ur backpack

(Too basic imo. Gotta get more creative than this)

Unemployed since ya dropped out, u'll never be a winner dude
Let's be real...Even Veritas ignored your application for an interview

(This was a pretty funny personal)

I'm Yoel Romero w/ the right. One punch might break ya jaw
If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw

(This is pretty good. The wp came off nice)

N I won't hesitate if u try to test, Gang life when I whip out the tecs
U'll wish u was locked up when u see the strap on my ankle like house arrest

(Good as well. Could have executed it a bit better. The ‘wish you was locked up’ part seems forced just for the tie in. Overall this was pretty cool though)

Fairly close but Twodrop did enough to get the dub. Lenox has been improving. The concepts have been getting better and better. I think you just gotta polish up your wording because you had the more creative concepts imo - just gotta make your punches come off cleaner.

Two drop has been flying under the radar but you’ve been locked in recently. I don’t think the 8 line battles play to your strengths but you were able to bring a personal, nice little clever wp, and your punches landed a bit harder.

Mvgt: Twodrop

ur comps low tier nobodies > the reason no one believes in him.
Cuz the only spree u faced last week was the continuation of easy wins.
i liked this. Cool
robbin voters of their time, u got a tedious style that reeks shit.
think iTunes remastered albums.. cuz all he does is take a dated concept & tweaks it.
nah wasn’t feelin this, choppy
show up to his fgt rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.
mmm barely decent here
Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in
this is pretty cool

Vs


Stop talkin like u bang guns when u're begging for male snapchats
Nigga, the only strap u've worn was going to school on ur backpack
nah didn’t like this
Unemployed since ya dropped out, u'll never be a winner dude
Let's be real...Even Veritas ignored your application for an interview
ok
I'm Yoel Romero w/ the right. One punch might break ya jaw
If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw
ha this was good
N I won't hesitate if u try to test, Gang life when I whip out the tecs
U'll wish u was locked up when u see the strap on my ankle like house arrest
alright not bad

This was close for me. I only had to go against the grain and vote lenox but twodrop edged it out barely. The lentil line saved him. Cool little battle here, Lenox you already know you potential is there, keep working bro.

Vote Twodrip