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...so I recorded this, but I'll just drop the lyrics for now.

Eve “bit” the apple that made us all sin
Then Steve invents an Apple that gave us all “gigs”
If the Devil is an asshole then IBM
The Verizon is an eyeful of light that’s dim
I don’t write with pens I just type then send
A G-Male to females that might just live
A short Waze away from where my IP is
I can Skype with friends or FaceTime ya bitch
(A nice way to say make her taste my dick)
Then I Sprint to the bank to keep my Bitcoins safe
Or Pay-Pal quick for an Instagram of yay
My Twitter finger's Twitch'n as I’m AIM’n @ ya brains
Tidal waves full of blood if these AKs spray
Samsung the Blues - “A Change Gone Come”
Now I YouTube the youth .. rainbow punks
Donald Trump tried to fund a firewall of hate
For a nation full of chumps who ain’t never been “great”
He Sony’s ta pump .. his muthafukin breaks
'Fore he gets us all crushed by sum Uber sized tanks!

I really enjoy the consistency and wordplay associated with the topic. It's an interesting take on the subject matter, and I'm rather excited to hear the audio. As for the lyrics that could use work, your biggest problem is stretching the wordplay.

If the Devil is an asshole than IBM
The Verizon is an eyeful of light that’s dim

Not sure if you mean that or then in the first line, considering both could work in different contexts. You could mean the Devil is a bigger asshole than IBM or mean if the devil is an asshole > IBM is something. Also, the ending of that second nod needs a little tweaking for rhythm's sake.

Then I Sprint to the bank to keep my Bitcoins safe

This line is a stretch, considering cryptocurrency is an unregulated, non-recognized form of currency. You would not be going to the bank to keep your bitcoins safe, unless you're investing them through the bank. If this is the case, then that reference will likely be overlooked.

My Twitter finger's Twitch'n as I’m AIM’n @ ya brains
Tidal waves full of blood if these AKs spray

He Sony’s ta pump .. his muthafukin breaks

That Sony wordplay is a strettttttttttttch.


Overall, I loved this. I found it entertaining as hell and pertinent. There isn't much to really fix here.

I actually meant "then" as opposed to "than". And the wordplay should read as I.Be.M (as in I am him/'em).

All true and I'm very familiar with how crypto-currency works. The line above was more so about me being silly and interacting within the tech like world that I was trying to illustrate (so to speak), as well as a multi-play on coins, bank and safe/safe and how they are all interconnected - minus the digital concept behind the former.

You think "Sony's ta" and "so needs to" is a stretch? I thought they sounded virtually identical to one another.


Thank you, sir. I thoroughly appreciate your feed, your time, your thoughts and your kind words. Respect, bro. Peace.

Double post. Delete.

Did you really record this? if so then I have failed you as a friend.
this has some dated stuff & references anyone could get &...
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Samsung the Blues - “A Change Gone Come”
Now I YouTube the youth .. rainbow punks
Donald Trump tried to fund a firewall of hate
For a nation full of chumps who ain’t never been “great”
He Sony’s ta pump .. his muthafukin breaks
'Fore he gets us all crushed by sum Uber sized tanks!

really..?

alright its smooth but come on...come on man
you cant be serious, try a different concept man.
something that would seem more out of left field
you got that flow down decent but get complex...if you recording it I mean