WK2: bleak 1-0 vs. GUDELJ 1-0 - GUDELJ WINS!!
 

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@bleak @GUDELJ

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crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
ok
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
didnt get it?
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
could be worded better
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
nah


My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
meh
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
nah
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
alright, played a bit
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
nah

good shit on showin fellas...I got GJ winning barely in a weaker battle with not much too quote but again at least you guys showed and gave people something read.

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
coo WP even if stolen from disc
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
So your saying ur accurate w/ a gun? Because it'll hit him W/O the lawyer being dead? I didn't get it, if I did, it's reach
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
light
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
You coulda played the cleft angle harsher imo, this line was ok

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
na...
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
didn't get the boof tie-in, nah
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
ook
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
this missed for me

I have bleak winning here. I thought his wording was a little harsher, and his opener was LOTB for me, played or not. Decent showing for both. I feel GUDELJ is slacking, and bleak did enough to take this one.

bleak

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
ok dope wordplay creative

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
this was worded weirdly I didn't get the finisher

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
dope

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
ok jab

gudelj

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
this didn't hit wasn't sensible a lunch lady with chrome in her smile?it didn't refer to every lunch lady

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
didn't get the concept here

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
pretty played hit

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
nah

this was an ok battle GudeJ had all misses to me just felt like the hits weremt there. Bleak had a cool opener good wordplay. the preaching to the choir bar was pretty dope also. I'm gonna give this to bleak because his two hits were enough consistenly to take take this.

V/bleak

vs

Bleak
crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
israel=played, palestine=dope despite it being bitten from a recent discussions thread title. decent overall
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
miss, this was awkward
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
sort of a reach to make this concept work but aight, average gun bar here
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
liked the concept but hated the wording. ill give it a pass tho

0 gd punches
3 jabs
1 miss

close
v/gj

vs

v/Zelph - Actually had a bar I enjoyed. Wasn't really feeling bleak verse at all. Had maybe 1 or 2 concepts but failed to effectively execute them.

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up

Coo opener

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u

Didn't get this one fam

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip

Nice!

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.

Ight closer here!

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My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady

Nahhh

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!

Tawkkkk

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces

Nice

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

Dope!!

This battle is fairly even until you get to Zelph close out bar on his verse. That Akbar line was crazy fam and it kinda gave you a haymaker to a win here imo. Nice read on both ends. Bleak verse was nice too, had some bars I didn't quite understand which gave me the miss for him. Props!

V-GJ

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up

(Yeah this is fire. You almost caught the short end of the stick cus Enbomz had the same Isreal wp, but the Palestine wp is nice and the tie ins were good)

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u

(Dang you was on to something but the punch fell a little flat. The set up alone was almost Don Demarco worthy with the Judge lawyer flip but like I said punch wasn’t quite there. This was decent)

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip

(Pretty good. Probably prob could have used a better phrase that had a more direct tie in to the video than ‘30 come off the hip’ but you had a lot of tie ins)

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.


(Eh not too bad but felt kinda all over the place. Okay closer)



My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady

(Pretty good opener. I liked this one)

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!

(Sorry I didn’t catch this one)

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces

(Simple concept but I liked he punch. Good line.)

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

(Lol dope way to close. I think the fact that bleak went all gun bars and he fact that it’s Ramadan made this hit hard lol.)


This was a good battle esp. for only 8 bars. Bleak’s were a bit more complex but I think that was a double edge sword. I liked all the tie ins but they also made a couple of his punches seem a bit scattered b/c his wording wasn’t extremely crisp. I do think he set up his punches a bit better than Zelph though and his concepts were a bit more ambitious and as a result came off as more creative. I think Bleak slightly edged this one.

Mvgt: Bleak

Good showing from both of y’all though. Salute.

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
like he Palestine flip, and I get theres a thread...but seen too many Isreal in the day for this to be a quote... like 20+
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
hmm, dece
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
cool concept, needed to word it harder & at him
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
nah

vs

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
okay okay
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
nah,
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
the 'straight' flip i okay but this has been done.. and ur third gun bar in a row in an 8 line battle is no bueno to me
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
dope...


Okay short battle.... to me there is 2 dece wordplay flips by both guys, but GUD has by far the best bar here.. i have a similar w/p never got to use it, never will now haha... that edged it

V/ GUD

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
(pal 'll stine your wife up? i dont like the israel wp..done too much)
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
(ok)
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
(idgi)
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
(nah)

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
(kinda like this)
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
(fuck no)
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
(decent flip on old concept)
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
(fuckno)

v/gudelj

what were u saying w/ the closer? like ak's bars? eghhhhhh
I get the akbar/ blow up in your face part but the wp itself is Eghhh

anyways..v/zelph lookin at my breakdown

Bleak's opener sealed the deal...He also out punched his opponent, not by much...but enough.

Vote - Bleak.

7-4 in flavor of GUDELJ

vS

close af battle but edging it to Zelph for having two haymakers.

Vote zelph