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ill nik-A 05-10-2018 10:31 PM

Lyric Olympics: Blue Bayou(C) vs. Destroyer (SWAG & FLOW!!) - OPEN FOR VOTES
 
Where the winner/ champion decides the following week’s format.

Rules:
Participants will get an invite via PM and must respond within 24 hours or I’m moving on to the next.

This will all take place in the discussion forum. Matches, verses and votes.

If you no-show you’ll be banned from the Discussion forum. NO EXCUSES. You accept this when you agree to battle.

Votes should have a brief explanation but I’ll take what we can get to keep things moving.

Line limit is 24, 16 minimum (but i'm flexible)
First to 5 votes (must win by two)


Verses due Wed at 12am ET.
Votes due by Friday at 12am ET.

@Blue Bayou
@Destroyer

Format champion chose: swag n flow

Blue Bayou 05-11-2018 10:58 AM

Cool ... 16 good?

Destroyer 05-11-2018 11:48 AM

Yes sir

Blue Bayou 05-16-2018 10:32 AM

Ready Freddy

Destroyer 05-16-2018 12:38 PM

Hahaha ok I’ll start writing

Blue Bayou 05-16-2018 09:47 PM

do NOT pursue me.. ya gf's hot & screwy with a camera sayin “cop some nudies”..
..got photos Balls-deep inner twat & booty, with a ‘White Film, on the Sack’ like the Plot of Rudy
i drop it truly.. pick ya poison - choked & scarred or smoked & charred..
..faggot not only to do I go so hard, i always keep 'at least 3 Misses’ like a vote from Bar
you may wanna duck right now before i dump five rounds when I bust nine's loud..
..yaaa i'm talkin like a tough guy pal, cuz being dope is ‘2nd Nature’ like the Upside Down
don't touch my crown, when i target & maul it's PURE carnage in brawls..
..they say Northern Lights is the hardest to haul.. but still that ‘Dro-gon Get Blazed’ no Dracarys involved
ain't got the heart or tha gall.. u’ll taste the nine right before i take what’s mine..
..& shortly after i retire as a great with shine.. i’ll smoke deGrasse w/ Neil, baked n’ high talkin space & time
don’t waste your rhymes.. my lines are better, spines get severed when it’s time for cheddar..
..honestly i'll be in my prime forever, with 'Full-bodies in my Cellar' like a Wine Collector
shoot lead at u herbs.. flow melodic so demonic straight deadin you nerds..
..Tony Soprano season one, ahead of the curve.. i'ma 'Boss, Poolside throwin Bread at some Birds'
so fall back fast… the Rugers always goin mental s’why i called that Spazz..
..& once I finish sippin on this Malbach Razz, i’m throwin rappers in front'a Coltranes for talkin All that Jazz

Destroyer 05-17-2018 12:31 AM

des is ridiculous yo. don’t have to try to be def
got that perpendicular flow. So it’s only right that u left
got to brawl w/ this asshole? Nik, are u serious???
u can call me Picasso. Cause I’m done with blue period.
u were told to fear him in scrolls found locked in ancient older pyramids
Wolverine with a vibranium upgrade and a shot of super soldier serum kids
I was already smarter before I upgraded my hardware. It’s hard being the martyr
Grab ur face & scream when hit w/ the transmutation beam from my Asgardian armor
u got no horse in this race. No doubt u try & fucking hurt me
but I’ll only see blue blood like I’m in the crowd at the Kentucky Derby
My logic? If it jumps off - it gets stopped quick.
I’m caustic. I’m John Wick if he just shot dicks.
I bleed venom that goes airborne as soon as it touches nitrogen
so if he’s lucky enough to slice the skin, the faggot’s fucked if the knife goes in
ridicule. I call him x-man cause I’m not sure he IS a dude
& they’ll call me Beast when they see me use a single shot to get rid of blue

yzeOne 05-17-2018 08:13 AM

do NOT pursue me.. ya gf's hot & screwy with a camera sayin “cop some nudies”..
..got photos Balls-deep inner twat & booty, with a ‘White Film, on the Sack’ like the Plot of Rudy
good open
i drop it truly.. pick ya poison - choked & scarred or smoked & charred..
..faggot not only to do I go so hard, i always keep 'at least 3 Misses’ like a vote from Bar
other than calling him a faggot, where's the diss here?
you may wanna duck right now before i dump five rounds when I bust nine's loud..
..yaaa i'm talkin like a tough guy pal, cuz being dope is ‘2nd Nature’ like the Upside Down
clever, but again... where's the diss?
don't touch my crown, when i target & maul it's PURE carnage in brawls..
..they say Northern Lights is the hardest to haul.. but still that ‘Dro-gon Get Blazed’ no Dracarys involved
again... the punch here is that you smoke weed..? grats on that... no diss though
ain't got the heart or tha gall.. u’ll taste the nine right before i take what’s mine..
..& shortly after i retire as a great with shine.. i’ll smoke deGrasse w/ Neil, baked n’ high talkin space & time
did I miss something? is this a topical battle?
don’t waste your rhymes.. my lines are better, spines get severed when it’s time for cheddar..
..honestly i'll be in my prime forever, with 'Full-bodies in my Cellar' like a Wine Collector
listen, I can handle boast lines, but you haven't dissed him since the first bar
shoot lead at u herbs.. flow melodic so demonic straight deadin you nerds..
..Tony Soprano season one, ahead of the curve.. i'ma 'Boss, Poolside throwin Bread at some Birds'
sigh... again... no diss... this one wasn't even particularly clever
so fall back fast… the Rugers always goin mental s’why i called that Spazz..
..& once I finish sippin on this Malbach Razz, i’m throwin rappers in front'a Coltranes for talkin All that Jazz
didn't like this, wasn't a strong closer, and didn't diss the opponent

Blue... there's a bunch of clever bars here... flow was on point... but you only attempted to diss your opponent, with a punch, on one bar... the opener... I reread the thread thinking maybe I missed it and this is like a swag battle or something. If this was going on an album or something... ok... I liked a lot of the flips... but you can't win a fist fight by telling your opponent how much weed you smoke and how great you are fighting... you have to fight... as a verse, however, it's clearly better constructed and a better read...



des is ridiculous yo. don’t have to try to be def
got that perpendicular flow. So it’s only right that u left
this just doesn't make any fucking sense... perpendicularity is how close to a 90 degree angle something is... could have called hi ma square or something here, wouldn't have been original or anything but it at least would make sense
got to brawl w/ this asshole? Nik, are u serious???
u can call me Picasso. Cause I’m done with blue period.
I think this could have been worded better... but it's a really dope reference for a nameplay
u were told to fear him in scrolls found locked in ancient older pyramids
Wolverine with a vibranium upgrade and a shot of super soldier serum kids
um... ok... no diss, flip, or... why is this here?
I was already smarter before I upgraded my hardware. It’s hard being the martyr
Grab ur face & scream when hit w/ the transmutation beam from my Asgardian armor
...put....down....the...comic...book...... step away
u got no horse in this race. No doubt u try & fucking hurt me
but I’ll only see blue blood like I’m in the crowd at the Kentucky Derby
meh, wording isn't good, not a particularly clever punch or reference
My logic? If it jumps off - it gets stopped quick.
I’m caustic. I’m John Wick if he just shot dicks.
there's no diss here... I don't know why I like it, but I do... hmm
I bleed venom that goes airborne as soon as it touches nitrogen
so if he’s lucky enough to slice the skin, the faggot’s fucked if the knife goes in
filler
ridicule. I call him x-man cause I’m not sure he IS a dude
& they’ll call me Beast when they see me use a single shot to get rid of blue
good closer, decent concept

Destroyer... had a couple really creative name plays, but there was like... a weird amount of comic book filler in the middle of it... I was irritated with the lack of disses in Blue's verse and was looking for a way to vote in your favor... but there's 3 obvious filler bars and your opener doesn't make any fucking sense...


VOTE - Blue Bayou... he won a fist fight by telling his opponent how much weed he smokes and how great he is... I wanted to vote for Destroyer because he brought a battle verse to the battle... but it was a bad one... so... just for lyrical quality, Blue gets the vote

Blue Bayou 05-17-2018 08:53 AM

^^^lol at is this a topical battle or something.... the format is Swag & Flow


*sorry for the freepost, just clearing that up

Destroyer 05-17-2018 09:10 AM

Looool
Fucking swag and flow

yzeOne 05-17-2018 09:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 664900)
^^^lol at is this a topical battle or something.... the format is Swag & Flow


*sorry for the freepost, just clearing that up

Oh...

...why's this up for votes then?

If this was a swag and flow competition Des got absolutely annihilated... I mean no hate Des... but yea

That DOES explain a lot though haha

Candy 05-17-2018 10:40 AM

BB:
do NOT pursue me.. ya gf's hot & screwy with a camera sayin “cop some nudies”..
..got photos Balls-deep inner twat & booty, with a ‘White Film, on the Sack’ like the Plot of Rudy

LOL nice opener multi-punches hot*

i drop it truly.. pick ya poison - choked & scarred or smoked & charred..
..faggot not only to do I go so hard, i always keep 'at least 3 Misses’ like a vote from Bar

Sweet switch on the flow bracketing the opener quite nicely..

you may wanna duck right now before i dump five rounds when I bust nine's loud..
..yaaa i'm talkin like a tough guy pal, cuz being dope is ‘2nd Nature’ like the Upside Down

meh

don't touch my crown, when i target & maul it's PURE carnage in brawls..
..they say Northern Lights is the hardest to haul.. but still that ‘Dro-gon Get Blazed’ no Dracarys involved

good recovery..

ain't got the heart or tha gall.. u’ll taste the nine right before i take what’s mine..
..& shortly after i retire as a great with shine.. i’ll smoke deGrasse w/ Neil, baked n’ high talkin space & time

ehh soo soo but aite

don’t waste your rhymes.. my lines are better, spines get severed when it’s time for cheddar..
..honestly i'll be in my prime forever, with 'Full-bodies in my Cellar' like a Wine Collector

general punch nice

shoot lead at u herbs.. flow melodic so demonic straight deadin you nerds..
..Tony Soprano season one, ahead of the curve.. i'ma 'Boss, Poolside throwin Bread at some Birds'

filler

so fall back fast… the Rugers always goin mental s’why i called that Spazz..
..& once I finish sippin on this Malbach Razz, i’m throwin rappers in front'a Coltranes for talkin All that Jazz

tight finisher..

D:

des is ridiculous yo. don’t have to try to be def
got that perpendicular flow. So it’s only right that u left

meh very old school

got to brawl w/ this asshole? Nik, are u serious???
u can call me Picasso. Cause I’m done with blue period.

tight

u were told to fear him in scrolls found locked in ancient older pyramids
Wolverine with a vibranium upgrade and a shot of super soldier serum kids

c+ it def had flavor to it, that bar..

I was already smarter before I upgraded my hardware. It’s hard being the martyr
Grab ur face & scream when hit w/ the transmutation beam from my Asgardian armor

lol

u got no horse in this race. No doubt u try & fucking hurt me
but I’ll only see blue blood like I’m in the crowd at the Kentucky Derby

worse line ever..

My logic? If it jumps off - it gets stopped quick.
I’m caustic. I’m John Wick if he just shot dicks.

lol

I bleed venom that goes airborne as soon as it touches nitrogen
so if he’s lucky enough to slice the skin, the faggot’s fucked if the knife goes in

another too cool for school line..

ridicule. I call him x-man cause I’m not sure he IS a dude
& they’ll call me Beast when they see me use a single shot to get rid of blue

ehh alright nothing special

VOTE: Blue Bayou

more structured, tighter and better rhythm as a whole..

good luck..

Aero 05-17-2018 03:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by yzeOne (Post 664903)
Oh...

...why's this up for votes then?

If this was a swag and flow competition Des got absolutely annihilated... I mean no hate Des... but yea


That DOES explain a lot though haha



This wasn’t competitive in the slightest.


BB - white film on the sack was dope// degrassi space & time was cool// full bodies wine collected flowed really well// Coltrane one of my fav jazz artist so good reference.

This was pretty good. Only thing was the rhyme schemes became predictable.


Des - I almost stopped reading at its only right you left almost.// likes the Picasso painting ref line was ok// scrolls and pyramids you tried to channel your inner topical head, that’s not you//




V/BB

Destroyer 05-17-2018 09:50 PM

Sweet, I was hoping candy and yzeOne would vote
Good shit blue
I remember now why I don’t do swag and flow battles

El Muffin 05-19-2018 04:10 AM

& this is why i declined the snf battle lmaoooo

smart move..considering i dont write snf either

probably would be good at it..but it would require me to really play around w. approaches n im too lazy for all that lately

ill nik-A 05-22-2018 09:58 AM

Blue wins!


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