WK 1: Enbombz vs. DynamiCz - Enbombz WINS!!
 

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@Enbombz @DynamiCz

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12 is good

This man just actor, he don't want trade hands with the master
A man of my seismic..It'll feel like u got hit by natural disaster
I've alwats kept 100, the minute you stepped in you fucked it
This such a clean body you'd swear amens wife out here preppin its lunches
And your poor as fuck, house boarded up, you ain't got any clout,
If your seeing the big bucks, it's a series of flashbacks of Nik stomping you out
Best stay quiet. I got that Gun to ya head you try speak n you dead
Bro I'll leave you with more shells on the brain, than Geno's food thread
I stay mean with it "this ain't America" you ain't gonna beat this Brit
You ain't blowing anyone's mind with ya fruity angles, this ain't a Gambino vid
You get embarrassed each week, so you taken me boy? that's a no no
On the wrong end of back to back bodies, your basically the Kappa logo

Semi tucked..no silence! The muzzle dangle from the shirt
Alarmed? Fire the whip, the shells rang off his license plate--amber alert
You like to argue, I can tell by the replies you sometime text
Not me! Mid convo, drop bombs live in the mix--funkmaster flex
Surround sour joog, the stick hit his body knocks the sweets out ya
He break apart, stuff leakin! Other half still hung to the rope--piñata
You? No threat, nike headband...sign language for dome check
Good aim, I unload this mill on a bomb--feed the homeless
The cal will spread, casket resized..just to pack up his legs
Drugged the body, he suspended from the box in like Canelo Alvarez
Masked up, crouched low in the dirt my moods a umpire
In public, when you feel this heat rise from the ground--it aint a bonfire!!

I really like this battle. I may edit this with vote later.

This man just actor, he don't want trade hands with the master
A man of my seismic..It'll feel like u got hit by natural disaster

(I thought the ‘seismic’ wp was a nice nameflip but the punch just wasn’t there imo. This was just okay)

I've alwats kept 100, the minute you stepped in you fucked it
This such a clean body you'd swear amens wife out here preppin its lunches

(Lol funny. Thought the set up coulda been a bit better...’the minute you stepped in you fucked it’ just seemed like a phrase to make it rhyme...unless thats some phrase y’all use across the pond lol. I thought it landed though)

And your poor as fuck, house boarded up, you ain't got any clout,
If your seeing the big bucks, it's a series of flashbacks of Nik stomping you out

(I missed the reference on this. Prob something before I got here)

Best stay quiet. I got that Gun to ya head you try speak n you dead
Bro I'll leave you with more shells on the brain, than Geno's food thread

(I like this line. If I’m catching the reference right, ‘shells on the brain’ is a bit of a stretch to mean shellfish for your brain or whatever. Idk if that made sense lol. I still thought this was a creative way to flip that - clever punch imo.)

I stay mean with it "this ain't America" you ain't gonna beat this Brit
You ain't blowing anyone's mind with ya fruity angles, this ain't a Gambino vid

(Fire! You set that up slick af. Dope line.)

You get embarrassed each week, so you taken me boy? that's a no no
On the wrong end of back to back bodies, your basically the Kappa logo

(Decent closer. Probably needed one more tie In to really make it land hard)




Semi tucked..no silence! The muzzle dangle from the shirt
Alarmed? Fire the whip, the shells rang off his license plate--amber alert

(Yeah this is fire. Dope opener)

You like to argue, I can tell by the replies you sometime text
Not me! Mid convo, drop bombs live in the mix--funkmaster flex

(This is dope too. Creative af)

Surround sour joog, the stick hit his body knocks the sweets out ya
He break apart, stuff leakin! Other half still hung to the rope--piñata

(Yeah this nigga really spazzing right now. Crazy. Literally every part of the set up relates to the punch and the punch itself was dope.)


You? No threat, nike headband...sign language for dome check
Good aim, I unload this mill on a bomb--feed the homeless

(This was pretty cool. The meal/mill flip is cool but everyone does it. I liked the bum/bomb flip. I did like the lil punch in the set up too)

The cal will spread, casket resized..just to pack up his legs
Drugged the body, he suspended from the box in like Canelo Alvarez

(Nice. Suspended from the box/suspended from boxing is a slight stretch but I thought it was fine. The punch was set up well plus the ‘drugged the body’ tie in.)

Masked up, crouched low in the dirt my moods a umpire
In public, when you feel this heat rise from the ground--it aint a bonfire!!

(Nice closer. The setup was a pretty solid punch within itself.)

This battle was FIRE...a straight bar fest. Both had crazy haymakers - Enbombz Gambino bar and Dynamicz piñata bar will prob be two of the best bars of the week.

Enbombz had a very dope verse but Dynamicz left Earth this week. No bad misses from either but Enbombz had a reference I didn’t catch and his opener though decent wasn’t as good as the other material. All of dynamicz punches landed imo and those first 3 punches back to back were crazy. I got dynamicz taking this one in a dope battle. Salute to both y’all.

Mvgt Dynamicz

This man just actor, he don't want trade hands with the master
A man of my seismic..It'll feel like u got hit by natural disaster
(should of incorporated a tremors..tie in..just felt like it needed moie than just size mic..n natural disaster. its ok tho)
I've alwats kept 100, the minute you stepped in you fucked it
This such a clean body you'd swear amens wife out here preppin its lunches
(i kinda like this... considering we all are under the impression amens wife is a strong one..she wears a livestrong wristband n wears copper fit. LMAO..this shit goes hard actually)
And your poor as fuck, house boarded up, you ain't got any clout,
If your seeing the big bucks, it's a series of flashbacks of Nik stomping you out
(big bucks? hows that refer to being stomped out)
Best stay quiet. I got that Gun to ya head you try speak n you dead
Bro I'll leave you with more shells on the brain, than Geno's food thread
(nahah the shells play /food is hella dated..needs a fresh flip)
I stay mean with it "this ain't America" you ain't gonna beat this Brit
You ain't blowing anyone's mind with ya fruity angles, this ain't a Gambino vid
(good)
You get embarrassed each week, so you taken me boy? that's a no no
On the wrong end of back to back bodies, your basically the Kappa logo
(meh)

emi tucked..no silence! The muzzle dangle from the shirt
Alarmed? Fire the whip, the shells rang off his license plate--amber alert
(i like the rang off his license plate part..but the concept in itself..is kinda eh..like shots bounced off his license plate..mmm ok..you missed essentially..yknow..points for creativity tho)
You like to argue, I can tell by the replies you sometime text
Not me! Mid convo, drop bombs live in the mix--funkmaster flex
(ehh)
Surround sour joog, the stick hit his body knocks the sweets out ya
He break apart, stuff leakin! Other half still hung to the rope--piñata
(pretty cool..could of been executed much better..than the pause...Pinata part)
You? No threat, nike headband...sign language for dome check
Good aim, I unload this mill on a bomb--feed the homeless
(mmmm ehh)
The cal will spread, casket resized..just to pack up his legs
Drugged the body, he suspended from the box in like Canelo Alvarez
(pretty good)
Masked up, crouched low in the dirt my moods a umpire
In public, when you feel this heat rise from the ground--it aint a bonfire!!
(heard fire to your camp like koombayah,,,this bonfire play was nothing special tbh..heat rising from the ground..was eh ok...orc had a bonfire playi liked too)

i got enbombz here

relatively close battle...i think bombz 2 outdid dynamics tho..it was pretty much tied in notable bars..gonna lean towaeds enbombz for having the slightley better 4 lines of the two participants

v/enbombz

I'm a little conflicted here tbh...firstly I think both held their own, it was a great pairin' & from the other battles I've read this is by far the closest...I originally thought En, then was nah Dynamicz...then went to Bombz, so Idk.

I think both verses are tight...guess it just comes down to who I'd wanna read again, & for me that's Dynamicz shit so my vote goes to him...

Sorry En, dope clash though...stay uppity.

This man just actor, he don't want trade hands with the master
A man of my seismic..It'll feel like u got hit by natural disaster
dope wp, no one would call him Mic but i'l accept it.. could've been real dope with better wording
I've alwats kept 100, the minute you stepped in you fucked it
This such a clean body you'd swear amens wife out here preppin its lunches
haha, pretty gd
And your poor as fuck, house boarded up, you ain't got any clout,
If your seeing the big bucks, it's a series of flashbacks of Nik stomping you out
missing the connection here. mehh
Best stay quiet. I got that Gun to ya head you try speak n you dead
Bro I'll leave you with more shells on the brain, than Geno's food thread
I get the site reference, but this still feels too played
I stay mean with it "this ain't America" you ain't gonna beat this Brit
You ain't blowing anyone's mind with ya fruity angles, this ain't a Gambino vid
lol damn, pretty nice
You get embarrassed each week, so you taken me boy? that's a no no
On the wrong end of back to back bodies, your basically the Kappa logo
damn pretty cool concept here, very creative.. dig it

vs.

Semi tucked..no silence! The muzzle dangle from the shirt
Alarmed? Fire the whip, the shells rang off his license plate--amber alert
pretty cool concept here, but as an attack line (which it is) it falls flat
You like to argue, I can tell by the replies you sometime text
Not me! Mid convo, drop bombs live in the mix--funkmaster flex
coolish concept, but the diss is he likes to argue and u don't? this is more s & f to me, punch lacks
Surround sour joog, the stick hit his body knocks the sweets out ya
He break apart, stuff leakin! Other half still hung to the rope--piñata
pretty dope here, setup well... imo sweets-out & pin-yacht-a doesn't work as hard as im trying to make it work but ill let is pass cuz the concept is dope
You? No threat, nike headband...sign language for dome check
Good aim, I unload this mill on a bomb--feed the homeless
hmm, im missing the bomb/homeless conncetion here
The cal will spread, casket resized..just to pack up his legs
Drugged the body, he suspended from the box in like Canelo Alvarez
geeze again I like the fresh concept here but how does his casket resizing apply to being suspended from it? I dunno sorry, it just seems like a etter tie in was needed imo
Masked up, crouched low in the dirt my moods a umpire
In public, when you feel this heat rise from the ground--it aint a bonfire!!
mehh pretty played idea , seen similar concepts done better


Cool battle, some pretty ncie concepts throughout here... En edged this imo, felt he executed better and his last 2 bars were dope gamibno lotb to me... props to both

Vote - Enbombz

Enbombz:
"I stay mean with it "this ain't America" you ain't gonna beat this Brit
You ain't blowing anyone's mind with ya fruity angles, this ain't a Gambino vid"

"I've alwats kept 100, the minute you stepped in you fucked it
This such a clean body you'd swear amens wife out here preppin its lunches"


DynamiCz:
"Surround sour joog, the stick hit his body knocks the sweets out ya
He break apart, stuff leakin! Other half still hung to the rope--piñata"

"The cal will spread, casket resized..just to pack up his legs
Drugged the body, he suspended from the box in like Canelo Alvarez"


Overall this was a really good battle both had an overall good verse I really liked both, I quoted two from each but with the whole amens wife shit being played out for me it still gets me laughing and shit and the bolded line above about it I think is the best use of the troll in a battle so far. With that being said MVGT - Enbombz....props to both for showing and thanks for a good read guys.

I have Enbombz here.
Gambino was cool, closer & amen wife
seismic was ok..

verse was cool overall, stepped it up

Dynamicz -- liked canelo line.
pinata -- dope concept
some of the execution fell flat..
Opener had alot goin on but was men
needed tweaking.


V -- Enbombz