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Geno 04-29-2018 12:19 PM

The Swaggabond Cappadon
 
I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse
Destroy a whole crew -not a morsel of force, a horseman, a ghost
An orphan who wrote, swung excalibre, thrust my sword in the stone
Important to know, gave my cell phone to e.t. to call homies
Im springstein and bon jovi, a winged demon, invoke me
Grody, ugly as fuck, youd think my father slings semen at poultry
Cant stand how the chickens that i see him with know me, as loki
Devil god of the jest, obsessed, horns like triceratops on my head
Gothic, a mess, and other times shine like photo optics instead
Robotic in bed, diabolical sex, C-3P0 with a golden cock by my legs
Insomnias friend, well -probably more like ive got a problem with rest
The dark knight of gotham -robin, nightwing when i chop at ur text
Open mic topical death, im unfuckwithable when i rhyme with intent

Pussies

Exis 04-29-2018 09:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 661076)
I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse

^^Fire...

The whole piece was tbh just thought that section was Ill as fuck, stay upwards G.

Lenox 04-29-2018 10:21 PM

We gotta collab, Chief

2tripple0 04-30-2018 02:29 PM

Dont like it couldnt get into it

Amen 04-30-2018 09:50 PM

We know. You much rather someone fucking you like a faggot, eh? Lol

MMLP 05-03-2018 09:35 AM

@Genocide yo that's a good read man, I enjoyed that! Mixed content, just mainly focused on rhyming like a beast! good shit overall!!

Do more! it'll inspire me to go!

Just Write 05-04-2018 03:00 PM

Geno, as always fire man. Good to see you and a few more people are still active af around here. First part exis quoted was just stupid good. Wanna hear the audio brotha

Witty 05-04-2018 04:39 PM

I always fuck with a Genocide verse.

This was seriously dope.

ACTIVATE SELF 05-05-2018 03:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 661076)
I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse
Destroy a whole crew -not a morsel of force, a horseman, a ghost
An orphan who wrote, swung excalibre, thrust my sword in the stone
Important to know, gave my cell phone to e.t. to call homies
Im springstein and bon jovi, a winged demon, invoke me
Grody, ugly as fuck, youd think my father slings semen at poultry
Cant stand how the chickens that i see him with know me, as loki
Devil god of the jest, obsessed, horns like triceratops on my head
Gothic, a mess, and other times shine like photo optics instead
Robotic in bed, diabolical sex, C-3P0 with a golden cock by my legs
Insomnias friend, well -probably more like ive got a problem with rest
The dark knight of gotham -robin, nightwing when i chop at ur text
Open mic topical death, im unfuckwithable when i rhyme with intent

Pussies

^You started going in where the quote begins and held it there to where quotations end.

In other words this entire verse was fire. I legit didn't want it to be over nor could I find a spot to break it down due to how nasty it was all around. Your flex game is real gawd. I enjoyed this one a lot.

Geno 05-09-2018 08:00 PM

Thanks everyone. Preciate ya

Wutzit Tewya 05-12-2018 12:34 PM

Man this fuckin fire. The "war with my words/porcelain verse" lines stood out to me...but all around nice the whole way through. Gave my cell phone to E.T. to call homies...lmmfao

Eŋg 05-20-2018 05:27 PM

i liked this.


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